RaYa SS :Kaho na Pyar Hai part 13updated on page 18 - Page 2

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😭 sorry guys for late update actually my exams was going on and my health is also not good.So,for you guys i try to write so here is next part enjoy reading and sorry for errors.

PART 2
After classes Ram and Priya meet in canteen.

Priya : i need to talk to you.
Ram : yes,tell me.
Priya : I think, atleast we should talk properly with each other.
Ram : what do you mean i don't know how to talk.
Priya : not like that ram.
Ram : then,
Priya : we can talk friendly,we always do only fighting.
Ram : start thinking,Oh! if you want to do friendship with me say it clearly.
Priya : angrily,i am not intrested in you get it.
Ram : madam,i am also not intrested in you.
Priya left from there.
Vikram and Neha was seeing hem .They come to him.
Vikram : Ram what are you doing with her.
Neha : can't you speak with her friendly like us.
ram : Why should I?She always start fight with me.
Neha : Ram listen,you have to work together you should be frankly with each other.
Vikram : Yes,Ram she is a nice girl not like others.
Ram : ok i will try because of my work.
Neha : you have to.
Ram : ok baba.
Three friends left for their house.
IN KAPOOR MANSION
Ram enter in his house and see his father sitting there.
Ram : angrily,Maa...Maa.
Krishna ji : what happen Ram.
Ram : Maa,what this man is doing here.
Krishna jai : Ram he is your father.
Ram : No,he is not my father.
Amarnath ji : Beta listen me once.
Ram : angrily turn toward him,don't call me beta get it.
Amarnath ji : ok calm dowm please.
Ram : No,i won't,just leave from here.
Krishna ji : Ram just listen to him once.
Ram : Maa please send this man away from my sight otherwise i will do something to me.
Amarnath : NO,don't say like this i will leave,but rember one thing whenever you need my help i am always for you.
Ram : i will never come to you Mr.Amarnath Kapoor.
Amarnath once look toward Krishnaji and left from there.
Krishna ji : Ram why can't you give him second chance.
Ram left to his room without giving answer.
HERE IN SHARMA HOUSE
sudhir : beta how was your day?
Priya : don't ask me papa?
Sudhir : but what happen?
Priya tell him about Ram.
Sudhir start laughing.
Priya : Papa you are laughing,i don't know how i am going to handle him.
Sudhir : ok ok no more laughing,but you should make him understand clearly.
NEXT DAY IN COLLEGE
Neha : ram go and talk to her.
Ram : how can i yaar.
Neha : just gooo.
Ram go to Priya .
Ram : ahh Priya.
Priya turn toward him with her one raising eyebrow What.
Ram : See Priya i am sorry for yesterday.I relly didn't get your real meaning but now i get you only want us to talk frankly because we have to make our assignment,Right.
Priya : hmmm,You understant so late and start laughing.
Ram : hey,Don't laugh yaar.
Priya : controlling her laugh ok.
Ram : good,what about a cup of coffee.
Priya : think for a while ok let's go.
First tme they agree for same thing.While drinking coffee.
Priya : you know i was very with you yesterday.
Ram : hmm,You should be.But now i say sorry get it.
Priya : ya ya,now let's about our assignment.
Ram : hey hey,wait a minute,
Priya : why?
Ram : you only see only see thing.STUDY STUDY STUDY.
Priya : why you scare from study.
Ram: i don't scare from anything.
Priya : Really.
Ram : yes,madam.
They discuss lit bit about project and finish their coffee.After that they go to their class.
Neha call priya.
Neha : Priya come here.
Priya : yes.
Ram talk to you or not.
Priya : yes,infact we drink coffee together.
Neha : exicted,really.
Priya : ofcourse.
Their class start.
After class Neha,Vikram,Ram and Priya ready to leave.Then Rajat,Ashwin come their and inform them about a party.
All agree to come in party.
NEXT DAY IN PARTY
Priya is in Red color dress looking very very beautiful.
Neha : Arrey wah,today you are looking stunning.
Priya : neha tum bhi na.
Neha : Really yaar.
Ashwin see her and say kya baat hai bhaut achi lag rahi ho.
Priya : thanx.
They chit-chat for sometime.Then Ram come in Black Tuxedo looking most handsome man in the world.All girls just go toward him and start talking to him.But very soon he excused himself and go toward his friends.
Ram : Priya you are looking very beautiful today.
Priya : blush hearing this,Thank you.
Neha : and how i am looking.
Ram : oh! forgot about you,oyu always look stunning.
Neha : thanx.
After sometime some of them start dancing.
Ashwin ask Priya for dance she go with him on dance floor.
Vikram and Neha also join them.
Ram is sitting and watching them.
Ashwin come close to Priya she feel akward but didn't say anything.
He start moving his fingers on her back.She push him and go from there.Ashwin also follow her.
Ashwin : Priya...Priya .but she did'nt move.
He clutch her hand and pinned her to wall.Priya try to free herself from his grip.
Priya : Ashwin what are you doing and tears flow from her eyes.
Ashwin : youknow Priya you are looking very hot today.
Priya : set up Ashwin.
Ashwin try to Kiss her suddenly he feel someone hand on his shoulder.


