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Posted: 11 years ago
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priya came back ram yelled to his wife who has been married to for one year today was their anniversary and it was ruined by a heated fight between them


they were supposed to spend a nice dinner at home and just be together for the rest of the night be in each other's arms is their favorite pastime but, it all turned upside down by one stupid and idiotic phone call


they were about to sit down for dinner and enjoy each other's company then priya's phone rang she was getting the dinner ready so she asked ram to answer it what a mistake it was their best friend rajat he was a good friend of them he was drunk by the way his voice slurred with every word he said he was asking for priya but ram said she was busy so ram told him to leave a message for her he wanted her he said he'd always loved her from when they meet till' now he said he was sorry for when they broke up and wants to get back together i never knew they went out when ram wondered angrily in his mind he hung up the phone forcefully and threw it across the room letting it collide with the wall


ram why did you throw my phone i need that for work priya yelled turning away from the dinner she was cooking but was interrupted by her angered husband why didn't you tell me you went out with rajat ram demanded an answer priya looked shocked at first and then her eyes softened i didn't tell you because i didn't want our relationship to be weird when we started to be together i didn't tell because i didn't want you two fighting she explained well you not told me i m your husband you can trust me i guess you don't trust me he bellowed a fuse broke in priya's mind snapped i never said i didn't trust you i do when did i ever say i didn't and i don't know why you're freaking out by i think you're being ridiculous she yelled well i don't i thought we would tell everything to each other huh i thought we promised that he yelled ramm i do say everything to you i told you all my secrets and lies even when it hurts to say them you could have just ended the call put the phone down then just ask not getting all pissed for something that happened it doesn't f**king matter you're supposed to tell me everything as my wife for god's sake ram walked in front of priya you know what i just realized i just thought that why did we get married if we are going to fight he folded his arms why did we get married what i can't believe he just said that priya had tears already at the edge of her bottom eye lid why did we get married are you not thinking about the love we share the promises we made what about how we make each other feel did that just go out of your mind tears finally broke the dam in her eyes fresh tears leaked out of them or it's that you don't love me anymore she choked back a sob ram's eyes softened from the sight of her tears but he was still pissed i didn't say that i just want us to be truthful to each other i just don't understand what to do with you anymore he yelled but as soon as those words left his mouth he regretted them but he didn't say anything


priya's childhood wasn't great so people would tease yell shout hit they did everything they could to make her feels like nothing when working with a group they'd always say i don't know what we could do with you anymore so the words that had left ram's mouth hurt her down to her core




priya just let the tears run freely now as she looked up into ram's eyes i m sorry if that's what you feel about me it's all my fault but ram you just broken one promise that we said we always keep priya looked down choking back another sob is that we would always be there for when we need it physically and emotionally i see that you are here but i don't see you heart anymore priya ran she didn't know where but she just had to get away she ran out the door and into the road ram ran after her but he just to slow for her speed




priya priya came back i didn't mean it he repeated over and over


he truly meant it


she was hurt she didn't feel wanted and that wasn't the best feeling that you could feel her vision was blurry and she was running out of breath but she had to keep running he was still following her


ram is finally at least a block away from her so he could see her from a good angle


she wasn't thinking running into the roads late at night idiot she slowed down but she should kept running

priya look back and



bump a drunk driver hit her down and kept driving on


she lay on the road feeling worse than ever before red was starting to color the black road ram ran as fast as he could after he just saw his love be run over by a car priyaaa he fell on his knees next to her immediately hold her in his arms she was bad a long deep bloody gash runs across her stomach some blood pouring from her head and blood already pouring out from her pale mouth tears start pouring from his eyes priya has her eyes halfopen she isn't breathing right they are labored priya it's ok then they'll fix you up stay awake please he pleaded she just stared blankly to his eyes i m sorry it's all my fault I shouldn't have ran out no no it's no one's fault don't say that his tears falling on her chest i love you ram and can you do one thing for me he said with a small smile i love you too and i'll do anything he held her hand kiss me she said more like a statement he leaned down and kissed her on the lips nothing passionately

his grip tighten on her he gave a peck on her forehead his tears falling on priya's face he kissed on her eyes he hugged her more tightly crying copiously


ram panics on seeing her in this condition ram carries her and rushes to the hospital


priya is immediately attended to by the doctors


doctor tells him do not worry Mr Kapoor hopefully she should be consious


ram is cursing himself that all his fault and cry ram is sitting outside priya's room


in the morning the nurse comes to check on priya when priya is murmuring ram ram


nurse calls the doctor who in turn informs ram


ram: priya priya open your eyes priya i hear only


slowly priya opens her eyes


look at ram their eyes meet and a smile reaches both their faces ram has tears in his eyes priya tells him through her eyes not to cry


i am sorry priya


no ram


shhh priya he moved to bed sat beside her he took her face in his palms made her to look at him still she closed her eyes he gave a wet kiss on those teary eyes of priya she relaxed a bit opend her eyes to see him feel his touch his presence his care towards her her eyes dont cry priya i m there with you i love you i love you


she thrws herself on his broadchest crying copiously i miss you so much and i love i love you somuch ram but you dont love me anymore i know hitting on his chest you dont love me no priya i love you more than myself


saying this he hugs priya lightly priya has tears in her eyes on what ram has said


but she began to relax in his warm embrace ,he patted her back to soothen her ,she slowly relaxed in his arms telling i love you dozed off peacefully in his strong arms

he moved from her to laydown on the bed but she clutches his collar tightly not wanting him go off he gave a feathery kiss on her forehead and laydown beside her they both cuddled and slept peacefully

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luvsakshi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one
the emotional turmoil of both well written
Aww priya got hit by a car and Ram is in tears
superb
and the ending is good
Keep coming them 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os..
haawww priya hit by a car...
nice ending...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome os n emotional too bt all wells that ends wells
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Posted: 11 years ago
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One phone of Rajath ruined the beautiful moment between Raya. Ram unintentionally said the hurtful word to Priya which cause her to run aways from house and had a accident. But now she save in his arms where she belong...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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finally Priya is there where she belongs ...in Ram s arms
very emotional update
Priya survived thank god
otherwise people dont survive in these type of accidents
have witnessed one so experience tells
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice OS !!
Do write more 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Priya is for Ram and Ram for Priya... so well written about their emotional turmoil. Enjoyed it Thank you.
Few people are born to ruin other"s lives.. so is Rajat's character.. 😆 but RaYa cant be separated ever.
Thanks for pm.
Sorry for being late.

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