RaYa SS:Destined to Marry *THREAD#2 PART-23 ON PAGE -67 13/1/16 - Page 41

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Posted: 9 years ago
Ram immense love towards Priya made the things turn in good way and she is save now among her love ones listening her fav8 song but who is the person behind this attack
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Posted: 9 years ago
neel di..where r u?
pl ye story update Karo na.
I am missing kiddo very much.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you so much for the likes and comments
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NOTE: I know im late , i know sorry also won't be enough so updated the part directly .

thank you for waiting

NO PMS GIVEN SORRY FREINDS.



DEAR readers if you want flo\w please read from part 20 ,so you will understand well as this update is lil bit investigating part . thank you
PART-23

she smiled while he singing , she loved the fact how Ram is openly flirting with her even in the song . she blushed while he saying " ll make love to you " she gazed at him all the way , until the song finishes her gaze on his handsome face dozed off slowly . kissing her forehead he too slept beside her on other cot .

His hand held her hand even in his sleep . both of their souls are dancing in the dreamy state .

Krishnaji , vikram and Rishab gathered in Krishnaji's room . they know that whoever the vilan is, he has his eyes on them and this family , Rishab used the highly efficient technology stopped the signals of every mobile from inside krishnaji's room ,and he has explained what they have to do tomorrow .This is very imp for them no one should get doubt on us . Rishab had a wicked smile on his face . come on come on I will play the game from tomorrow onwards . be ready

All went to sleep as they had to go for early work .

The next morning priya yelped with pain , she woke up with her painful moans,Ram too startled woke up from his deep sleep and he was right there bside her with in a moment. He immediately given her painkiller patted her back until she calms down . After sometime She felt her pain soothened, slowly she opened her eyes to look at him . It was 7 o clock , she felt hunger pans ,"Im hungry " Ram .

Ram had a grin on his face hearing that . if you are okay kiddo , I will make you freshen up on the bed itself , she agreed for it , after brushing ,he had himself given eco bath to her asking her permission.With the nurse help he has changed her gown ,she sat on the sofa while they changed the bedsheets and all .

After everything is ready Ram made priya sat on it , he fed her breakfast after that she fallen asleep . sudhir & shipra came Ram left for his work .

Rishab called to jailer seshu . Asusaul their plan Jailer seshu called the constable who is going to get the medicines from one doctor . He send him to bring the medicines .

Rishab followed the constable .He went in to one clinic there he has submitted the prescriptions there one wardboy collected them he walked outside of the hospital . Rishab followed him too.

The wardboy reached two story building , he climbed the stairs . knocked the door someone opened the door . the wardboy went in , after exactly 10mins he came with a pack of medicines in his hand . Rishab who was watching all these he zoomed his binacularis to get a view of that particular man .

He got shock of his life seeing the man .he really wiped his sweatbeads from his forehead .he hide there .he has his own secret team , he gave message to all to watch over this house 24 hours .he knws that they will give rest of the information he has reached jail before the constable reaches .

Waiting in jailer seshu cabin , when constable came seshu called him directly in cabin , asked him to keep the medicines here and told him to go for someother work .

The constable did that ,RIshab immediately checked what all they have been given .and when he saw the prescriptions got changed there were something on them . Rishab had some doubt he checked the meds , few powerful chemicals he found ,he had a wicked smile on his face .

Jailer seshu also astonished to see them .they all are merged with normal drugs but inside the medicine containing some other chemical .

Rishab : seshu ab ayega mazaaa . he quickly called to the pharmacy company ordered those meds and replaced with them . he asked jailer seshu to keep an eye on them .

Vikram went to bhandari's house , collected their financial information , if sruthi and sahil won't alive to whom that property will go .

Bhandari said I haven't written any will after that im yet to write .

Vikram calculated their property , its nearly 400 crores .and now no one has the right on them except Mr.bhandari and Mrs.bhandari .becz It's self earned by Mr.bhandari .and whomever slightest suspects vikram already questioned them but no answer came . and when they asked about priya he said she is in hospital . explained what all happened . They have started from there to hospital .

Krishnaji enquired about how the security jeep tyres got flatten , she had hiddenly kept some cameras in their garden ,except her no one knws , she was observing one by one and when she got spotted the man who is doing . she felt her head spinned180 degree angle .

She closed her mouth , how the hell this can happen ,she knws him from her childhood . Oh My God Oh My God she immediately captured it . as rishab said she has called some one to know wether the finger prints reports came[which krishnaji found when sameer got hit on her head in raya's room] or not if it's so she is sending some other finger prints just see wether these will match or not with them or not .

Priya opened her eyes , sudhir came to her , she was surprised and happy to see the her mom and dad along with Mr,bhandari and mrs.bhandari . after their chit chat .

