RaYa SS : Destined to Marry *PART-13 on PAGE-137 on PREVIW ON PAGE-145 - Page 47

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

beautiful preview

full of raya

waiting...

Originally posted by: krunalidivecha

Awesome preview
Continue soon

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

Congrats dear on completing 50 pages of this SS

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

Wat a dhamakedar preview
omg so many suspense

Originally posted by: bishop22

I have read all the parts so far.

You have written beautifully.

Thank you

Please pm me when you update

Originally posted by: Sandy198

can't wait for the update 😃 i just love the kiddo thing 😆

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

Waiting waiting waiting

Originally posted by: rags06

It is 28th...

Waiting waiting waiting😛

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

Take your own time

Originally posted by: armanz

Superb update .Will comment tomorw in detail . Thanks heavens I am able to comment sooner than expected..

Wowww what a lovely part..It was just Raya magic all the while. Ram teasing her flirting with her and gladly accepting that. It was the best starting a part can get.. I was grinning through out the part..Ohh God did I say anything.. was so sweet and how innocent it was. When she said papa thinking she was wid her dad it was crystal clear why Ram should call her Kiddo 😆

Aweee the way she was lost in his charm was so romantic.. His fragnance was pulling her it seems 😉

And how sweetly she said friends.. 😆 infact he was expecting more than that.. hai na.
So RaYa are ahead in their relation good very good.
So papaji is so thoughtful but why did KK n RK talked against it.. poor Amar might be shocked. And wats that Krishna ji staying away frm family?? Whats this story now?


So both went together and I think she is intern so she has to work in hospital.. so why did they go to college?? Same campus?? Phir bhi.. Lol.. dont kill me for this Giri..

And the entire campus scene was so good and fun to read.. haan she was authoritative wid him as he is her man.. aakhir pati hain boss..

Lolzz ye gals aise hi hote hain.. Priya jaise gals bhi hoe hain and such enthu gals bhi hote hain.. All will drool on him it seems.. i just wanna know whether Priya will feel J or not??
And yup Kiddos are also known as "sexy".. So just a small request make Ram call her sexy one or other time and Priya ka reaction kaise hoga aapko pata hain writer ji.. Plz haan...

Loved the update totally.. I mean it was RaYalicious..feel good n heart tickling part.. Wanna see their love bloom fully and ofcourse I missed the thriller element but no complaints as I know why this update wasnt having that.

Super se upar tha aapka writing.. Salaam namaste writer ji aap ke abilities ko.. Kya baat Kya baat Kya baat..
Chummeswari wala update tha..

continue soon..

Thnks for pm