OS- Pyaar tere peheli nazar ko salaam last part B pg 20 9th feb 2016 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
superb yaar. I am loving this Priya . I just love her character. the way she is teasing ram...yaar I so loved this type if Priya.
bechara ram.. Bach nahi payega Priya k pyaar se. akhir ek din pyaar ho hi jayega.

very sweet n cute.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice episode.
Priya is a Completely different person.
Your writing is awesome.
Please continue soon.

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Superrbb update..
Plz continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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( os ) pyar tere pehli nzar ko salaam..

Part 3

by Arayna Kapoor

priya going out from rams cabin and said...to herself...I love u my khadoos...per tumhe tang krne Ka Bht mja ata hai kya kru or spacialy jo log mujhe challange dete hai unhe to mai itni asani se Jane he nhi dete or apne to bht kuch ker diya...mujhe thapad bhi Mar diya mera dil bhi le liya ab mere boss bhi bn gye...to mera itna hak to bnta he hai Mr.kapoor..no no Mr.khadoos ya yhi hai unka naam...abhi to kuch nhi Mr.khadoos agge agge dekho hota hai Kya...then she talk to her frends on phn...after some time she enter in ram cabin without knocking

ram - in angry tone tumhe itni bhi tamiz nhi Ki kisi k cabin mai Jane Se phle knock kr lena chahiye...

priya - kisi...!! Per ye to apka cabin hai na...

ram - so irritated...to mai kon hu...

priya - haww...!! Mr.khadoos Apko itna bhi nhi pta who r u..?? very bad and giggle..

ram - try to control his anger or thinks ram ye ladki tujhe hyper ker rhi hai or tu ho rha hai jitna irritate hoga utna jada tujhe tang kregi plz calm urself my boy well done... and he sweetly looking at her or said ya I know I m the ram kapoor..but kuch chipkali (lizard) type k log khadoos or angry bird bhi bolte hai...now priya angry hearing this or said...

priya - how dare u to call me chipkali...and put her both hand on her waist...ram also standing and touch her nose tip or push him lil backward or said

ram - vase he jase tum mujhe khadoos or pta nhi Kya kya khti ho...chipkal and laugh...

priya - ohh really but ye to reality hai ki Ap khadoos ho look at urself bat krte hai to lgta pather mar rhe hai...

ram - to mai bhi to sach he bol rha hu...tum dhyan se mirror dekho kisi din...tum to chipkali Ki bichadi hue bhen lgti ho...

priya - grrr...shut up...!! or vha Se Jane lgti hai...ram hold her or pull her toward him...or said...

ram - ooo madam..!! kaha Ur my assistent bhul gyi..chalo apna kam shuru kro...or haan Na bolne vale or argue krne wale log mujhe bilkul psand nhi to zra dhyan se...

priya - smile fir to hm dono ki Bht bnegi Mr.khadoos...

ram - matlab ???

priya - matlab ki ye dono mere bht fav hai na bolna or argue krna...itna to apko pta chal gya hoga...and smile

ram - smile broadly...or said Mai Bht respect krta hu unki jo ase krte hai...hop u remember...

priya - laugh or said yes Bht ache se yad hai mujhe or apki vhi respect to mujhe yha tak le ayi hai Mr.khadoos...apka Vo andaz hme behad psand Aya...isliye to yha apk samne hu...

ram - I knew it sweetheart..!! badla to logi he...nagin and laugh...

priya - hehehe..!! coming near him...or pull him lil down holding his jacket...ram bend lil priya said in his ear..badla lena hota to mai use din le skti thi...I m karate champion Mr.khadoos and lightly punch on his stomach ...ram band ill more with pain or said...

ram - ouch...!! uff...pagal ho kya tum...mara kyu...sare karate mujh per he ajmaogi kya...or priya se thoda dur hoKer khada ho jata hai...and giving tight punch toward priya face..priya close her eyes tight..ram priya k face k pass aker phunch.. ko rok leta hai or said

ram - madam here is boxing champion...or smile atitudly...

priya - hmm good Mr.khadoos...khadoos hone k ilava apne kuch or bhi kiya hai khushi hue ye dekh ker...and giggle..

ram - mai to Bht kuch kerta hu...abhi apne dekha he Kya hai...but jaldi he jan jaogi...ab jao or vikram k cabin se ahuja n companies Ki file laker aao...

priya - Mai kyu jau khud le aao. ..mai tumhari noker hu kya..

ram - nhi mere assitent ho..

priya - ohh really tumhe sach mai lgta hai Ki Maine tumhari chmchagiri krne k liye ye sb kiya hai...

ram - ram said nothing or dail no.from office phn..

priya - what u doing ??

ram - andhi ho Kya...!! dikh nhi rha phn ker rha hu..

priya - ohh kise ker rhe ho...

ram - tumhare bap ko...he said very calmly...

priya - oh...then shocked or said kyu...papa ko kyu..??

ram - kahuga ki priya mere assitent nhi boss bnana chahti hai...ap plz use apni compney mai boss ki position dijiye...priya immidently snach phn from his hand or cut...and said...

priya - Bache ho tum jo papa ko complain kroge...vase bhi abhi mera mood nhi hai mai kal se join krugi office ok...now I m tired...mujhe rest chahiye so byee...

