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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi



i think sirf hum dono hi desperate hai update k liye 😭


I am also there!!😉😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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5 days over since preview... Lekin abhi take update nahi mila hamme😭😭😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rags06

5 days over since preview... Lekin abhi take update nahi mila hamme😭😭😭


Hiii
hmm she is nt feeling well

but i have her half done update will try to update today
what say

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .pia_12.


I am also there!!😉😉😆



Lol Even I m also there
i was tooo eager to find out the vilan re 😉


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Originally posted by: .pia_12.

WAITING 4 the update!!
Plzz update!!!


Will update soon

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Originally posted by: luvsakshi


Hiii
hmm she is nt feeling well

but i have her half done update will try to update today
what say


Half or full... Kuch bhi chalega😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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for the second thread
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From Neel :hey guys , The writer [girija] is not feeling well from past a week , She dont want to reveal so i didnt tell you all , but as her rt hand was injured and she is on treatment and Physiotherapy .If she takes off from her work she will be able to give updates regularly .Please sorry and she will try to give updates soon .
This is half part only , which was left in middle and imporatnt to future updates .so please read and leave your comments .


PART-14

He got up from her slowly both walked out of the room by the time krishanji already sat in the car waiting for him . Biding bye to Priya . she walked back to their Room . She sat on the bed she observed how the bedsheet crushed . Her cheeks turned to red already thinking about what had just happened . she felt aroused when his hands on her body , she want more from him at the same time she wants to stop that . What it is she is unable to explain herself but one thing is clear she likes his company very much and already she is missing him badly .

She suddenly remembered something rushed to hall where she bumped into Niharika , who is coming from office .Heyyy careful careful she held priya in her arms .

Priya profusely saying sorry ..sorrry sorry I didn't see .did you get hurt . she asked very cutely .

Niharika stopped her ,ssshhh Im okay , why you are in a hurry what happened ?? Di wo Mammiji also went with Ram so wether she will come back or not I didn't ask I just wanted to know so going to ask bansikaka .

Niharika , achha baba where did Ram go leaving his newly wedded wife all alone in the room she winked at priya . Priya blushed "Delhi , some urgent work tho " she sat beside her .

Achha tho Why mom will go she might gone to send off to him , If so why she didn't take me than priya asked cutely . Niharika smiled at her ,ha ye bhi sahi hai but Priya may be mom has some work in the middle you will get bored na so that might be the reason . why you have any work with mom .niharika enquired priya .

Listening to priya's answer she burst out laughing .

Why are you laughing di,did I said any joke ,Priya stood up with mock anger ?

Niharika achha baba sorry , You can sleep with me as Sameer is coming very late and I will ask him to sleep in guest room okay . Priya still silent .

Niharika turned to her side ,You know what My brother gave correct name to you "Kiddo " You are such an kiddo , You are going to ask mom to sleep with you .. God again she laughed

Im scared to be alone ,last time also mammiji slept with me when Ram didn't come .Niharika thought priya will cry if she laughs more . so she said okay okay sorry , she may come late , I will freshen up and come will have dinner than go to bed . Priya arranged everything on the table by the time Niharika came ,she served both of them while discussing something both ate . Priya ran to her room she took few of her books she went with Niharika to her room .

Priya squeled with joy "OMG diii this is just beautiful , their bedroom is just filled with Blue &Pink colour combination , the tables , chairs ,bedsheets , walls of the colours ,cups , books cover pages , glass items , wall clock .everything is in these two colours , a huge photo frame of Niharika & sameer was hanging on the wall .That was splendid . Priya observed the room , she admired each thing how beautifully they decorated . Niharika is smiling all the while looking at priya's excitement .

You liked it ...Oh my di liked No no I loved it she suqeled with joy , this is just marvellous hats off to your patience to arrange all the items in these particular colours priya still admiring the room .Niharika is observing priya , She has so many questions in her mind but she is too younger than Her , she don't know how to brought up the topic .

Diii .. diii please show me your album na please , I loved to show saying this she went and brought two thick albums . Priya settled on the bed keeping aside her books she checked her mobile for any of his msgs as already she sent 13 msgs to him unfortunately today he is not replying to her msgs , quickly she changed her expression already niharika saw this , Priya was gazing at the photos , She spotted Ram , OMG di Ram is so thin here , she smiled like a kid took few pictures in her cell , she beamed with joy ,Di when did your marriage happened I mean how many years back .

Niharika said Its almost 8 years Priya .

Oh so Ram is 23 Hmm same my age at that time , she admired for some more time than the couple photos came , she was asking something about her sarees , their poses some relatives and all .she turned the next album they have been to so many places ,all these 8 years they have roamed all over the world . Priya asked so many queries , which year ,where it is , how do you felt .

Niharika expected priya may ask the question that all usually asks her but surprisingly its been an hour she didn't raise that question . When she completed the album Niharika said "Priya you don't want to ask any questions " rubbing her hands lemme come out of my dreamland first ,I just watched a wonderful pair love story in pics .Niharika too laughed for her teasing .

