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Posted: 10 years ago
Kehte hai sapne soch samjhke nhi dekha karte, khaskar aise sapne jo apnoan ki koi cheez apne se door hone ka, ya barsoan dekha hua wo khwab jab kisi roop me apne saamne paaya jaata hai toh, shayad aise sapne humein vaastav se mila deti hai, use parkhne ki , uss cheez ko haath se chodne na dene ki ek nayi koshish aur umeed jaga deti hai.
sapna jo dekh liya usse saakar karne ki ek prayas karneki iccha jaagrut kardeti hai.

par ramji itni hortiblevsapne dekhne ki kya zaroirat thi, nki rajjo apne sapne me to kabhi priya se romance kar na saka, aapne khamkha mauka de diya usse 😆 😆 😆. Koi bahot khush hua rajjo ko priya se ramji k sapne me romance karne ka mauka jo de diya 😆 😆 😉 sandhya khush ho na, rajjo ne priya ko ram k sapne me romance karliya, writer aapki biradri ki laggti hai 😕 😆 , matlab rajjo fannn 😆


chalo ram ne toh apna nirnay de diya , kk tried her best to make him understand, but still she cannotastop her son meeting priya.



Ufff poor kiddo pihu had been slapped, yha bhi mujhe kisi aur ka bacchoan ko maarna yaad aagya 😕


Hmmm, parents tend to get angry, if they don't get angry on few things, may be we don't learn discipline n the importance of the things n may be we do not know the outcome of the situation. If parent gets angry, slaps their kid, doe mean they don't feel guilty, they don't feel pain, ye ek ajeeb bonding hoti hai paremt aur kid k beech me, slap karne wala bhi rota hai, slap khanewala bhi, kuch pal me ye dono firse gelled hote hai, situation aur slap ko bholl bhi jaate hai, ajeeb hota hai dil ka rishta, shayad yhi rishtoan ki khoobsurti hai.

rajjo ji aapka interference bahot zyada hogya, plz priya ko peehunko sambhalne do. 😆 aap axdhe dost hai, lekin badeacche dost mat baniye plzz 😆

twist accha hai, par ram is always a suspicious n selfish person for me.
and who is khush matter toh abhi baaki hai mere dost.

priya aur ram k beech me kabhi koi emotional bond thi hi nhi, toh ram ko priya apne life me kyun chahgiye?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Kehte hai sapne soch samjhke nhi dekha karte, khaskar aise sapne jo apnoan ki koi cheez apne se door hone ka, ya barsoan dekha hua wo khwab jab kisi roop me apne saamne paaya jaata hai toh, shayad aise sapne humein vaastav se mila deti hai, use parkhne ki , uss cheez ko haath se chodne na dene ki ek nayi koshish aur umeed jaga deti hai.
sapna jo dekh liya usse saakar karne ki ek prayas karneki iccha jaagrut kardeti hai.

par ramji itni hortiblevsapne dekhne ki kya zaroirat thi, nki rajjo apne sapne me to kabhi priya se romance kar na saka, aapne khamkha mauka de diya usse 😆 😆 😆. Koi bahot khush hua rajjo ko priya se ramji k sapne me romance karne ka mauka jo de diya 😆 😆 😉 sandhya khush ho na, rajjo ne priya ko ram k sapne me romance karliya, writer aapki biradri ki laggti hai 😕 😆 , matlab rajjo fannn 😆



Grrr...Mein nahi chahungi Rajat aur Priya ko saat mein kaisi bhi situation ho😡
Ram sapne dekh raha hai toh bhi meri galti kya😕😆
Update soon Neel😛
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PART-22


Next morning

Rajat and Priya came back to Mumbai. They hardly talked with each other and both retire to their respective home but before that Rajat reminds her about an evening party.

Here Ram is very happy. Finally he can get a chance to see Priya today and He is very excited and awaiting for evening party.

In KK Amarnath room,

KK:- Amar Ram Priya se pyar karta hai aur usse wapas apne zindagi mein chahta hai.

Amarnath said nothing and continue doing his work.

KK:- Mein aapse kuch keh rahi hoon. Aap sunn rahe hai ki nahi.

