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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: contactcharu

very nice and different

pls continue soon


thank you liking the story 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

heya... I m last but hope not the least one so here goes with my comment...

first i read the heading I wondered for a second then stat to reading so in first 2 to 3 lines I felt like yeh toh seson 3 ki story lagti hai where Pihu askes Priya to leave the house but jab padha Pihu is just 5 years old I got relived to see my Amu back in frame...
u know what u choosed very strong concept as PriPi & RaPi were alawys the treat to watch on screen during whole 2nd season of show even I m also the big fan of this Trio as I loves RaShiTa they were the best part & unfogoteble specially for me... so love u for choosing this concept I always wanted to read on RaYaPi even asked most of one but got in strong way just in this... where three of them having equal share of thier story part so very happy for this...
now coming to the update Like as Malti said it reminds me of KKHH but somewhere its very diffrent to it also I loved the u u peened dowwn whole story but still if u could give more batter view of Ram & Ananya relation it will be more understanding to read the emotions of Ram too I knew Ram loved Priya but he also loved Pihu same way he do with Priya so he didnt loved Ananya ever or Pihu was by mistake or he as just filling his resposiblity as husband of Ananya... n also I will love to see what efforts Priya will put to win Pihu's heart as I agree its difficulte to win heart of 5 year old child as mother when the child got extreem love & confort from his/her real mother so lookking forward to it... n take ur time but want a big one next time then this also... so best of luck for the next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: peeyara


Happiness is reading Malati's long comment
uff Malati itne questions, likhte waqt maine in cheezon pe dhiyan hi nhi diyai should have consulted you before toh thode kam nuks hote😆

huh...i'll start answering your valid questions😆
honestly speaking, when i was writing this, i didnt realized that it'll be somewhat similar to Kuch Kcuh hota hai😆jab aapka comment padha toh yaad aaya😆
but see wahan Anjali khud apne papa ki shaadi karwati hai apne mummy ke kehne pe but yahan pihu isn't happy with Priya's inclusion in their life😛she was comfortable with her but than this change in her life changed it😛

Ram want Priya n Pihu in his life, he dont want to loose Priya and he is sure that Priya's presence in his life will not hamper his relations with Pihu and also Priya too will not be having any problem with pihu😛he is sure that his relation with the one will not affect his relation with other😛( i hope i have not confused you😆) he want best for him n his daughter too and that best is priya😆
i too wonder whether love exists or not and always i come to conclusion that it exists for others n not me😆
i agree i have mentioned 'days passed by' so it can be any number of days😉like 180 days or so😉
he was honest and loyal husband so if ananya was alive he would not have thought of getting Priya back😛
Life hai isiliye complicated haibut we humans make it even more complex
yes, its very difficult to accept anyone as your mother😛even if that person is most dearest person to you😛
thank you malati for pointing out the defects n loopholes in the story, i'll try to fix them😛





Hey thanks for having so much patience to read my bakwas 😆
my intention was not to find loop holes, and I know the story differs in many ways from kkhh.I always have questions n wonder why kajol didn't accept salman's love though he was loving her unconditionally, n rahul was selfish, he never realized he loved anjali, even after he met her after 8yrs , he never felt those emotions easily. If his tina wud have been alive , he never looked back not even tried to remember anjali. He wanted anjali back bcoz his daughter wants it, n he then develops feeling, realized. Don't know how on earth these broken pieces of emotions get connected again after a longgg gap , after a changed state of mind. On the other hand, how come anjali never felt anything for salman , I think his character was prem is it? He was expressing so much for her, so many ways. So ye pyar nhi hai kya?
ye sab mere sawal hai chodo 😆 😆 , as u said may be love doesn't exist fir me too 😆 , so I never understand this. Hihihi[BR
Mujhe ye batavo, ram ne kabhi ananya k liye kuch feel nhi kiya toh, how can he be loyal? Lol, sorry, kyunki if he loves his daughter so much, he should have loved his wife arpt least little, pinch hhi lolz.
well, mere khayal se shaadi me pyar bhi hona zaroori hai, n love is something which develops by time , which develops by being together, by caring each other, protecting aur behas me bhi hihihiji, so kahi na kahi he has some connect to ananya , otherwise pihu wouldn't have been uski aankhoan ka taara.Nhi toh sasu jaise hita hai bina ferling k bacche paida karo grrr.

