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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

Super preview
so some big surprise is awating for Priya form Ram



Thnak you so much
will update soonish

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

beautiful

priya missing ram
where priya is going...and y ram is angry
last parts seems romantic😉


Thank you so much
will try to update soon
Yeah she is missing him alreday


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .pia_12.

Di plzz update na😊
Jaldi !!!
WAITING!!!!


will be up with in 30 mins time

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: armanz

Wahhh kya update hai yaar.. I just enjoyed reading it. I read it instantly but u know couldnt post comment soon as I was busy wid sme other work.
Anyways it was just mindbowing especially the total part where Priya reacted to Sravan's stupid act in a more authoritative way. I loved her every dialogue esp the ones where she described about Ram and his love for her.Ram's heart might have doing "Dil garden garden hogaya" 😉
Such a fool and idiot Sravan is.. but still he doesnt deserve death dunn what will happen to him..
And the mrning scene was so droolwrthy.RaYa so close to each other would be a treat to imagine any time..
Finally he kissed her and oh my the KISS didnt happen as Priya ran from there.. pagal Priya for how many days you will be a kiddo yaar..😆
Sravan got nicely from Ram and he is being migrated to another college. Aina Juniors Seniors nu love cheyadam ento.. Grrr...
So now Priya is missing him and worried that he might be angry with her.. Feelings aakhir start hogaye..
Apple kheer.. Yummy hoga lekin few people hate apples na.. kya kare..
Krishna ji gave company to Priya and she slept happily..
I just loved and rofled for Kiddo ji and Apple kheer.. 🤣
Btw Kiddo name hoga ani hw he thought re... lolzz
Anyways one thing I am sad sad is that bad man saying I will keep u worried always Priya.. am just tensed u knw..
Lved it ttally..Keep giving more..
I res before ur pm..



Aww Thank you so very much yaar . 'lovly comment
Hey thats okay i can understand ..
awww im glad you liked it haha ne generation love
juniors and seniors 😆 .. YOu knw what i meant

yeah Ram could have felt soo good to hear from her .
why he will deserve death Ram sent him to another univerity ..MIGRATION 😆 only

hai na how close they are in the morning ..
Haha KISS didnt happen as she ran from there
Lol lol rofls how many days she will b kiddo will sePriya is missing him

Lol viji ,I think you want apaple Kheer now it self kya >>
Lol that also will come in next updates ..How he thought kiddo ji .. .. Lolz
rofls
hmm will see what that bad man will do to them
Thank you so much for the lovely comment
will try to update soon


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: armanz

Lovely preview..
Niw Priya is missing him and showing anger that he isnt responding. good for their love life..

Where did she go getting dressed up like an angel..and why was Ram angry?? And aweee he told he wanna taste her..kaash kissie ho jaye.. Baby plzz update to night plz plz plz..

It was awesome Neel..I enjoyed it..



Thank you so very much

hehe priya is missing him
and he isnt responding her calls.. you will read in next part where she has gone ..
wil see wether kiss happens or not ..

will try to update soon re

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Posted: 10 years ago
This is unedited part , sorry for the errors ,Please bear with it ,Neel is pestering me for the update so don't have time to edit .


PART-10


She very well know How much Ram loves her but to this extent she didn't expected ,her heart flutters with joy at the same time she felt scary what If someone harm to her , some one try to kill her as like previous . she finished her college she got late today , she was very eager to see Ram so she ran to their room .But the empty room welcomed her .First time she felt like crying . she felt all alone again . His smily face flashing infront of her eyes , His naughty talks ringing in her ears .

She hated him so much from the beginning of their meet , But now all her walls broken by seeing his love , care and over possesivenes towards her .What exactly she is doing she doesn't understand only thing she wanted to do now is , Wants to see him,wants to be with him .But how can she call him he is not attending her call tooo .instantly she recollected that as He saved her name as Kiddo .She gritted her teeth ,atleast to question him about this she need to talk with him , She called him again but there was no response from him .