Amarnath stops his work and said "Mein kya kahu Krishna. Priya yahan sirf aur sirf mere kehne par aayi hai. Muje toh shak hai ki Priya ne Ram ko teek se dekha hoga ki bhi nahi. Aur aapke bete ko abb Priya wapas chahiye. Tum kya chahti ho mein jaakar Priya se baat karu aur usse kahu ki Ram tumse pyar karta hai issliye uske zindagi mein wapas aa jao.

KK:- Aap samajne ki koshish kyun nahi kar rahe hai.

Amarnath:- Tum meri baat samajne ki koshish kyun nahi kar rahi ho. Tum ek aurat hokar dusre aurat ki jazbaato ko kyun nahi samaj paa rahi ho.

KK:- Woh issliye kyunki Ram mera beta hai aur meine dekha hai apne bete ko tadapte hue. Aur aap yeh kyun nahi dekh rahe hai ki Ram aur Priya ke mill jaane se Pihu ko uske papa ka pyar mill jaayega aur Kush ko ek maa ka pyar.

Amarnath:- Rehne do Krishna tumhe mein jitna bhi samjau tum samajne nahi wali. Issliye behtar yahi hoga ki kya karna hai kya nahi yeh Ram aur Priya par hi chod dete hai. Muje lagta hai hame bachho ke beech mein nahi padna chahiye.

Krishna is crying. Amarnath cannot see her like this. He takes her in side embrace and said "Priya kuch waqt ke liye India mein hi hai. Agar muje lagta hai ki Ram waqai mein Priya se pyar karta hai toh mein khud Priya se baat karunga".

KK:- Darr lagta hai Amar kahi Ram wapas apni purani zindagi mein na chala jaaye

Amarnath:- Eisa kuch nahi hoga. Tum yeh sab sochna bandh karo. Mein taiyaar hota hoon. Party ke liye late ho raha hai.

Evening,

Ram is getting ready for the party. He looks dashing in three piece suit. His blue colour denim shirt and a black coat go perfectly with him. His nicely gelled back hair made him to look more handsome. Before leaving for the party he checked himself in the mirror thoroughly. He looks very confident and a devilish smile in his face is a sign that he has planned something for the party.

Ram came downstairs. Amarnath is also ready. Taking permission from his mother he left to the party with his father. KK is surprised to see her son. She never saw her son ready and happy like this.

On the other side,

Priya is also getting ready for the party. She wore marine blue colour sari with a short sleeve blouse. Big jhumkas with a matching necklace, matching bangles on her both hands. Mascara in her eyes , black liner and a lip gloss. She looks no less than an angel. She made her hair into a bun. Aroma from her can make anybody crazy for her. She looks epitome of beauty. She is a dream girl for any man. Her elegance can make anybody fall for her. She is the woman that any man wants by his side.

She is ready for the party but at the same time she is worried for Pihu. Rajat's idea to send her to the KM not pleased her much. She did not oppose it but she is not happy too. Only reason she said yes because she knew Ram will not be there in KM and at the time KK and dadi can spend some time with Pihu. Priya is nervous what if Pihu ask about her father. Will they reveal her the truth or keep mum. With so many thoughts in her mind she came out.

Priya with her expression asked Rajat "Kaisi lag rahi hoon". Rajat smiles and shows thumps up to her and said beautiful.

Rajat:- Chale?

Priya:- Rajat muje eisa lagta hai hame Pihu ko bhi saat lekar jaana chahiye

Rajat:- Priya it's a cooperate party. Pihu eise party mein aakar kya karegi. Aur tumse kiss baat ki tension ho rahi hai. Uncle aur Ram toh honge nahi aur hum party se jaldi nikal jaayenge aur Pihu wahan rahegi toh aunty aur dadi ko bhi achha lagega. Dadi ne toh Pihu ko dekha bhi nahi hai.

Priya said nothing.

Rajat:- Abb iss baare mein jyada matt socho. Jaisa socha tha Pihu ko hum KM chodenge...OK

Priya nodded.

Rajat:- Toh chale Pihu...come on.

