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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: ic_2000
Excellent os.
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#52

Originally posted by: contactcharu
very nice
awesine OS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Surish
Sizzling hot, sweet, sexy, intensely breathtaking feisty romance!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: akilagoud2
superb Os
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#55

Originally posted by: krunalidivecha
Superb update
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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: jodude
wowww... superb update as always...
u r update text is so colourful ... its always gives a feeling to read the update...😛
very romantic updatee...
continue soon...
thnks for the pm...😛

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: janu_2006
beautiful OS..
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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: bpatil3
The hidden emotions were depicted so well, Raya can act crazy, make u emotional n here its perfect.
jitni bhi shikwe the, gile the sab bayaan hogye, jitni bhi chupa hua dard tha sab apna raasta dhundliya. superb there romance and teasing ki toh andaaz hi alag hai.

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RaYa ki toh hear bast hi Nirali hair... its always special too read abt them they can make anyone crazy really...
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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: sandhyasn
very very romantic
Raya opened their heart and both realised their mistakes
then both danced in rain...and the consummation part was superb.
penned down beautifully...loved it
please continue this...if possible...wanted to see priya's reaction when she woke up in the monring😉
thanks for PM...superb OS

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I m only working on Priya's morning reaction kuch hatke likha hai iss baar like... khud hi padh Lena...
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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan
Awesome written Os
The emotion of two soulmates who was feeling empty without each other. Confessed they can't live apart and will ablr to handle the further situation.
Raya was just lost in their love forgetting the whole worl around Ram was adamant he can't leave her for Peehu sake and wanted to unite with Priya agian.
The two soul became one again while fullfilling the desire and love they feel for each other. Continue writing...

hey aanchal dear thanks for visiting here & giving ur comment along with like it means a lot to me...
yes dear now they won't separate b'coz of anyone Ram won't allows her be away from him now n not for sure after this night they will be together again... next will be fun to read for u all do wait & watch will update soon...
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