RAYA TS : Tumhe Dekho Naa Ye Kya Ho Gaya PART 4 on Pg 7 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ic_2000

Lovely.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Lovely part want Raya closer now n hope rajat n ayesha does not come in between of their love pls continue soon


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cute_Saakshii12

Awesome update!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks fr pm... Pls we dnt want rajath r ayesha btwn raya...!!!! Hope raya dance nw..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice Os, I don't like extra marital affairs but since Raya are there so its fine.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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RaYa share the compromise life they spending in this marriage about each other spouses. Seems they are having the feeling that they belong to each other.
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Ram: Kisse

Priya : Rajat se...tum kya kar rhe the...

Ram : Same thing Ayesha se...

Priya : send smilee and Ram send same too...

Ram : chalo got to go Kal milte hai...

Priya : Kal sunday hai...

Ram : Haa to kya hua Same station same time byee tc...

Priya : Ok byee...

PART 3


Kuch to hua kuch ho gaya hai...Ram humming a song while brushing his hairs...

Do chaar Din se lagta hai ese...Priya too humming a song sitting in front of Mirror...

Sab kuch alaga hai...Ram sings...

Sab kuch naya hai...Priya sings...

Kuch to hua hai Ram...ram turns and see
Ayesha standing behind him...

Ram : kya...

Ayesha : Tum badle badle se lag rahe ho Gaane wane gaa rahe ho...Anything specail today...

Ram : Nahi to main to hamesha se hi esa hu bus tumhe dekhne ka time nahi tha...

Ayesha come near ram and Encircle her hand in his arms and said Aaj to sunday hai Aaj kaha jaa rahe ho itna saj dhaj ke...

Rajat Please Main hamesha se hi esi hoon Kuch specail nahi hai aur Aaj i waanna work yaar mujhe free baithne ki aadat nahi hai...kuch naya nahi hai...Priya said in irritating tone

Rajat : Ok he comes near her Maine to isliye pucha itna dressed Up hoke Jaa rahi ho naa...

Sunday bhi Kaam karte hai log or Main ab kya kapde bhi tumhari choice ke pahnu Ayesha ???? Mera man hai ye suit pahnne ka To pehn liya and Why r u showing so concern Isse pahle to kabhi tumhare pass Time hi nahi tha...he said and shurggeled him arms...

Ayesha : Ohh Ram itna gussa kyu kar rhe ho...

Ram : ok enough yaar main already late hoo byee...

And he takes key of Car...and said Aaj ke liye tumhari Car le raha hu Ayesha raizada Kapoor and he left...

Ayesha stamp her feet...

Rajat bahut hua i m late can u plz tell ur driver to drop me on station...plz...

Rajat : Ohh ofcourse And wo tumahra bhi driver hai no need my permission...

Priya : thnx...

She left for station and Here Ram comes with Car...he reached before priya and Waiting Outside of station...

Priya told driver to stop car and she told him to go and watches her untill he disappeared...

She walks towards entrance and see Ram standing outside station looking Damn Handsame in black suit...he give her his ever charming smile...she too smile back and walks towards him...

Priya : Ram ye car...

Ram : Meri biwi ki hai and scratching his head...

Priya : ohhh btw main bhi mere Pati ki car se hi aayi hu and she laugh...

Both laugh together...he open door for her and she seats on Front seat...

Ram too come and seat...

Ram buckled up his seat belt and see priya strugling with seat belt...he leaned towards her Priya gasp with his moves but He take seat and buckled her too...

Priya smiles and said thank you...

Ram : You are most welcome...he started car while driving he says btw you looking different...i mean ur hair bun i never saw you like this...and this Chudidar Suit Accha lag raha hai...i never thought ki Red and green ka combination Itna achha hoga...With This light red lipistik and Green Long earings He says in one breath...priya blush hear this and he bites his tongue and he cover up and said u looking beautiful...

Priya blush again and says U r looking handsome...and she too bite her tongue i mean different In suit i too never saw u in black suit...

Thnx he said while lookingat her...she too steal glances of him...

Just then Priya obserb that this is new way she never come from this way...she asked Ram : Ye koi naya rasta hai i mean...mera insti...

Ram cut her off and said Haa aaj hum kaam pe nahi jaa rahe hai...

Priya : matlab...

Ram : Matlab we are not going to work mujhe hindi aur english ke alwa koi language nahi aati...are kaam to hum Roj karte hai aaj kuch enjoy bhi kare...

She smiles and says Ok...to hum kaha jaa rahe hai...

Hum abhi nahi bataunga...

Priya : Raam

Ram : kya...

Priya : Batao naa...

Ram : Nahi...

Priya : ohh Ram you are so stubborn...

Ram : Just like you...

Priya : i m not like you...

Ram : No you are...

Priya : Ohk jab tak nahi bataoge tab tak i wont talk to you...

Ram : ok baba ok...Hum ek Play dekhne jaa rahe hai...Prithvi theatre me...

Really Ram she asked with so much excitment...

Ram : hmmm you like plays...

Priya : ohh Ram You dont know how much i loved it...

Ram : I know Priyaa...he said looking at her

Priya : how...you know...

Ram : arey I mean now i know naa you looking so exicted...

Priya : Hmmm shadi ke pahle main aur shurti Har sunday Play dekhne Jaate the par shadi ke baad Ye sab Rajat ko accha nahi lagta tha...

Ram : Ayesha ko bhi...use lagta tha Ye play dekhna Or esi Jagah pe jaana uske status ko suit nahi karega...

Priya : Ram log kitna Is Fake world me itna kho jaate hai aur Us real world us Khushi ko bhul jaate hai jo apno ke saath bitane me milti hai...

Ram : so true Priya main bhi Aaj bahut dino baad play dekhne aaya hu...

Scene Shifted to theatre...

Priya crying looking at play...

Ram looks at her and wipes her tears...

The play was on Romeo and Juliet...

After the play both went for lunch To Resturent Ram all the way teased her for crying in play ...

Both Seated in Garden area of Resturent...Atmosphere is so good Not too hot not too cool...Clouds in the sky...

After Lunch

Ram : so priya desert me kya logi...

Priya : i want ice cream wo bhi Cone me...

Ram : hein Ab yaha cone me ice cream kaise milegi Priya...

Priya : ohh common Ram wo dekho Bahar (she pointed outside) Ek ice cream wala jaa raha hai...

Ram : priya Ye kya Childish behaviour hai...yaaar...

Priya : tumhe sharm aa rahi hai to main khud le aati hu and she about to getup...

Ram : ok ok tum baitho main laata hu...

Ram goes outside and come with two cone of icecreams...

When he comes he looks here and there where is priya she said himself...He enter in children play area ( attached with garden) and Cant take his eyes off...
Priya playing Langdi ( ) with kids...her hair looses and her Chunni tied along on her waist...she is jumping on her one feet taking piece of stone with other feet and turned and again same process...then He saw priya laugh with childern when her both feet touched the ground now he understand the game Only one feet allow to touch on ground and one in air...

Priya turned and see Ram standing with uce cream...she runs and takes one and said Ram Ram...

Ram comes to reality...Haaa...

Ice cream melt ho rahi thi tumhara dhyaan kaha thaa...

Ram : Tum.. .

Priya : Kya...and she started eating her icecream...

Ram : kuch nahi tum khao...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Lovely part pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Awesome update aman! 👏 plz continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update...
Please continue soon...
Thanks for PM😛😛

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