Rajat and Priya are on the way when Jyothi called Rajat. Priya can hear only one side conversation

Rajat:- Haan Jyothi bolo...Abhi hum dono deal sign hone ki kushi mein jo party rakki hai wahan ke liye nikal gaye hai...Priya hai na...Mein abhi deta hoon and he gave phone to Priya.

Priya becomes so happy.

Priya:- Hiii Jyothi..How r you...aur daijaan kady sab kaise hai.

Jyothi:- Mein bhi achhi hoon...daijaan aur cady bhi achhe hai

Priya:- Pihu apne cady didi ko bahut miss karti hai.

Jyothi:- Haan aur India jaane ke baad tumhe toh time hi nahi hai humse baat karne ka...kyun?

Priya:- Arre eisi baat nahi hai Jyothi. Sach mein office se ghar aane tak bilkul tired ho jaati hoon.

Jyothi:- Haan teek hai muje pata hai Rajat batate hai.

Priya:- Ek baar kaam start ho jaaye mein tere pati ko jald hi wapas bhej dungi

Jyothi:- Teek hai pehle phone Rajat ko do muje unse kuch baat karni hai.

Priya:- haan ek minute and she handover the phone to Rajat.

After the call

Rajat:- Pehle hum KM chalte hai waha Pihu ko drop karne ke baad seedhe party

Priya:- Sir zaroori hai kya...kya mein Pihu ko apne saat nahi le jaa sakti

Rajat:- Not again Priya...we already decided ki hum Pihu ko KM mein chodenge. Aunty bhi Pihu ka intezaar kar rahi hogi.

They reached KM.

Rajat:- Tum nahi chalogi Pihu ko drop karne

Priya:- Nahi Sir...Aap Pihu ko chodkar aayiye mein yahi aapka wait karti hoon.

Rajat:- Aunty agar puchegi ki tum kyun nahi aayi ander toh kya kahunga

Priya:- Pihu ko yahan chodne ka decision aapka tha mera nahi.

Rajat:- wow...Kitna badiya jawab diya hai...Priya smiles

Rajat:- Aavo pihu...Priya kisses her on her cheeks "wahan kisi ko jyada tang matt karna ok..Mumma aapko jaldi lene aayiye.

Pihu nodded and she left with Rajat.

Here,

At the party,

One by one guests are coming to the party. Amarnath and Ram humbly welcome each guest. But Ram is only looking for Priya. He is eagerly waiting for her to see. Finally his wait was over and Priya entered into the party holding Rajat's hand. Seeing her Ram's heart skipped a little. He stares at her from top to bottom with a mouth wide open. She looks divine and her perfectly shaped body made her to look more attractive. Every part of her body is beautifully situated. Her ears are equally decorated with earrings, her cheeks are very beautiful. Her attractively constructed neck was decorated with a necklace and other ornaments, her arms were decorated with bangles, her body was covered with a clean sari.

Not only Ram but all the men who were present in the party look at her.

Priya enters and hugs Amarnath dearly. Ram wishes he could do that. Rajat shake hand with Ram. Amarnath called both of them inside. Priya successfully manage to avoid Ram. Ram was unhappy that she ignored him but happy that finally he can see her.

Party started with an announcement by Amarnath followed by cake cutting. Amarnath and priya feed each other. Then she take a piece and feed Rajat too. Priya ignored Ram completely. Party begins in a full swing. Amarnath introduces his business and close friends to Priya.

Amarnath:- Priya inhe toh tum janti hogi Mishra ji. Yaad hai tum inke ghar par reh chuki ho inki beti ki shaadi thi. Aur yeh unka beta Rajiv. Inse bhi tum mill chuki ho.

Priya stare at Rajiv and remember what he told her one day.

Priya:- Bilkul mein inhe kaise bhool sakti hoon. Rajiv forwards his hand for handshake and said "Nice to see you again" but Priya folded her hand and said Namaste. Rajiv slowly took his hand back.

Amarnath:- Aap dono baat kariye mein baaki logo ko dekhkar aata hoon.