]thanks for clarifying u go with ur story as it demands.
Edited by bpatil3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: peeyara


helllooo madammm
where are you???
i am fine? wat about you
thank you pc😛

arey Esha, Juhi pe sandy ka copyright hai😉😆

hmm...priya trying to understand Pihu and pihu trying to stay away from her😆
ultimately priya will win😉😆


Heelllooo...
Yhi...:p :p
Clg wrk gayab krwadia mujhe...

Bas finally free toh back to if... aftr many manyyy many dazzz.. :p :p :p
Aur aaty hi...aapke os ka darshan bhi hgya...
Aur scnd page pr hi cmmnt... :p :p :p
Feelng good... :p :p :$ :$

Hahahahahaha... unka copyrght har jagah hain...rajat...juhi...isha..mamaji... what not... :p :p :p

Hona hi hain... :p :p :p
Aftrall its alwys priya pihu jodi aftr raya.. :p :p :p

Waise kab post kr rhy nxt part...i'll ready.. :p :p
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: leena04


heya... I m last but hope not the least one so here goes with my comment...

first i read the heading I wondered for a second then stat to reading so in first 2 to 3 lines I felt like yeh toh seson 3 ki story lagti hai where Pihu askes Priya to leave the house but jab padha Pihu is just 5 years old I got relived to see my Amu back in frame...
u know what u choosed very strong concept as PriPi & RaPi were alawys the treat to watch on screen during whole 2nd season of show even I m also the big fan of this Trio as I loves RaShiTa they were the best part & unfogoteble specially for me... so love u for choosing this concept I always wanted to read on RaYaPi even asked most of one but got in strong way just in this... where three of them having equal share of thier story part so very happy for this...
now coming to the update Like as Malti said it reminds me of KKHH but somewhere its very diffrent to it also I loved the u u peened dowwn whole story but still if u could give more batter view of Ram & Ananya relation it will be more understanding to read the emotions of Ram too I knew Ram loved Priya but he also loved Pihu same way he do with Priya so he didnt loved Ananya ever or Pihu was by mistake or he as just filling his resposiblity as husband of Ananya... n also I will love to see what efforts Priya will put to win Pihu's heart as I agree its difficulte to win heart of 5 year old child as mother when the child got extreem love & confort from his/her real mother so lookking forward to it... n take ur time but want a big one next time then this also... so best of luck for the next part...

doesn't matter if its last or first😛
mai jab likh rahi thi maine bhi socha kahin sabko na lage k badi pihu hai isiliye 5 years old mentioned kiya😆
i too wanted to write something on them but i had nothing in my mind so didn't wrote but achanak se aise hi khayal aaya k what if agar Pihu Priya k liye trouble maker bane 😉 so I kept thinking n thinking how should story go and then started writing😛
I have planned out the efforts of Priya 😉 lets see how you people will appreciate it😆
about Ananya n Ram, i'll cook up some story for them, i have found a way out😉
thanks for your appreciation n comment😛


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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: bpatil3