While going they said , you are like our daughter priya , take care of yourself , we don't want to loose another daughter . priya eyes moistened . she asked them wether they are going to balanand orphanage or not . Mrs.Bhandari said yes we are going daily priya beta .thank you so much . than they left , shipra try to feed priya but priya was adamanent she will have it with Ram . meanwhile sudhir called Ram he came with in 10mins before that he ordered some food to himself and priya's parents . while shipra is feeding priya ate . ram and sudhir too ate . priya asked for discharge , Ram simply smiled at her . you don't have any pains , she said Nooo .

Ram asked the other doctor to finish the formalities . he will take her by evening until that time he will finish his work.sudhir and shipra stayed with priya .while ram went for his work .

As they have discussed before Rishab , vikram ,krishnaji met in krishnaji' s room . Rishab so what you people find out .

Vikram : Yes as we expected , it might be because of property , Bhandari has owned 400 crores , Its his own hard earned money .if sruthi and sahil not alive the property will belongs to Mr.Bhandari and Mrs.Bhandari they haven't written any will after that . so definitely it will be their relatives side .

Rishab thought for a while , we know only Dr,Karekar is Mrs.Bhandari s brother , then what about Mr.Bhandari's side , quick vikram find out his side relatives details . he immediately called to some of his officers and given the work to them .

Rishab turned to krishnaji , mam now wht you find out . did you enquired about the person which I mentioned .

Krishnaji : Rishab I don't know why you got that doubt on that particular person but but when I got to know who has taken the air out from secutiry jeep I I meediately enquired about the person and send the finger prints also for confirmation .

Vikram and rishab stunned to know krishnaji kmws who has punctured the air in tyres , they both in unison asked who is that

Krishnaji voice was too low and she revealed the name its non other than " bansikaka "

There is a pindrop silence in the room , vikram stilled in his place .Rishab shouted "Gotchhaa " the two of them stared at him , rishab controlled himself sorry sorry .

We are very near to reach the vilan . don't worry , don't say anything to bansikaka b normal with him asusaul .by the way may I know mam how you know its him . Krishnaji said after the night incident where Sameer got hurt I have instilled few hidden cameras in garden , I haven't tell anyone . so I have gone thru with it found that and she showed the camera footage again .

Rishab wants to see furthru to know what happened and bansikaka only kept the keys in priya;s car too. Krishnaji hasn't seen this . she has freezed the moment where he flattened the tyres .

Krishnaji : rishab what you find out .

Mam I followed the constable got to know the person which he is getting medicines .

Krishnaji : who is he providing medicines .

Rishab : It's non other than karthik ...

Krishnaji & vikram : you mean Dr.Karthik

Rishab : yes Dr.Karthik . .. assistant of Dr.Ram kapoor yani your son , priya's husband .

Vikram : what the hell . oh him not understanding what's the connection between those murders and priyas murder , why these are behind priya what might be the reason .

Now they have some information but all are in very much confused state .

Rishab : ok ok I know you all are confused and I know whats going in your brain , until im there I won't let anything happen to priya nor anyone of you . you get that just gimme another two days and in mean time we will catch the vilan red handedly . until that time you people has to behave normally with everyone .

They said yes to his condition as they believed in rishab and his investigation .

By the way vikram did you remembered you told me , you saved karthik when you going to catch hold of the caller at that time you saved karthik when he fell from the bike right .and where is that place .

Vikram : yes,its sagar colony , that day we went to catch him but unfortunately he missed and at the same time karthik met with an accident and saved him .

Rishab : na nana ,,, vikram vikram how come u missed him vikram , they trapped you also , if my guess is correct it was karthik who called priya that day and he acted infront of you that he is innocent .otherwise hw come he comes there that early and at the same time of yours . just think

Vikram : thought for awhile and syncronsing all he was like "oh shittt "

Ok now we will dispurse and I will accomadate the works to you tomorrow . just be silent and do our work . he tunlocked the device .

Before rishab said anything immediately vik got a call from sudhir , neha wheeled to hospital as her labour pains got started .

Vikram to the same and he rushed from there , rishab called and said I will take jailer seshu help for other things and you enjoy this time all the best . vikram smile a bit and left from there . at the same time Ram started with priya from hospital ,Ram hasn't informed priya that neha is in hospital , sudhir told to ram and he left from there . priya back to house , they have stricten more security ways around the house .

At the dining table priya sat with all the family members , krishnaji helped nuts to sit there , rishab signalled her to sit bside her . but she sat bside priya and asked abut her whereabouts .

Rishab instantly looking at nuts , nuts felt rishab's gaze on her . she cautiously sat . after finishing nuts sat on lawn . rishab came there .

Rishab : hiii

Nuts :gazed at him top to bottom ..hmmm what you want , why you flirting with me ??

Rishab : umm u know .. u r sweet and cute , hmm I like you

Nuts : so

Rishab : I will marry you

Nuts : r u mad , do u knw anything about me

Rishab : I know everything about you

Nuts : im already in love with someone , just don't waste your time ,saying this she walked from there limpingly

Rishab : I knw you love karthik , I will prove he is not that innocent than I will make you mine ,yoyo he is happy and he went to his sleep .

