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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
update tho Beautiful h hi lekin
story me bhut confusion h..clear it n
Plz continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
very nice update...
please continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Beautiful part Dee
Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
beautiful update
full of suspense...please reveal it soon
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Suspense continues.
ek aisa doctor hai jisko koi question nhi karta, but curiosity toh zaroir badhegi the way he is treating his patient.
good going yaar. Kab khulegi ye raaz.
thanksjfor the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
I like how the story is progressing ...mother n the baby both are fine 😊... still lot of suspense... waiting how the story unfolds from here .. good one sanju...
Plzz update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

First i was planning to write my other ff as someone wants that but thought to end it fast then i can think about the other one.. Sorry Jaanu .. I will write it for u .. just need time to think .. love u .. I guess this part will be the last part .. so hopefully it will be long.. Sorry for that .. and thank u for baring my crazy story .. ..I was planning to write one crazy story .ONE os actually totally crazy thought .. waiting for all of ur opinion.. Should I ?

no bakwas.. sidhe story pe.. and after finding all please dont throw shoe and tomatoes;..

lil recap--

And the scene in front of them.. not only made them speechless. Many one was almost faint..

Their Sir ... the most angry Doc.. is singing Lullaby for the lil one..and the baby .. stopped his crying just he is listening his voice.. seems its so close to him.. his touch .. his care everything is known to the baby ..

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All were staring at the unbelievable scene in front of them .. getting over from shock.. some of them started their whispering with their nearest collogues .though it was so slow.. still their presence made him aware.. and with his sheepish smile.. "My mom used to sing for me.. when i was kid.. just i was trying.cant see his crying.. with stammering voice .. Doc spoke out.. as its human brain.. the most critical place in this world. Someone took this as caring nature of doc.. someone started their gossiping .. but the doc did not pay attention much more . though he was not in his uniform..but his mind in his control.. composing himself he said who is in duty for her now pointing towards the new mother ..

Someone among them who was lil busy with current hot topic for gossips.. jolted with the current pinch of another friend .. and Said ..

Sir.. Sir.. its me .. now its my Duty time..

Hmmm... only this word came from his mouth and it was enough to understand that he was expecting her before ..as already her duty hours started ..

Baby is now his cradle and playing in his own world . Doc is busy to check up his patience...with kinda relief that .. his patience is recovering ..even can get back her sense any moment ..

Rammm...one feeble still soft voice broke his chain of thought .

He looked at her ...

Sir .. she got back her sense.. so fast .. .. this voi9ce reminded him that .. her attendee is present there to look after her ..

Doc checked her nerves..and test others . to ensure that She is ok.and said She can feed her baby ..

Priya was looking at doc without any word.. when he said about feeding...

Looking towards the baby cord ..adorned a smile in her face though her eyes were expressing some unknown sadness. Must be she is missing her husband.. or anything else troubling her ..

How is the baby .. is it baby boy or girl.. First time priya spoke out asking about her baby .not even asking about her health .. though still she is suffering with lots of un bearable pain .. .. new motherly love born in her .. its the outcome.. ...

Its baby boy.. doc uttered with a lil upset voice it was sounding like he was not happy to tell her about baby boy... and Priya face adorned with more smile.. and eyes spark with a happiness of winning .. .

The attendee was silent spectators of their transition .. eyes speaking . she could understand something and maximum she was interpreting and cooking much for again hot gossip...

They come out from trance..

Sir .baby needs food so ..May i help ...

Yes ...yes .. Doc moved from his place to give her space ..

No i dont need any one's help.. i will manage myself.. Priya spoke out ..

But mam...

Without any further argument ..Doc said .. ok let her do oneself.. u go and wait outside.. she is lil bit shy in all these case..

Doc comments again made attendee more confusion.. how could he said about her nature .. .

She looked at doc and looked at Priya .. nodded in yes and moved towards the door .. expecting doc will follow her ..but when she saw doc did not follow rather he moved closed to priya .. she turned back .. was going to say something when she heard .. one rude voice ..I said I dont need any one.. Cant u hear ...just get out from here ..