ram - ohh tever to dekho madam k assistent ho Ya meri boss...jo ase bat ker rhi ho...vase acha he hai kuch der chain ki sans lunga mai...and looking at priya or said ab jao bhi...but priya still standing or showing her chick to ram...

ram - kya itna psand aya ki fir se khana chahti ho...and giggle

priya - ager tum marna chahte ho to Mar do per mujhe kuch or chahiye...

ram - Kya? ?

priya - thpad Mara tha to marham bhi lgado...kissi ker do ek...and winks...

ram - ohh god pagal ho tum...dunga ek khich k daffa ho jao yha se...nhi to tumhe rat bhar yhi bandh dunga...and making angry face...

priya - khadoos...huh..and thinking somthing or said OMG vo kya hai pointing toward ram window..ram looking at window or priya kiss him on his chicks and running toward door ...ram immidently looking at priya angrily or shout uuu...priya showing her toung to him or said mujhe jo chahiye vo mai laker he rhti hu..and smile or said.. bye Mr.khadoos have a baddd day...or going out...ram said to himself...

ram - she is totally crake man..uff...Kya afat hai...!!or touch his chick...ab ye Kya nya drama hai...
in eve..
coffee caffe..
vikram and neha having coffee or talking about there life and so many things about there frends or family...both feel different or relex or cofertable...while talking with each other...both are extremely happy talking with each other...

vikram - neha I m so happy ki tum mere life mai ayi I mean 2 he din mai hm dono itne close ho gye itne ache dost bn gye hena...

neha - feel shy or said haan vikram Maine bhi nhi socha tha ki tumse bat krk itna acha lgega...I m also so happy...ki Tim jesa acha dost mila..is wakhat sach mai I need good frend I mean priya no smbhalne or smjhane mai u help me...kroge na...

vikram - afcos neha shure...ye bhi koi puchne ki bat hai...then both smile or looking at each other eyes or perfect eyelock...after some time both reach neha place...vik said bye to neha or both share friendly hug...or vik drove off toward ram place...

vikram reach kapoor mention...
ram setting in his entertainment or playing video game...vikram enter in entertainmnt ...room or said..

vik - Kya bat hai ajj di ram kapoor files chod ker video game mai lge hai..it's shocking hena...

ram - arre vik tu...aa na yar..Beth Chal dono khelte hai...both playing for some time and then going toward bar area or setting on chairs or said

vik - Bht din ho gye sath mai drink nhi ki..chal ek ek peg ho jaye...then both smile

ram - hmm shi keh rha hai...and both having drink together...ab bat kya ye bol..

vik - Koi bhi nhi bat Kya hogi...

ram - Tu mujhe nhi btayega...

vik - yar tu ok...I like neha yar...vo ladki bht achi hai...

ram - smile...pta tha mujhe so perpos kb krega...

vik - umm pta nhi kahi kuch galat na ho jaye I mean use bura na lge...tu smjh rha hai na...

ram - nhi vo bura nhi manegi...I m shure tu acha sa moka dekh ker perpos kerde..

vik - pkka na...

ram - yes pkka jada Der mat ker...now Chal or dinner krte hai...then walking toward dinning table...both having there dinner together and talking about office...

vikram - yar vo sudhir uncle ki bete ka kya matter hai..I mean use dekh ker tere expression he change ho gye the...

ram - ye vhi ladki hai jisne kal road per drama creat kiya tha or Maine thpad Mar diya tha...kal office ayi or mere assistant bhi bn gyi..

vikram - matlab??

ram - ram narrator the whole story..vikram lagushing like mad or said tujhe ek ladki ne pagal ker diya ram...hadd ho gyi yar and again laughing( just like abhishek) The RAM KAPOOR or ek ladki hahaha...!!

ram - very funny...!! ja daffa ho ja apne ghar subah jaldi Aa Jana yha se sath mai chlenge then vikram drove off toward his home...or ram coming to his room or thinking pta nhi kal kya Hal kregi mera pagal and laugh or after some time..he is sleeping peacefully...

priya room..
priya seeing her iPhone and smile she saw ram pic in her Phn or smile then kissed on her pic or said bas kuch der or...pta nhi kb kategi ye rat or kb Mai apka chehra dekhugi or kb sakun milega...or kb mujhe apko tang krne Ka moka milega and smile shipisly... but bht jald Apko smjh ayega ki how much I love u ram...and hug her phn...and sleeping thinking about ram...

precap- ram making priya a perfect desi girl...and priya Ka atayachar...!!


Guys sorry for update as it was christmas week so arayna was lil busy n ss i update in evening n guys plss comment on it n hit like button n if u want to add few things in os then pls share or u dont like pls tell us

Thank u all for love u hv gvn to her


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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
both parts are superb
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
As I said u r febuls writter ...lvly update dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Hey,Arayana nice os
superb
like irritating Ram
continue soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Very nice update.
Aranya you're such a good writer.
Waiting for your next update.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nyc...both ru arguing chmpon wd krte n bxng...priya irritated ram soo much...bechara...updt soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Superrbb update..
Love irritating ram..
Plz continue soon..

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