NEW RAYA SS : PHIR MILENGE '23-04-15'

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello Friends i know u all waiting for others ff update but here i m updating new yeah just dont want to forget New Idea thats why making it small SS

Here Is Prologue...

Priya Taare Ginnne Chale...

Arey Main Tumhari Jhuti Kasam Kaise...????

Aur Ese Aprin Me...Haa wo to main Hoon

Priya Salsa Karna Hai...

Ab Ye subh subh Jo Bin mausum Ki Barsaat huyi uthna to Padega hi...

KYa Pad Rahi ho Itni subh subh...

Ab Bolo Bhi Bhaav mat Khao...

Priya Priya Mat Jaao main Nahi Ji Sakta tumhare Bina I Love You Priya...

Ahhh And She jerked open Her eyes Sweating heavily She wipes her face...

Again that voices same Cloudy Face Ohhh God Aur Dekh Priya Games of thrones horror movies

ESE sapne to aaenge hi naa fir Lekin Daily ek hi Sapna (dream) She says to herself...

Dont Know Kya ho Raha hai Mujhe...

Lagta Hai Tujhe Doctor ko dhikhana Chahiye...A voice come From Door...Shurti Her Friend Stood there...

Tu Itni Subh Subh yaha Kar rahi hai...

Really !!!!!! Subh Subh She show Priya her watch...

Priya takes her mobile And she jumped From Bed saying

Crap Crap She runs to washroom After couple of minute She Came and apply Minimum Makeup takes her Bag and say Lets Go Shurti Shurti come near her and Says Whats the problem priya u looking so Pale again Same Dream... Priya just nods in yes...

Ohhh Daaarling Shurti Says (stretching word A in Daaarling)

A train of Flashes come up in front Of Priya

She Found herself stood in Washroom and about to open the doors but A Male voice come from outside

Daaarling (same as shruti ) And

Then


Then


Then


Then Aditya what You Want...Main Ram ko Ese Hi bigdane Doon...

Tune Dekha Nahi Beta usko Breakfast Kisi ke saath...Lunch Kisi or ke Saath Dinner Kisi ke Saath Sona Kisi or ke Saath Uthna Kisi or ke saath. How Shameful is this

Wo tera Dost Hain Tu Hi Kuch Samza De... Aditya Smiles and Says

Uncle Ram No 1 businessman hai Businessman of the Year ka award Milahai aur Hamari generation me ye Sab common hai and Wo Last wali Line Thodi Jyada Nahi Ho gayi...

Kya : Ashok Kapoor Asked(Ashok Kapoor Ram's father and other Character ll comeup soon)

Wo Sona or Uthna... Aditya says in low voice


READ HERE FULL


PART 1

Edited by aman.anjaan - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good start pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Seem to be very interested story
a different concept
RaYa asusal thinking about each other only unknwon who actually they are.
Continue soon and thank you for the pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Seems entirely different concept.
Punar janam of Priya & ram hai kya????
Thanks for pm & continue soon.
Edited by Sakshiashu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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janam janam ka saath hai ram n priya ka. punar janam ki baat lagati hai. nice story totally diff concept.
thanks for pm. pl continue.
plz update ur other stories also.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely and interesting update!!!
Plz continue soon!!!
And thanks 4 pm!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb... I simply loved the beginning...
I sincerely hope they are related in this birth itself not done past life... But anyhow I eagerly waiting for the next part...
Please continue soon..
Thanks for PM😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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New concept wd beautiful update..
waiting 4 next update...
thnx 4 d pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start
thanks for pm
continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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prologue
is really good o felt it intersting story but why u didn't continue it plz continue soon waiting for more update...

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