She muttered under her breath " I love you Kiddo , I so love you , but he wont respond to my calls nor my msgs ,and upon He hasn't even called me grrr ,I will definitely ask him this .Bansikaka came in "Mam , Krishna mam is calling you "

Absent mindedly she went to meet Krishna , Seeing priya in same attire Krishna ji asked "What happen priya , is everything okay .Priya shot up her head saying yes yes mammiji ,It's just ..Umm nothing .

Than why you haven't freshend up yet .Priya don'T have answer for it , Errr Im just calling him he is busy it seems "Won't he come today also " She asked in a childish tone . Krishnaji had a broadgrin hearing it . She loved her son and daughter in law actions . She is enjoying it whatever they are doing ,Their home was brightened up with priya's arrival . Ram is daily coming to home as well as Niharika& Sameer stayed back in India . So all are having masthi time pulling each others leg .

Seeing priya's pouty face , Krishnaji said "waise ek bath kahu priya ,If you help me out this I will give a nice Idea to talk with My son "

Really priya's face lits up "Ok ok tell me how can I HELP you mammiji " Krishnaji preparing the list of the invitees to the Reception party , Priya is arranging that as alphabet's order , they finished the work together in 30 mins ,Now tell me mammiji what is that plan ???

Krishnaji relaxed in the sofa "Will tell you First go and get ready "

But why

Wear that peacock colour anarkali dress

Are we going somewhere ???Priya's is very eagr to know But krishnaji is simply denying to tell her

Get ready as your best , Than I will tell the tip Now go she pushed her to their room .

Priya briskly took bath , wore what krishnaji choice , she gave touch up for her cheeks , neatly kohled her eyes , taking her bag she walked to Krishnaji s room .

Krishnaji looked at her , appreciated her effort , giving a bag to her hands , Driver will take you to hospital , Have your dinner there and come back . priya's heart paused a beat , Oh My God is this your plan mammiji , She sat there "Nooo I mean I can't Interrupt his work " her body went numb

Everythin wil be fine , do what I say , won't you belive me priya ,priya gazed at her a min , umm I will but I don't know where is he and how he will react seeing me .

Don't think all these , I want to send this dinner with driver but seeing your dull face im sending you so common go ..Nowww ..

She already instructed the driver to take priya directly to Ram' s chamber .

Hospital :

Priya merrily stepped inside , the glass doors automatically opened and welcomed her in , the AC coldness touched her milky skin danced on her nerves crazily , Few faces turned to see the beautiful lady claded in anrakali suit . Driver lead her way to Ram's cabin which was situated in 5th floor .While he pressed the lift button .Priya said "we will go by stairs I want to see the hospital "

First floor is filled with Only OP suits for consultants ,as it was night almost it was empty ,The second floor is arranged very neatly with a good nursing station , one thing is attracted more in this floor is Far end she saw a beautiful garden and beside that Kids Play station . She thought that must be Paediatric section . 3rd floor is highly attached with different cubicals in different shapes . Reethu was in her rounds and she saw priya there ,she hasn't belived her eyes , she called Priyaaa

Priya turned to find Reethu there , Omg Priya , You dressed to kill Our Boss haa!! She winked at her , Priya blushed "No yaar , I just came to give his dinner , he has not come to home from yesterday "

Reethu : Ha yaar NABH inspection is there in 10 days , this is the third time Ram sir is checking everything personally so he might be busy in that .

Ohhh priya exclaimed . than they can hear Ram's raging voice , Priya glanced at upstairs she said bye to reethu instantly reethu stopped priya ,Ram sir is in very angry mood don't go priya .

I won't disturb him , I just wants to see him saying this she ran upstairs .

Reethu : priya ..

Sisters : laughed now who ever she is , definatly gone , comeon will see what will happen , few of them eagerly females went after priya to see wrath of their MMD , reethu unmindfully walked with them praying he should not get angry on priya .

Priya reached the next floor , Ram's upper part covered with white coat , he is questioning one short fellow about something , nothing is going to priya mind except his vision .He looked so handsome , the sweat on his forehead made him look more beautiful , he was desperate , frustrated , he is controlling his anger on that opposite person ,his fists are clearly showing how angry he was ,oh my the steth in right hand might be feeling suffocated by his squeezing .by this thought priya smiled herself .Every body sisters ,doctors are staring at them .The argument is going deep , No only Ram is asking he is standing like lamb infront of a lion ,Ram lifted his hand to ran his hand thru hIS hairs .