Mishra:- Priya shaadi par toh tum rukhi nahi. Abhi toh mein nana aur dada dono bann gaya hoon. Rajiv ko beti hui hai aur meri beti ko beta. Sunkar achha laga tum aur Amarnath ji saat mein kaam karne wale hai. kabhi mauka mila toh hum bhi kabhi ek saat kaam karenge.

Priya:- Bilkul nahi sir.

Mishra:- Jii

Priya(staring at Rajiv):- Mera matlab hai ki mera India mein yeh pehla aur aakiri project hai.

Mishra:- Achha

Priya:- Milte hai...and she left from there.

Ram is watching Priya continuously. She is not leaving Rajat for a minute. Ram becomes jealous seeing them together. His nightmares came in front of his eyes. Seeing them together Ram fisted his hand. His anger is at peak level when he overhears the talk between two of his mangers.

First one:- Arre tune aaj Priya madam ko dekha hai kya lag rahi hai.

Second one:- Dekha ek dum kamal ki lag rahi hai

First one:- Arre mein toh bilkul fida ho gaya hoon unpar. Unki aankhen, unki nazre, unka baat karne ka tarika unka sab kuch ...sab kuch bole toh sab kuch ekdum kamal ka hai yaar. Iss pure mehfil mein sirf wahi hai jo yahan ek dum hot maal lag rahi hai.

Second:- Hmm abb toh deal bhi sign ho gaya hai toh abhi jitna chahe dekh lena.

First one:- Hmm sirf dekh hi sakte hai. Hamari eisi kismat kahan ki hame inhe chune ka mauka mile. Sirf ek baar haat milaya tha jab deal sign hua tha. Mann toh kar raha tha ki haat chodu hi naa.

Second:- Arre meine toh suna hai ki woh Rajat sir unke pati wati nahi hai. Arre meine yahan tak suna hai ki unki beti ; arre wahi jo Priya maam ke saat aati hai woh Rajat aur Priya maam ki beti hai.

First one:- Suna toh meine bhi hai ki dono live in relationship mein hai. Rajat sir toh shaadi shuda hai aur yahan eise hi Priya maam ke saat ghumne aaye hai

Second:- Fir toh maze hai re Rajat sir ke.

First one:- Bass ek baar mauka mill jaaye Priya madam ke paas jaane ka. Hum bhi kam thodi hai Priya maam ko khushiyaan dene ke liye and both were started laughing.

Ram had enough of their bakwaas. He fisted his hand. He wants to punch both of them hard on their face. He lost his temper and goes near them.

Ram:- Just shut up u bas***ds. Ek baar aur tum dono ne Priya ke baare mein kuch bhi bola toh dekhna mujse bura aur koi nahi hoga. Tum dono ke paas kaafi information hai. Kahan se information laate ho. Baar baar bol rahe the na meine suna meine suna. Jara muje bhi batao kahan se suna tum dono ne Priya ke baare mein.

Both employees become very scared. They didn't see him like this before.

Both managers:- Sir we are sorry.

Ram:- Just leave aur aaj ke baad office aane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Tum dono ka jitna bhi milne ka banta hai suspension letter ke saat ghar bijwa dunga. Apni shakal dhikane ki bhi zaroorat nahi hai.

Both:- sir hame maaf kar dijiye...please Sir...aage se eisi galti nahi hogi sir...Sir please..sir mein aapke pair pakadta hoon...hum aage se eisa kuch nahi kahenge...kisi ke bhi baare mein.

Ram:- Just leave or I will call security. Both employees left.

Soft music is playing in the background. Rajat forward his hand and said "If u don't mind shall we dance".

Priya is little bit embarrassed. She said "No Rajat yahan sabke saamne" but other people forced her to dance with him. With no choice left she gave her hand to him and Rajat led her to the dance floor. Rajat kept his one hand on her waist and with other he held her hand. Priya kept her hand on his shoulder and both dance with the tune of the song. Priya and Rajat are smiling at each other and following the steps.

Here Ram's anger reached at peaks. He wish to kill Rajat right there only. He cannot see Priya with any other man. Ram in full rage and constantly glaring at them. All eyes are on Rajat and Priya only.