Attendee looked at the place and its source made her more shocked.. never ever in her career at this nursing home she experienced such situation where .. someone is so rude with Doc specially with him.. most of them r scared..for his personality .. and others are respect him much for his quality.. then how can one patient.. not even regular she is behaving so rudely with him..

But she could not interpreted much as did not get the time .. before that she just heard the yelling..

God Dammit .. u need help right now Priya dont be stubborn.. still ur stitch is not good shape..

I said u .. i dont need anyone's help..its my baby .. just go from here... i can handle myself..and my son all alone..

Priya was behaving adamant..

Doc looked at her and with same pitch he said..then u cant feed her and Dont forget he is ...

Sound at door place caught tehir attention and both felt third party's present in the room...

Priya looked at different side with a sigh .. and Doc yelled why r u still here dont u know how to move ..

With a shaking footsteps atendee was trying to catch her full speed to leave the place asap.. but again his voice stopped her .. and this time Doc spoke out. no need to make it as gossip topics... i took leave for my family .. Priya is my wife.. its my baby ...and now u can go...

She was expressionless.. husband operated wife.. gave birth to his own baby.. Priya did not say anything seeing him first time.. not even he disclosed it to any body.. all becoming so confusing to her they aspa she left the place to stable herself first ...

Hey RAM.. May i come in..

Leaving his seat .. Hey Priya ... u dont need permission ..just come na..

Priya took her seat .. and made herself comfortable.. as she dont need much.. with Ram's presence she is alwys comfortable in any place.

Ram moving towards the door..and just closing it.. so tell me .. what bring u here suddenly.. i guess u did not have any appointment..

Haaaw.. I came here without appointment .. is that any crime Mr.Kapoor..

Ram took the beside seat of her ..and said .. No no ..Not at all i am just asking .. no msg no ph call.. r u spying on me .. and laughed loudly ..

Priya joined with him.. and said ..no no i dont need i. Trust my friend.. .. Ram did not like the friend word from her .. but still .. he does not want to move so fast .. first he wants to give her space time.. coz he knows Priya needs and .. not agree to move on in marriage relation after knowing her disability ..

But Ram's sad face was not unnoticed from Priya .. and his sadness makes her Sad too..

Keeping her one hand on Ram's .. Hey .. why r u looking dull is that work pressure ... should i leave now... She was trying to divert ..

Ram caught her hand in light speed , No no.. why would u leave.. u cant never disturb me ..Rather i am relaxed now.. and both started their chit chat .. .. with lots of laugh.. smile.. they both became good friends.. even they r in contact via ph and every social media .. not only that they meet outside of this cabin.. just friendly meeting ..

Few minutes were passing like this .. actually whenever they meet. or in ph call they just forget about time and surroundings..

Sir patient waiting outside , his assistant opened the door to remind RAM. ..

Dont u know matters.. u should knock the door before enter .RAM yelled..

Sorry Sir.. Wo...Priya Mam..

What Priya MAM..??

Priya kept her hand on his shoulder..RAM please.. Ram looked at her yes.. Priya pleading him not to be so rude

Their interaction caught her attention.. Sir . better i will say to ur patient to wait.. it was mixed with teasing as well as taunting tone..

Priya felt embarrassed .. was looking down.. Ram looked at her then towards his assistant and said.. yes better u say them to wait.. as i am spending my time with my would be wife.. So i should attend her first ..

Priya looked at him in disbelieve..

Thought to end it today ..but could not.. as story unfold.. if all of u say .. then only will write .otherwise ..its last.. and Sorry for mistake..but cant edit.. :'(

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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Please finish the story.
It is really interesting.
Waiting for next part.
BTW all of your stories are amazing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Very nice update...
priya is ram's wife...good to see dat..
pls continue...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ic_2000

Please finish the story.
It is really interesting.
Waiting for next part.
BTW all of your stories are amazing.


aweee thank u buddy
and yup.. will finish it soon..and .
update my ff too

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