RaYa OS: Being With you Part - 2 on page 8 24-9-2014

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Cute_Saakshii12

@Cute_Saakshii12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awesome OS di!!!
eagerly waiting 4 next part ...plz continue soon!!!
And thanks 4 pm

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Dhristi

@Rayaland

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Thank u so much neel di for dedicating my wish in ur os awesome di pls continue soon

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sparky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

A beautiful story written very nicely. Jaipur track is my most favourite track in the serial. It reminded me of my childhood and teenaged days. The middle class ss family culture... their struggles for small things... and try to find happiness in small little things always fascinate me... coz I belong to the same class. But unfortunately in my opinion that track was not well executed in the serial. I love reading any fiction on the same track.

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youandme272000

@youandme272000

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Its superb...
Lovely track... plz update d nxt part soon 😊

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Mani

@Mani-RK

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

I didnt expect OS from you on rams bday

Shocked and surprise😳

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akilagoud2

@akilagoud2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

awesome os 😉
thanks for pm

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lpsakshi

@lpsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

thanks for pm

If you like this then will come with the next part soon

ye kaisa line hai

koyi unlike karega kya

awesome love the trio bond

its always amazing

and raya a desire for each other just just no words to tell

loved it

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iluvusakshi

@iluvusakshi

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

fantastic os. update soon
i can visualise rayapee though ur story. i wish k yaar aisa hi cvs ne hume serial me dikhaya hota. those 3 were alone in jaipur but happy family. cvs has missed the cute romanntic moments in jaipur teack. but jane do. through ur os we can relieve it . thans for this lovely os. and pl. update soon.

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Janilover

@Janilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

awesme os
waiting for 2nd part
thanx for pm

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Very well written so loved it
Jaipur track will always best after 5 year leap
Ram so want to spend sometime with his wife but usually Priya is busy with students and chores of house.
Father- daughter are so cute talking in their own language. He totally spoil her with so much love.
But still in a very busy schedule he manged to steal her for sometime and having his wicked ways with her.
Priya was so happy to learn about the new deal Ram company got and for this they are having a little kulfi party...
Hey continue soon looking forward for next part thanx for the pm...

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