What you expected me to ask you di .

Niharika face went pale , That why I don't have kids yet she downcasted her face . Priya squeezed her hand ,di you may have your own reasons , you don't want now or your husband wants to roam few more countries or etc . If anything is there you will tell or Ram will tell , If you didn't tell neither Ram didn't mention means it's definitely going to hurt you so I didn't ask .

Niharika wiped her tears , Thank you for understanding but I will tell you . We had been trying from the 3rd year of my marriage but somehow it's not working .

Have you undergone for tests di ,

Yes not only me , seeing my sarrow he too underwent for tests but nothing got worked up Priya because as our reports all showing normal . And whatever they wanted to do they have done everything .

Hmm If you don't mind can I see the reports di , sure she walked up to her desk pulled out a file and gave to priya .

Yes that's true she has been undergone for many but surprisingly everything is normal but they don't have kids . She remembered one case when she was in OBG class , her mam explained same type of case but the reason is stress levels . Brilliant why don't I try on di ,her thoughts went on .

Di shall I ask one thing , What you are doing I mean may I know your designation and how much stress you are having by working on it .

Niharika , Im looking after Finanical department priya , why don't I have stress ,I have so much stress and Gynaecologist told me to reduce your stress levels , I have been attending the stress managing classes also .Nothing worked out .

"umm okay , You want kids right "

"Niharika looked at her "Yes , desperately "

Ok will you do anything for that priya asked her

"Yes " I will do anything ..

Than quit your Job .

Whattt ??I can' t do that Niharika puzzled

HMmm di please just listen to me once . Will see for 2 months if it wont work than we will not go for it ,what say and I will take an appointment with a doctor pleaseee

Ok But what I will do sitting in home .. Niharika questioned

Who told you ,you will sit in home. I have a schedule for you . come come taking a pen and paper Morning with your husband [ a simple ,sweet ,loving walk ]

Breakfast , sending him to office . Gardening for sometime , There is a orphanage here teach English for the kids . Than play with them 4 sumtime , come back and have lunch take rest for a while . than read a novel . than walk in the garden look after which is needed to be cut or something .

Than watch some thing in Tv or prepare dinner wait for him . Nag your husband ..

What say ..Niharika was laughing while priya telling and noting down the points .Di I will take the appointment tmrw itself , what say ??

Niharika smiled will see .. Umm shall I ask one thing priya .

Giving the note to her , ha ask ask what you want to ask ?

"err , Umm Why your first night not happened yet ?? ""

"Priya stared at her with horror ,How do you know it ?? " I will Kill This Ram for sure ..

NIharika smiled ,God really priya you are a kiddo , I just asked and you blurted out the truth , Priya closed her eyes murmuring "SHIT"

She closed her face with her palms ,diii this is not done ,nooo ha hmm umm .she moaned like a kid and she was totally embarssed unable to look at Niharika.

"Niharika keeping hand on priya's shoulder , Why priya is something bothering you kya "

Priya nodded her head in negative .

Don't you love him ??But I so can see your eyes are pouring so much love for him and you are constantly seeing your mobile for his call that means you are missing him but why not you both ..

Priya ..uummm I .. I don't know , Im in already full stress di , This one by one murders , marriage , new surroundings all were you know new for me ,coming to Ram , I behaved like a jerk with him but he was so good and he loves me so much , I want to see him happy but im ending up something which I don't even know . She had tears in her eyes while telling this .

Niharika sidehugged her "Priya just give him one chance to prove himself , than you wont stop him saying this she giggled priya too giggled with her "

Krishnaji came and she knew everybody must have eaten because Its rule she only kept until 8 o clock they have to wait for anyone , at 8 at anycost every member has to eat , she too served and waited for priya's call as she knew priya will call her .

She waited for 9 .. 9 .30 now its 11 but there is No priya's call nor Priya came to her room ,Than is the caller told truth or whats happening . But as per her experience Krishnaji studied priya totally she is grown up in very much pampered conditions .

Few hours back , krishnaji gave all instructions to Ram she send him off coming back to Kapoor mansion . she got a call from unknown number .

"Hello Mrs .kapoor .. You are happily sending your son to delhi but here your daughter in law is going to enjoy with her boyfriend tonight . "Before krishnaji says something the caller got disconnected .

Krishanji insticts showing something is wrong . she slowly walked to Raya'S room ,she was shell shocked Sameer is going to that room . sweatbeads formed on krishnaji forehead ..she continued her walk when she reached the door she heard "aahhh " Sameer moaned with pain . she briskly walked in the room ,switch on the lights , she can hear someone is running thru the garden ,Sameer got a hit on his forehead . She pressed his wound on His forehead.What the hell you are doing here Sameer , get up and sit here . she called niharika to her mobile asked to come to Ram's room once . Niharika turned to priya who was just attended Ram's call .

"Hiii How are you ,Why didn't you called me when you are boarding "

Priya I will just come "Sameer came " Niharika signalled and went downstairs .