Music stopped and all other audience applause for Rajat and Priya's dance. Priya was embarrassed and came down from the stage. After some time everybody stops clapping but one person continuously clapping looking at Rajat and Priya. Priya turned to the person and her eyes glitter in happiness.

Priya(almost shouting):- Jyothi!!!!!! Tum yahan...omg I don't believe this. Muje bataya bhi nahi ki tum India aane wali ho; Rajat sir ne bhi kuch nahi kaha . OMG. It's a big surprise for me and she hugs jyothi.

After breaking the hug Jyothi said "Sorry Priya...muje strictly Rajat ne batane se mana kiya tha".

Priya:- Awww...Y Rajat Sir...

Rajat:- agar bata deta toh tumhare chehre yeh excitement thodi dekh pata

Priya smirks and hugs Jyothi once again.

Ram looks at them very confusedly. Rajat grins seeing them together.

After little pause Priya broke the hug. Jyothi saw Priya eyes become wet.

Jyothi:- Kya hua Priya

Priya nodded her head in negative and said bahut kush hoon...yeh bata dadi aur kady kaise hai. Woh kahan hai...aaye hai ki nahi.

Jyothi:- woh log aaye hai aur guest house mein hai.

Priya:- Pihu cady ko dekhkar bahut kush hone wali hai.

Rajat goes near Jyothi and side hugged her and gave a kiss on her head.

Jyothi:- manna padega tum dono dance karte waqt kaafi ache lag rahe the...Priya tumne aakir mere pati ko dance karna seekha hi diya...not bad.

Priya:- ohh common jyothi...Rajat is still a bad dancer and pouts.

Rajat:- what!!!!

Priya and jyothi giggled. By then Amarnath also came. Rajat introduces jyothi to Amarnath and both said Namaste to each other.

Amarnath then called Ram. He came and stands beside Priya. Priya looks to other side..

Amarnath:- Ram yeh jyothi...Rajat ki wife...and jyothi he is my only son Ram. Both said hello to each other.

Amarnath:- achha aap sab baate karo mein baaki mehmaano ko dekhta hoon

Priya:- Jyothi chalo na...dinner serve ho gaya hai aur muje bahut bhook lagi hai and she took her from there leaving Rajat and Ram alone.

Ram:- So u r married. Achha laga dekhkar. Rajat smiles.

Rajat:- Chale dinner ke liye.

Ram nodded...Somewhere in heart Ram is happy when he came to know about the relationship between Rajat and Priya. He felt light but at the same time he thinks"agar Priya Rajat ki sirf ek dosth hai toh Pihu??? Pihu ka raaz kya hai. Kiski beti hai Pihu????

Edited by luvsakshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...
kk itna support kar rhi hai ram ko...😆
the two managers are such an idiots...😡
priya rajat jyothi k convo is good...😛
continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
neel di...i am sorry to say but this part is like a filler.
ram is jealous n possessive towards priya that we know.
but plz story ko aage badhao na plz..
i love ur writing n love ur all stories. but plzzz iss story me priya ko kamjor mat dikhana. ram does not deserve any love from priya.
priya ko independent and strong dikhana plzzz.

i am very sorry if i have hurt u.
Edited by iluvusakshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...
How can kk support ram?
priya rajat jyothi k convo is good
Ok continue soon..


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Posted: 10 years ago
AK is doing good thing as he stoped himself KK to talk further about Ram wants Priya back. But seems Priya Is still tensed about Pihu but Rajath is with her and now Joythi also joined them. Ram did good by resticating both the employees who was talking Ill about Priya.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Suoerb n awesome pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jodude

nice update...

kk itna support kar rhi hai ram ko...😆
the two managers are such an idiots...😡
priya rajat jyothi k convo is good...😛
continue soon..


Maa hai issliye support kar rahi hai😆
Ram ko Pihu ke baare mein kab pata chalega
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn


Maa hai issliye support kar rahi hai😆
Ram ko Pihu ke baare mein kab pata chalega


jab pata chalna hai tab...😆😆 lol...😆
Edited by jodude - 10 years ago

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