Hey thanks for having so much patience to read my bakwas 😆
my intention was not to find loop holes, and I know the story differs in many ways from kkhh.I always have questions n wonder why kajol didn't accept salman's love though he was loving her unconditionally, n rahul was selfish, he never realized he loved anjali, even after he met her after 8yrs , he never felt those emotions easily. If his tina wud have been alive , he never looked back not even tried to remember anjali. He wanted anjali back bcoz his daughter wants it, n he then develops feeling, realized. Don't know how on earth these broken pieces of emotions get connected again after a longgg gap , after a changed state of mind. On the other hand, how come anjali never felt anything for salman , I think his character was prem is it? He was expressing so much for her, so many ways. So ye pyar nhi hai kya?
ye sab mere sawal hai chodo 😆 😆 , as u said may be love doesn't exist fir me too 😆 , so I never understand this. Hihihi[BR
Mujhe ye batavo, ram ne kabhi ananya k liye kuch feel nhi kiya toh, how can he be loyal? Lol, sorry, kyunki if he loves his daughter so much, he should have loved his wife arpt least little, pinch hhi lolz.
well, mere khayal se shaadi me pyar bhi hona zaroori hai, n love is something which develops by time , which develops by being together, by caring each other, protecting aur behas me bhi hihihiji, so kahi na kahi he has some connect to ananya , otherwise pihu wouldn't have been uski aankhoan ka taara.Nhi toh sasu jaise hita hai bina ferling k bacche paida karo grrr.

]thanks for clarifying u go with ur story as it demands.

bakwas nhi thi valid points the 😆
sach mai pata nhi anjali ne rahul ko kyu chuna over prem 😕 agar mai anjali ki jagah hoti toh prem ko choose karti😆 i believe one should marry the person who loves them not vice versa 😆 bht faide hote hai😆

actually your points on ananya n ram's relation have given me the solution 😉 so big thanks n big hug to you 🤗 😆 for solving the problem😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: chillpc


Heelllooo...
Yhi...:p :p
Clg wrk gayab krwadia mujhe...

Bas finally free toh back to if... aftr many manyyy many dazzz.. :p :p :p
Aur aaty hi...aapke os ka darshan bhi hgya...
Aur scnd page pr hi cmmnt... :p :p :p
Feelng good... :p :p :$ :$

Hahahahahaha... unka copyrght har jagah hain...rajat...juhi...isha..mamaji... what not... :p :p :p

Hona hi hain... :p :p :p
Aftrall its alwys priya pihu jodi aftr raya.. :p :p :p

Waise kab post kr rhy nxt part...i'll ready.. :p :p

exams over???
kitna accha luck hai aapka 😉
rajat pe toh cut, copy, paste sab rights hai🤣
update is ready in mind bas likhna start karna hai 😆
peeyara thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Dear readers,
I apologise for the blunder i did i am too stupid 😆 but thanks to malati, Anandraji(i guess its correct name), leena for pointing out the importance of clearance of Ram and Ananya's relation😛
actually i didn;t thought in depth, my idea was to revolve story around Priya n Pihu along with Ram, i didn't spared a thought to Ananya 😆(poor girl), i actually wanted to wind it up in 2-3 updates so thought of cutting off Ram and Ananya's story 😆 i was least interested in writing about their marriage 😆 but in the next update i'll try to come up with an explanation 😛 hopefully you all will be satisfied with that😆
Edited by peeyara - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: peeyara


bakwas nhi thi valid points the😆
sach mai pata nhi anjali ne rahul ko kyu chuna over prem😕agar mai anjali ki jagah hoti toh prem ko choose karti😆i believe one should marry the person who loves them not vice versa😆bht faide hote hai😆

actually your points on ananya n ram's relation have given me the solution😉so big thanks n big hug to you🤗😆for solving the problem😉





Pata nhi , shayad Anjali ko experienced hubby chahiye tha [:))]

accha chalo kuch toh accha hua 😆 solution aur itni zaldi very gud 😛 😆
Edited by bpatil3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: peeyara


exams over???
kitna accha luck hai aapka😉
rajat pe toh cut, copy, paste sab rights hai🤣
update is ready in mind bas likhna start karna hai😆


Yepp donee...
Nxt sem shuru bhi hgya... :p :p

Hrhegegehehe...lol...haan... :p :p :p...

Hrhehe...kk..!!

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