Priya moved thinking he might be gonna hit The opposite person .

"Ramm"

Everyone got sacred and thought Now he will start another ranting But everybody's expectations went wrong , when Ram's face lits up with a unknown glow .His tensed mandibulars formed into a smily line , He stepped closer to her "Oh My , Kiddo , What a surprise " He sidehugged her whispered "Missed you " only she can heard that , the pinkish shade came over her cheeks .

Gazing at him again "Do what I say ,never ever repeat this ,Now you can go "

Sisters and the other duty doctors started whispering who is that lady ? Omg how Sir went calm seeing her ? Now everybody observing her ,Ram carefuly taking her to his room .Lift is ready for them .Priya gazed at him ,will climb stairs please I want to see .Ram laughed aloud , That's why i call you kiddo . Come come he lead her all the while she was in his side embrace .

Now the sisters turned to Reethu asked her , Who is she mam ,Ram sir just went calm seeing her .Reethu is also in shock seeing that ,she whispered "His wife "

Sisters and the other staff praised her , her charming nature ,her effect on Ram . Hehe ofcourse eaqually we are drooling our own raya .

Ram lead her to the fifth floor ,she was glad to see the environment is too beautiful and the interior designing is highlight ,its actually feeling like five star hotel ,everything is neatly very neatly organised. He lead her to the side way .There she can see few rooms was strictly prohibited as they were locked and instructions written .He opened the door for her , She thrilled to see his room , Is it your office looking at the Bed and Tv everything is there in this room,its actually like a hotel room.

Kiddo Its my room , whenever I will be here I will sleep here only ,The other rooms are for few of great doctosr will come from foreign countries and other cities for them I allocated them .

She was awww for this thought , she sat beside him ,The driver already left the bag there .So madam why this surprise and you know what You looking stunning and umm and sexy bhi ..

"Ramm "

What ?? won't I praise my wife ha !! .. She blushed even more , she was new to all these but his sexy voice dragging her more to drool on him .He removed his coat keeping at aside .so what you brought .He opened first box it was empty haaa with a slip inside .

He read that and smiled "Mom bhi na "

"Dear Son , Take her to dinner date , Sending her in your fav colour ,enjoy both of you " he forwarded the slip to her , she gasped " oh my " what a plan mammiji .

Both looked at each other and smiled .He caressed her cheek "YoU looking beautiful " Umm His urge wants to take her in his arms , made her undress here itself , want to ride her cave deeply ,but He is waiting for her to accept him as her hubby whole heartedly .

Seeing his confused face "She kept her hand on his shoulder ,What happen Ram, is something bothering you ,when she didn't get response she jerked him .

Coming out of his thoughts , Huh nothing

Share with me Na , What happen Ram ,seeing the concern In her eyes ,He tugged her towards him ,motioned himself more on her ,with that she lost balance fallen on the bed their legs touching the ground . his face in her neck , yes something is really wrong with me kiddo , whenever I see you , I wanted to Hug you ,I want to thread my fingers in your silky hair , holding your face in angle ,like this ,His hands working speed on her Staring at her eyes deeply "I just wanna taste you "

Before she knew what's happening His lips landed on hers ,He groaned sweetly ,he murmured taking her lower lip in his control "How soft " He completely leaned on her , his toe Is caressing her leg , His lips sucked the sweetness off her lower lip ,she went numb for few secs ,she is feeling his hardness on her stomach ,his warmth and his colognae making her go crazy ,He kissed softly touching his forehead with her's , You will kill me with your presence baby .

You know how much I want you right now ,her doe eyes registering what just happened the connection between them right now is beyond her control .

Iam sorry kiddo but you are too sweet can't resist myself " now his lips held her lips ,he grazed his tongue on her upperlip she parted in daze his tongue went in her to suck the sweet nectar from her .His hands working onn her back very pointedly in minimal places , she moaned when his hands squeezed her gluteal muscles .he held her waist in his fist tugged her more to him , he made her roll on him making sure not leaving their lips contact .priya is not kissing him back neithr she is reciprocating his act , she is just melting in his strong arms and surrendering to his lips . her trembling hands touched his broad shoulders . when he felt she is suffocating for breath ,he slowly lovingly withdraw his lips from her . she closed her eyes , gulped a large amount of O2 rested her head on his chest .