😊Guys please hit the like and do comments.I try to give update soon.

Kavya Kapoor...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting n beautiful thanks for pm
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Nice update...
Pls continue soon..
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Beautiful... story
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why such a chotusa update?

we want bada wala update.

tc. get well soon.
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superb...👏👏👏
very nice start... interesting story line ...loved their banter😆😆

Raya saath ho aur jhagda na ho...aisa ho nhi sakta 😆😆

plzz continue soon...

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Very good update.
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beautiful update
eagerly waiting for next part
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PART 3

Guys here is next part hope you will enjoy it and sorry for errors,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,


Ashwin : Priya...Priya .but she did'nt move.
He clutch her hand and pinned her to wall.Priya try to free herself from his grip.
Priya : Ashwin what are you doing and tears flow from her eyes.
Ashwin : youknow Priya you are looking very hot today.
Priya : set up Ashwin.
Ashwin try to Kiss her suddenly he feel someone hand on his shoulder.

Ashwin turn back and see Ram there.Ram grab Ashwin's collar.
Ashwin : what the hell ram,leave my collar.
Ram eyes are red in anger he slap very hard on ashwin face.
Ashwin : How dare you ram?
Ram : in anger,shhh just shut up.He came between Ashwin and Priya.Priya is crying and sobbing continously.
Ashwin : Ram mind your business and grab Priya's hand.
Ram slap him very hard.you ba****d how dare you to touch priya.
He hit him many times.Priya grab ram hand.
Ram : leave me priya.
Priya : he will die ram.
Ram : no priya.
Priya : Ram please...
Ram leave him.and say sirf priya ke kehne par chod rha hu agar next time kisis ke bhi sath aisa karne ki sochi na o mujhe khud nahi pta me kya karuga tumhare sath.
Ashwin remain there Ram wipe priya's tears.
Ram : are u fine priya.
this time priya cry badly and hug ram.Ram is taken back from priya's move.and he also hug her back.
Ram : calm down priya everything is fine.
They broke the hug ram wipe her tears.
Priya : thanks ram.
Ram : hey no thanks yaar it is my duty.come on cheer up now.come i'll drop you to your house.
ram stop car in front of her house.Priya come out from car say thank you to him.
Ram : mam,apne mujhe special tareeka se thanx bol diya hai.(remember when priya hug ram).
Priya : blush,Good Night.
Ram : hmm,good night.Ram drove off from there priya watch his disappering car.
Priya come back to his house.
Shipra : Arrey priya tu to badi jaldi aa gyi.
Priya tell her what happen in party.
shudhir : beta hum to ram ke aabhari hai.
Priya : ha papa jaisa mein ram ke bare me sochti thi vo aisa nahi hai.
Shudhir : ha beta ye to sahi bol rahi hai tu.
Shipra : priya tu ja apne room me rest kar le.Priya go to her room.
IN KAPOOR MANSION
Ram enter happpily.
Krishna ji : Ram mujhe tujse kuch puchna hai.
Ram : ji maa puchiye na.
Krishna ji : ram tune kya socha.
Ram : confused,in which matter ma.
Krishna ji : tere Papa ke bare me.
Ram : maa mene apse kitni baar bola hai us insan ke bare me mujhe kuch baat ni karni hai.
Krishna ji : lekin kab tak ram kabhi na kabhi to ...
Ram : cut her in middle vo din kabhi nahi ayega maa.
Krishna ji : par beta sab se galti hoti hai iska matlb ye to nahi ki unse rishta hi tod de.
Ram : maa please, mujhe sukoon se rehne do aur ye jabhi possible hai jab ap unki baat mujhse na kare.
Krishna ji : thik hai beta mein tumse ab koi baat ni karugi.
Ram : thanks maa and leave for his room.
NEXT DAY IN COLLEGE
vikram : yaar kl tu party se jaldi kyu chala gya tha aur vo bhi bina kisi ko bataye.
Ram : ram tell hi aboyt ashwin incident.
Vikram : ram tune ye sab phele kyu nahi bataya.
Ram : aur tu kisi aur ko nahi bolega samja.
Vikram : thik hai yaar.
Ram : vaise abh priya aayi nahi hai kya.
Vikram : aa gyi hai class me hai.
Ram : oh! come with me.
Vikram : but where?
Ram : in class.
Vikram : watch him from head to toe,Ram teri tabiyat toh thik hai na.
Ram : ha,par aisa kya pucha tune.
Vikram : nahi vo kya hai aaj tu khud class me jane ke liye bol rha hai na isliye.
Ram : very funny, come now.
they come in class near door ashwin is standing.Ram and Ashwin see each other.Ashwin lower hs eyes and Ram enter in class.He see priya lost n her thoughts.
