RaYa FF : Takdeer #THREAD-2# LAST UPDATE ON Page 72 - Page 45

Message from the writer

Hello Dear Readers,

Finally, Takdeer is coming to an end. I kept my identity anonymous and I want to continue the same.

I am glad so many people liked my story and I am very overwhelmed with your responses. First of all, I would like thank Neel for posting my story here. Thank you so much Neel🤗. I did not plan to post it as it has some sensible issues like Marital Rape, Domestic Violence...but she insisted to post it.

I started writing this story just for time pass but Neel suggested me to post this story here. I portrayed Ram in full negative shade at the beginning and I was not sure to post it here but Neel wanted to post it on my behalf.

I think this is the first story which got many negative comments. People started discussing about this story. Few people said "There is nothing left in this story. I am not interested anymore...one person said this story was a headache...other few said to show priya as strong woman and etc etc...

At that point of time, It discouraged me a lot ...I felt very bad and I decided to stop this story but then Neel supported me a lot and told me to ignore all these and she wanted me to continue the way I wanted to...She was correct. Interested readers were reading it. Few people stopped reading/commenting and I really didn't care about that it's their wish to read it or not.

The biggest joke I heard was one person said I copied this story from some so called serial...lol.. U should not comment on others when u urself copy from other sources. This is not copied from any of the serial or movies.

Any ways I got very good response to this story and I would like to thank all readers for liking and commenting on this. I read every of ur comments. Thanks to all.

Thank u Neel.

Thanks to my friends who helped me to take this story forward.

A small request to one person

If u feel this story is headache and don't want to comment on this story, then please don't ask update of other FFs or SSs in Takdeer Thread.

Here is the small Preview,

Ram is still sleeping. Priya decided to call Ram and she enter into her room.

Priya:- Yeh abhi tak so rahe hai...She goes near him and call him. But Ram did not response. She again calls him but he did not move and finally, she call his name loudly and shake his hand. She then touches his forehead and neck. Ram is running with high temperature. Priya become worried and called him but he is not moving. Priya held his face with her palm and shudder him a little.

Priya:- Ram uthiye na...Ram please uthiye na. She immediately called the doctor.

Doctor check him and gave him injection to settle down his fever. Priya still worried for Ram.

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Ram:- Kal jo tumne muje aur Esha ko dekha...I mean jo tumhe dhikane ki koshish ki jaa rahi thi woh sach nahi hai...trust me Priya meine kuch nahi kiya

Priya:- Mein janti hoon...I believe u Ram

Ram becomes shocked. He looks at her with mouth open.

Ram:- Kya kaha tumne

Priya:- I trust u...aapko muje kuch bhi explain karne ki zaroorat nahi hai

Ram felt very happy. Finally, she starts trusting him.

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She prepared kada and went to her room. She saw Ram is sleeping and Esha is sitting near him reading magazine.

Priya entered the room.

Esha:- Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho. Priya kept kada on the table.

Esha:- Yeh kya hai...Ram abhi so rahe hai aur uska fever bhi kam ho gaya hai...abhi inn sab ki zaroorat nahi hai. Mein kahungi tab aana...yeh jo bhi hai isse lekar jaao.

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Priya slowly takes his both hands and encircles his hands around her waist and entwine with her fingers. Her back touches his chest. She arched her body. Ram stunned with her actions. He knew if she continues like this soon he could not able to hold back himself. He tries to remove his hand from her waist but she tightens her grip on his hands resisting him to leave.

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Ram:- Priya r u sure u r ready for this

Priya nodded assuring him to continue.

Ram:- Priya muje bura nahi lagega agar tum mana karogi...but once if I start this I may not be able to stop.

Priya:- Complete me Ram.