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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#431

@ Part ~ 5

Fabulous update. Ram soo loves her. The whole fb part is presented very professionally. It's very interesting.

Amazing work dear.

Thanks for the pm.

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huma malik

@Huma.Malik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#432

It's awesome. Looking forward to the next update.
cont soon & thanks fr the pm

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#433

@ Part ~ 6

Ohh...sad start. The parents lost both their kids...heart wrenching...

Things are beautifully transforming between Raya. Hayee the confession and the hug is soo wonderful and very realistic. The flow is well maintained. Thumbs up for that.

Hoping for more Raya moments. But waiting for when Ram will know the entire fiasco ~ saath saath hamein bhi thoda aur revelations mile...

Splendid work dear. Thanks for the pm.

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akilagoud2

@akilagoud2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#434

awesome update
continue soon
thanks for pm

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#435

OMG...OMG...OMG...Super cute update.

Rayalicious update.

I'm soo fully immersed in Raya charm. I'm all smiley ~ smiley.

Gaawwwddd...Ram's reaction for her friend req...lol

Loved Priya bonding with the family that too in a casual manner. The whole college scene was well handled.

Thank u soo much for such an update. Enjoyed it to the core.

Thanks for the pm.

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Jyothi

@jodude

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Posted: 10 years ago

#436

woww..!! superb update..

i like whenever ram calls priya as kiddoo... he is too cutee...😛

loved all scenes...

continue soon

thnks for the pm...😊

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contactcharu

@contactcharu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#437

very nice... progressing very well...
pls continue soon

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#438

Awesome Story is well progressing

Priya is not able to stop herself from drooling over her husband and Ram is also not living any chance to tease her back. A very cute moment between husband wife in the room.

AK and KK Ram parents are so supportive with Priya

She is so fed up from her husband being called Kiddo by him everytime and her professor mu them. Priya friends were drooling over her husband Mr Ram kapoor and he was also talking casually with all of them.

I am enjoying very much continue soon and thanx for the pm

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#439

Part 7

wonderful update

full of raya scenes ..loved it loved it loved it

Raya convo...AK suggestions...gals talk everything was beautifully penned down each.

Now Priya slowly liking his company.

He is flirting with his wife and Priya is blushing throughout.

OMG how many questions gals are asking aur Priya hai ki jyada kuch janti bhi nahi Ram ke baare mein.😆..She even not carrying his photo and atlast gals took many photos of Raya.

good going..loved it thoroughly

thanks for PM...continue soon