Here Ram "hii my sweet heart , I had to talk with the hospital people so I don't have time to call you as that was regarding with one emergency cases so sorry baby , Love you and im already missing you my kiddo "

"Im also missing you Ram , Feeling bored with out you "

Achha sachhi ..

Muchhi ..she laughed .

Hmm I want to hear this smile forever my angel .Okay tomorw im going to be busy and I may not call you until evening but if anything happens just call me .

Priya said ,okay baba I will .

Im missing you kiddo , hmm the kiss was just omg its very tasty just like you .

Priya blushed hearing it , her breathing got hitched in her throat . Ram felt that I want to crush your curves in my palms that too nudely not on fabric . He heard her small gasp . I want to roll my tongue on your shallow pathway . Priya clutched the duvet in her hand .

And want to shower the kisses on your bare back .

Priya unable to control ..She said "pleaseee "

Why , don't I have right to touch you , I so want to suck your lil hearts , those will fit perfectly in my palms

"Ramm " she moaned his name ..

Ram smiled imaging his effect on her ..while Ram seducing her with his rain of sexy talk .

Downstairs Krishnaji applied a bandage to Sameer s forehead .Niharika was stunned and shocked asked him "what happen "

That's what exactly my question "what happened and why you are in this room ,krishanji controlling her anger as the caller made her thoughts went ahead like this for a moment " and where was priya still that was unanswered question for her but she cannot just ask them so she asked what he is doing here ?

Niharika oh mom , Priya is waiting for you so I took her to my room told Sameer to sleep in guest room for today , as That room AC is not working when he called me I said sleep in Rams room for tonight .

Than Sameer why you walked slowly like a thief . Krishnaji questioned

"Aunty I just saw some shadow entering into their room so thought of catch him red handedly but he is too fast something is there in his hand he hit me with that and shoved off from that window "

Oh god now krishnaji understud This is all plan ,The killer wants something from priya what is it . Her brain is working sharply and she decided to ask priya only direct before that she mentally noted down that she wants to talk with Sudhir & shipra once again .

Niharika:Ma priya is alone in the room ,you just be with her tonight ,I will take care of Sameer .

Sameer :No no you stay with priya im okay . if aunty goes to sleep with her now she will ask why ? what happen ? etc

Krishnaji :Yes Niha , Sameer is correct ,I will take care of him if he needs anything ,don't worry , she called bansi kaka to keep him company . both left from there .

When Niharika came to room ,Priya was giggling and saying "Please stop it Ram " how you can say that .

Niharika smiled at her childishness , how come someone wants to kill this innocent girl . She slipped herside of the bed thinking about Sameer and the incident .

Priya looked at her telling Bye to Ram ,she disconnected the call .

Ram smiled looking at his phone , he kissed her photo drifted to sleep .

will post the next part soon .. for that you need to shower your comments ..

G!r!j@


Edited by luvsakshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First of all lemme congratulate u for the second thread.. Ek story jo aapke friend ko dedicate karne ke liye likha.. thats a run away hit am so so happy for u two and feel great that am also part of this happiness as this story was planned n gifted for me as I love thrillers.. Love u loads gals and Muahh Muaahhh Muahh rabbit bhi dediya lelo..

And even in ur FULL busy and being subjected to pill n lock n damaged lappy.. U update.. Hats off to U Neel.. Ur spirits are truely high.. 😆

And I just wish the writer to get well soon n take good care of her.

Coming to the update I just loved it gals. It was mind blowing as usual and was fun to read at the same time.

So Priya missing Ram's touch.. still she doesnt know what she wants but its good that she is able to undertstand that there is something that she needs to have.

And Lol its diff to imagine Niharika as Ram's di.. I mean the actress who played but its ok as her character is coming now n then. And poor Priya she was mocked up by her SIL for her being scared to sleep alone.

And Priya's reactions seeing Nih room was like Kiddo wala excitement.. And she got her books to study.. good student Priya is.. 😆
So how come Priya didnt exclaim seeing her man so young n charming.
And abt Kids matter Priya is so compassionate and her sharp decisions I was smiling while reading that. Nih too might be bowled out by that. I know kiddos do have very good effect in alleviating our stress levels..
So what the @*!^=# bugger told KK ji abt Priya.. grrr and this Sameer na arouse suspicion. But Goddd who entered their room and how?? Did he want to take something or harm Priya? Why he told so to KK ji if he wanna steal somethng?
Anyways KK ji had a moment of doubt on Priya.. hmmm...

And the last part Oh my he directly bowled her with his sexy talk.. lol baatein karke melting her and her reaction was lil bit surprised me. Kiddo strtd reacting..
The highlight was Nih's Q n Priya ans How do yoi know???
Loved it to bits I am just expecting more frm U soon.
Thanks for pm.
Edited by armanz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rags06


Half or full... Kuch bhi chalega😉


mujhe b kuch b chalega. but plz jaldi karo yaar ek to yaha sakshi ki kami bardasht nahi hoti aur upar se aap ho k update b der se de rahe ho. pl update jaldi kari. take care giri di.

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