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Originally posted by: LuvSSever
Hi dear..
Thank u so much for this Os on Raya.. I loved it...Seeing all your Os on raya on balh tracks, i think oh why you werent in ekta's creative team of balh😆On a serious note ,your tracks are more enjoyable and sensible than the insensible tracks those cvs ditched out...I am happy to see you writing Os on such tracks,where it had loop ,loose ends,ended abruptly or left unattended..one such was ur previous Os on pihu track...similar was this office track...Yes ,how priya accepted easily😆, ram didnt manofy her and she didnt even came to know at all tht ram trusted her..and he was the one to catch rishi...all left midway...even priya's identity to office staffs...Ok, enough of my mind talks..😆Now coming to Os...nicely written naseem..such unneccesary drama between raya was what hooked us always😳😆So again loved this drama between them...Behind their fight and makeup ,there was sensibility in it..Typical raya was potrayed in Ur scenes...I culd imagine RaShi...and reminscinised raya again..Oh and the scene ram took her by showing his right ..inside the room, and ramji just only kept hand to shushh priya this time and to mk her listen to him😆I thought something more😛😆.. ...ok ok i know it wasnt the right moment,wht he did is only sensible and keeping hand on lips alone is enough to drool over raya if shown in epi...😳😆Both the reactions of ram and priya went well with their characters and so finally office staffs also came to know she is mrs.Ram kapoor...Then now tho, i expect another part where indirectly mrs.kapoor is teased by her office frnds...and raya scene again... if u hv decided to write one more part,i wuld be happy😊
thanks Uma for big comment 😆 I am greedy for long comments...pehle sirf malati, sharan n VJ used to give long comments but wid 2 members out it was only malati n now u hv joined her 😆
i recently watched office track hence yeh khayal aaya and also to reach ur story i hv to clear my mind of whole stuff 🤣
do not expect MORE from me 😆
i will do write next part...i actually thought before only k may be everyone will ask further plot but i was determined to say NO 😆 sadly one of the new friend had hit my weak nerve n I cannot say no so i will write, i hv to write😆
Kumkum Bhagya