If they could have taken a proper step here they might have saved two more lives but they estimated only priya's point of view here so theywere relaxed . if they could have thought a mere enlarged view it could have been different .

Priya went to her room she wants to take a shower ,she was feeling light , wether she is correct or not she don't know , tomorrow what will happen she don't know she just wants to give herself to Ram completely by herself.

She went to washroom , took bath , she selected a white colour saree from her wardrobe ,she don't know how to wear properly so it took half an hour to drape it . Ram almost knocked three times wether she is okay or not .

She convinced him all the time but at the 4th time Ram wasn't listening so she has to open the door without pinning her pallu .

When she opened , her pallu steps slipped from her shoulder and the single layer pallu formed on it's own , the water droplets still dangling from her hairends .he was mesmerized by her beauty .

Abbbabbba what is this Ram , im okay , im telling na , wait for 5 mins 5 mins but you are not at all llistening .and she about to close the door before that he held her wrist.

What is this priya , are we going somewhere .

Now priya blushed ,realising her state and his question .

Priya: woo..ya.. I mean ,she is unknown to all these feelings but she wants to go ahead with it tonight .she hugged Ram tightly , I love you Ram , I love you so much she had tears in her eyes , she felt time could have stopped here itself ,she felt fresh and secure in his arms.

He hugged her , he understud her motive but he don't want to go for it now , priya got his hesitation , she gazed at him she sealed her lips with him ,her knees buckled up it was so intense that she lost herself in him totally . no one kknows when they came on bed ,they have soon slipped in to birthday suits . his strong hands praised her nude globes , she felt escasty with his touch ,she arched her body to give more access to him , his hands working on her body like an expert , each inch he is exploring with his thristy tongue , the love encounter came to final stage he made her enough wet , baby r u sure you okay with it , he don't want to feel like last time , she gave green signal to him "love me Ram " make me yours . His flesh entered in her cave exploring new paths , she cried first he consoled her sealing his lips on her , 1 , 2 , 3 ... don't know how many mins passed ,their moans and groans echoing in the room , the moon hide behind the clouds both reachd climax he kissed on her forehead .wiped her fresh tears , she said I love you To him , he said the same to her .

They have finally slept peacefully after soo many days .

Hey dear readers I know I know im very damn late .hope you like this update .

And guess who is the vilan is . Thank you for your constant nagging to write me the stories .stay blessed .

Precap: priya sees the paper bundle which ram hidden from her

Neha gives birth to babygirl. They came to know two people got murdered .



Edited by luvsakshi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg Omg...Omg...woowww am just speechless...I am u know having goose bumps after reading the part...Its totallyy..totally worth waiting all these months u knw...I mean..All praises will fall short for givig such a marvellous part..
It was a rocker n stunner...both...👏⭐️👏
Am like yeah yeah fast read it read it Viji but wen I read Karthil's name I was 😲 shell shocked...😲😲😲 He is part of the villain batch I never ever thought so...and he was making the calls😲..Deyyyvudaaa...em.shock icchave😲

Bansikaka😲..this is once again 😲
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So jail mein culprit is doing all this kya...Now wats this property angle..and Bhandari's realtives??? Ye kaun se naye characters aane wale hai...yaar.

And wats that double murder again..who is gonna get killed now..🤢

And...Neel...I dunno h much u laughed..but I rofled for Abbabbba...imagined ur kiddo over ther😆

Ahhh romance se.end kiya na... but want more...plzzz re...update a romantic part plzzz...hi hi hi.hi😳

Gals its truelly mind blowing..👏
Update next part very soon and it was like racing while reading the story...👏
Edited by armanz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for updating.
Nice update and eagerly waiting for the next part.
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Woww Woww. .. wt an update
Very interesting as usual ...
superb
Beautifully described ...
Loved it very much
Hey bansi kaka n karthik help kar rhe villain ko... I didn't suspect them ...loll
Continue asap
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Edited by jodude - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb part n plss update takdeer n other ffs n ss plsss
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ohhooo waoo update is here ..almost aftr an year.. Hey dont be sorry rathet the best thing is you started it again... Thank u soo much... bansi kaka md kartik are hepling the criminal... Rayaaa scene awsumm ...Bt i want moree raya..:p:p.. Plzz complete ''sirf meri ho'' also plzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for late

Its like omg writwr ko salam
Hmm so confusing each of those three got diff persons except main one
Karthik, bansikaka,
Interesting
Is that main vilan blackmailing them to do ?
Or they all partners?
Any relatives?
So mam wants to eat with his man only 😉
Is that from Mr bandarkar side?
Or from Mr kapoor ki side?
Will see
Can't expect the next two murders Mr& Mrs
Or k&b

And Milan hogayi short hain lekin mast hain 😉

Waiting


Abbbabbba Neel kiddo kiddo jaise rahegi na
Edited by lpsakshi - 9 years ago

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