'UPDATE' RAYA SS : In My Heart Jaan EPILOGUE on pg 26

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Nice epilogue... But I expected to see Raya marriage...

Anyhow all is well that ends well...

Thanks for PM😛😛

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Suriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

very nice.. Will be waiting fr ur update

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

lovely ending of lovely story

sorry for late reply

thanks for pms

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Priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Hey buddy! Happened to read this one the whole of last week.. Well, this was like my break from studies!.

That's an I teresting piece you've put together yaa! Reminded me of FSoG, crossfire series and a bollywood movie all together! Enjoyed reading it a lot!!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Part 1
awesome it's really an another intersting story bhai I actually liked the vi cept of ONS as we really read such stories on RaYa but u made it with different way Ram is play boy bug yet he defiantly felt something for Priya that's why he took her to hos room & here Priya us with fake name near him I know she is Priya only... but let's check what happens next in story si moving for next part...

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 2
awesome too hot to handle OMG u made it again ... so u was right Ram is a tall in love with Priya & he wanted to make her hos for forever too good awesome. .. but what round is doing here hope it won't create problems later goes they started it again... I m happy Priya is different from other girl who is always around Ram it's really good to read next part so moving on to it... lived Neha's part too is happy for their bonding too good...

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 3
awesome OMG Ram is so incicurity is going to be big problem for them soon I felt that way do Ronit had also sift corner for Priya???? guess might be yes but she is only of Ram & Ram is only of her... too good Ram had secrete room in office just for them with her picture too... too good can understand Priya situation she is still not sure if Ram is she is taking time to assures herself good one so now moving fir next to read...

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Part 4
so RaYa is the official couple now Ram do everything for Priya which us his loveable act theses days awesome the way they faced all the press was amezing. ... no yaar not again Isha I had her but Ronit well I still feel he gave some emotions fir Priya but might be hiding it... god Ram us too lost jn his ex that he forgot abt Priya I guess this will start create problem with them hope it dint took wrong road any way. ... moving fir next...

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Part 5
awesome too good I liked the way Ram waited to cool down Priya's anger rather then forcing himself on her it's nice & shows how hood he is from heart... now coming towards the mystery u added in story will gonna be more interesting to read that how it turned out... so moving for next...

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 6
awesome too good so finally Priya's past is out now OMG so horrible her family was so sad she lost her parents in such small age feeling really sad for her so happy Ram truly loves her no fake care for her it's really good don't know this Ronit's angle hope everything goes well... awesome night RaYa spend again too his I just loved it ... moving for next...

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