Ram : vikram you take your place i'll come in 5 min.
Vikram : ya sure.
Ram come near priya wave his hand infront of his face.Priya come to his sense.
Priya : arrey tum kab aaye.
Ram : sit beside her,huu jab tum apne sapno ne kho rahi thi jab.
Priya smile hearing this.
Neha come there he see ram is sitting beside priya.
Neha : hey ram today you will sit here.
Ram : no no neha,tum hi baitho yaha nahi to mein aaj mar hi jauga.
Priya : what do you mean?
Ram : simple yaar agar me yaha rehta hu to madam to padha kar hi mar dalagi.and immedately leave from there.
Priya and Neha laugh in this.
In all the class Ram only watch Priya secretly.After classes Ram and Priya start making there assignment after sometime priya look toward ram and start laughing.
Ram : kya,why are you laughing.
Priya controling her laugh click ram photo and show him.
Ram : hey priya,not fair ha delete these picks.
Priya : noways ram.
Ram : tum ruko and he aplly some colour on priya face and click her photos in his phone.
Priya : haww ram what is this.
Ram : tit for tat.
Ram and priya both laugh again.
Priya first time see ram laughing heratily.
Priya : ram tum haste hue kitne acha lagte ho aise hi haste rha karo.
Ram just stare priya.they start doing there work.Both ready to leave for their home.
Ram : if you don't mine may i drop you to your house.
Priya : ok.
Ram drop Priya at her house and leave for his home.
Din aise hi nikalte chale gya aur RAM aur Priya ek dusre ke aur ache dost ban gye.Ram start taking intrest in studies.
Priya : Ram aj tak tumne apne father ke bare me kuch nahi bataya.
Ram : priya mere sabhi frnds ye baat jante hai aur ab tum bhi meri frnd ho to tum bhi jaan unke bare me mujhse kabhi koi baat nahi karna.I don't like talking about him.
Priya : but why...
Ram : cut her in middle please priya i request you.
Priya : ok as you wish.
Ram : thanks.
Ram : kal sunday hai to lunch sath me kare mein tum,neha aur vikram what say.
Priya : no ram.
Ram : please priya,please please.
Priya : ok fine.
Ram call vikram and told him about his plan of lunch.
NEXT DAY IN RESTAURENT
Ram and Priya wiating for vikram and neha.suddenly a man come nar them.
Man : hello beta.
Ram : ap yaha???
Priya : Ram kaun hai ye.
Man : i am Ram's father AMARNATH KAPOOR.
Priya : join her hands Namaste uncle.
Amar ji : nameste beta,Ram tum yaha kaise.
Ram : restaurent me log kya karne aate hai.
Priya : uncle hum lunch ke liye aaye hai apne frnds ka wait kar rhe hai.
Amar ji : ok enjoy your lunch.
Ram ignore him.
Vikram and Neha come.
Ram : where were you?
Vikram : on the way.
Ram : shut up.
Priya : ok ok guys,lets place the order i am feeling very hungry.
Neha : yes,guys me too feeling hungry.
They place order and finish their lunch.
IN KAPOOR MANSION
Ram come home and see Krishna ji and Rishabh chatting with each other.Rishabh head on krishna ji lap.
Ram stop there in shook.
Ram : Maa yeh sab.
Rishabh quickly stand up.rishabh want to say something but Ram raise his finger to stop him.
Ram : Maa ye yaha apke sath kya kar rha hai.
Krishna ji : Ram ye aj se yahi rehega hamere sath.
Ram : nahi maa ye yaha nahi reh sakta.Maa ap kaise bhool sakti iski maa ki vajah se us insaan ne hum dono ko dhokha diya.
Krishna ji : mujhe sab yaad hai beta apr isme iski kya galti.
Ram : iski vajah se mujhe kabhi baap ka pyar nahi mil paya Maa.
Krishna ji : iski vajah se nahi tere khud ki vajah se unhone kitna try kiye tujse sorry bolne ke liye unhe apni galti ka ashaas ho gya hai Ram tu ek baar unhe dusra mooka de na beta vo aj bhi yahi intazar kar rhe hai ki tu unhe maaf kar de.Ek baar maaf kar de apne papa ko mere liye apne liye please beta.
Ram look toward rishabh and say thik hai ye yaha reh sakta hai apr mujhe thoda time chaiye and leave for his room.
Krishna ji : i'll wait for your answer.
(Guys actually Rishabh is Amarnath and Niharika son,Niharika pass away and thats why Ram hate his father and he also accept rishabh as his brother.But Rishabh his a sweet guy and waiting for ram to accept him as his brother.)
Rishabh : sorry meri vajah se Bhai itna gussa ho gye.
Krishna ji : nahi rishabh tumhe sorry bolne ki jarurat nahi hai.
Rishabh : pta nahi vo kabhi mujhe accept karege bhi ya nahi.
Krishna ji : jarur karega beta.
Rishabh hug her.
IN RAM ROOM
Ram is thinking about what his mother said.Should he desserve second chance or not.He drift off to sleep thinking this.


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