Edited by luvsakshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my God...am just Awww after reading this part.. They kissed no no he kissed her finally... oommphh wala ending tha yaar.. Writer needs an applaud here

I was grinning while reading Priya's trouble as he didnt lift her call..She is totally lost in him now. Vey good sign of aage badhe. 😉

So Krishnaji made a plan and gave that idea to Priya.. it was sweet of her.Lol who will not like RaYa antics...afterall they are the most adorable couple ever..

And Priya bhi Priya hain got ready but scared to go to her hubby dearest as he may be angry if she does go.. How can he be angry...?? Kiddo ji aakhir wifey hain..

So she is happy when she was roaming in the hospital. Frankly you described the corporate hosp so well..but the highlights were garden n kids play station. Will they build like that??

Oh my RB was pulled back by his lagaam.. Kiddo.. And lol poor sisters were shocked to the core.

And I loved the hospital re.. Never seen such one but I do know somewhere they are built. And then banggg Kiss.. he tried to control himself for many days but seeing here so near and so close he couldnt stop himself.. He was lil bit aggressive but hope kiddo ji wont cry.. 😆..

Really gals fantastic asusual. loved it to bits..continue soon...Am eager to read more..plzz galss..

PS: Sravan thing I completely misunderstud re.. when the bad man said next Sravan I thought he is gonna kill him but I didnt think he is gonna use him to trouble n hurt Priya. Sorryyy..
Edited by armanz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Bindass Mindblowing update.


Hats off to the writerji for the whole execution of raya's first step of their love life. Soo sensuous it was.

Loved the descriptions of the hospital and the happenings thr.

Salaam Namasthe MIL...lol

Waiting eagerly for kiddos reaction.

Thanks for the pm.
Edited by lalmadhu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Again sorry what to do ek tedi aadmi ne mujhe busy rakha hai

What an update what I have to tell about this romantic sensuous or cute
Wow she is missing him badly but ziddhi kiddoo she is not admitting
kiddos hi aisa hota hai kya ?
And she is afraid what if something happens to her ye tho baat hai
And she is in verge of tears I know how it is very well
Haha she is murmuring to herself wow how cuteee
Ek kiddoo hi dusri kiddoo ko achchi tarah samjh skata hai hai Na Neel
Yeah this line is very true jahan jahan kiddoo hai vaha vaha khushi ka rounak aata hai
And Krishna ji s thoughts are lovely
Peacock color I think she like it most I heard from her
She is eager to meet him haha lovely and she can't hide her excitement
How sweet Krishna ji kash har ladki KO aise hi MIL mili tho kitni achchi hogi
Aww kk ji planned well but madam is hesitant to go
The way u mentioned about hospital is nice
Hmm all are drooling over her can we have that dress pic please
Haah reethu is hahaha
like her concern for kiddoo

But she is not aware of our kiddo naa how beautiful and charming she is ek hi muskaan me sabh kuch settle hota hai
Haha sister's omg lovely now they can know how and what is this kiddoo ji can do

Short fellow koi hai kya uski hsptl mai
And she is admiring Rb ram haha suffocating and I think what if she is in that position rather than steth
Wooow rams reaction is fab and "OH My, Kiddo, "🤣
🤣

hahaha love it muaahaaa

How sweetly he is explaining her everything haa and that's we are also liking this kiddooo

Great thought of ram
And she likes it very much
Their convo is romantic
blushing hahaha lovely
Blushing kiddo superbly penned down
How sweet he is waiting for her approval in spite of his urge

Aww his thoughts are dangerously romantic and action is utterly seductive
Haha mostly so many will react for that type of kiss like that only and it was sensuous and romantic loved the way it went on.

She is numb and getting time to register poor kiddo [LOL
she may afraid for sec what was happened but she is enjoying it lovely

Edited by lpsakshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic update😊
Continue soon

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