Raya FF : WHEN PASSION IGNITES Part 19 on page 145 (20/1) - Page 113

super duper hit n hot update. lovely. how beautifully u have described the love, intimacy, priyas shyness, ram bold and caring towards Priya. absolutely superb
and most importantly I like nehas dialogue. jhakkas.
thanks for pm pl continue[/QUOTE

Originally posted by: PeehuAggarwal

I know I'm late in commenting but I think I'm the one who read it nearly more than 50times since it was posted.

It was sooo hot and aesthetically pleasing

Sooo good Yar

I loved this sentence Before I give you my body, I gave u my thoughts, my mind and my dreams Mr.kapoor and whatever happened between is precious and I'm too blessed to have you in my life.

Too good

U are an amazing writer

Don't ever stop writing,a sincere regards

Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

It was so hot and tempting romance where RaYa were exploring each other in more intimate way. Beyond love and romance nothing matter to Ram and he is ready to wait like a good husband for this next step for Priya sake but she too want her husband as he wanna love his wife.

But seems lots of teasing is on the way from the siblings of RaYa and especially Neha who has came to know from Krishnaji about love birds are still locked in their green room making love. Beautiful written dear and thank u for the pm.

Originally posted by: DeekshaShikri

So good writer

It's too hawwt

Perfect consummation writing

And waiting for the next part eagerly

Originally posted by: LAdyLoveSAkShi

what can I say

beautiful beautiful beautiful

penned down wonderfully.

romantic update full of Raya

really passion ignites

Please continue soon

Thanks for PM

Originally posted by: leena04

awww awesome previwe I guess they r consummate their marriage with the deal of their love but need full & detailed update to know batter way... I loved Neha' s teasing so much awww poor KK she made her blush too... but last part was too good can't wait to read next moving on for it...

Originally posted by: leena04

awww what an update dear... Ram's demand to take shower together I know where it is heading lol... finally tow soul met in great creation of good... They finally accepted each other in all sense they r now just belongs to each other from heart... from soul from mind... & from body they r just for each other now... this was the really beautiful way u described it so nicely I just loved it... now coming to Neha's teasing part & KK understanding for RaYa both were awesome n exilantly executed in very cute way I really liked it now can't wait to see Neha teasing Priya n leaving her being all beetroot red all the time in thoughts of Ram... awesome can't wait for next do post soon...

Originally posted by: leena04

n plz make new thread as thread 2 for this story as per the rule of IF no thread should be longer then 150 pages so plz post the new previwe in new thread of the story...

Originally posted by: Mitwaa

Hot update
Waiting for next update

Thank you so much people for these lovely comments