Query from RAYA Fan - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

18

Views

1.7k

Users

10

Likes

26

Frequent Posters

LovingRaYa thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Go ahead
will be waiting for your Os
rags06 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#12

OS

Thank you Balhians,

I've been a silent reader for quite sometime before becoming a member in this forum and as of today I want to dedicate this OS to our beloved RAYA towards the ending of their wonderful journey. Its been while since I attempted in writing anything but you have all been an inspiration for this trial.

RAYA -SAGA

25th anniversary:

The sun rose over KM which was bustling with activity in the preparation of the silver jubilee celebration of the wedding anniversary of its king & queen. But Alas !! The Mr. & Mrs. Of the palace is no where to be seen. In search of them as we slowly peep into their own green kingdom, we get to see the king sleeping away to glory, probably tired from yesterday's back to back meetings. Though "THE RAM KAPOOR" has transferred all his properties and responsibilities to his children he still couldn't change the habit of being a boss for the past 40 years. Even today he presents himself in all the meetings either to support his childrenor simply to watch with pride at the way the children manage the business. Sound from the changing room informs us the presence of the queen there.

Mrs. Priya Ram Kapoor, mother of 4 children, fresh from bath, with dripping from hair, trying to wear her jhumlas in one hand comes to wake her beloved. She stops in her track seeing her husband sleeping peacefully innocent as a child with his mouth slightly open. On second thoughts she slightly benda over him, thinking " aey Mr. Kapor bhi na. Char baccho ki baap ban gayi lekin aaj bhi ek baccho ki tarah sorahi hai" she slightly ruffles his hair. When she turns to leave, she was stopped by a tug and a sweet Good Morning in his half asleep husky voice.

P: Mr. Kapor.You woke up?

R: Ha.. Wo kya hai na, bin mausam bearish aagayi. So Had to wake up.

P(noticing the droplets on his face from her hair, she sits near him ,wiping his face with her pallu): Sorry Mr. Kapoor I didn't mean to disturb you.

R: Come on Priya. If you are going to wake me up like this then I am ready to wake up anytime.

P: Oh ho Mr.Kapoor. Now don't start your romance in the morning. Go and get ready. You are getting late for you office.

R: his is not fair madam. Today is our anniversary and you didn't even wish me till now.

P: Happy Anniversary Mr. Kapoor. Now go.

As she tries to move from there, he pulls her hand and she safely lands on his broad chest. Taking her in tight embrace

R: Not so easy Mrs. Kapoor. I want a wish in our style. If you forgot let me remind you.

Placing his palms on either side of her face, with a deep eyelock

R: Happy Anniversary Priya. I wish to spend the next 25 years of my life and much more if God permits with you by my side. Each and everything of you makes me fall in love with you more and more everyday. With you I feel like a complete man. I Love You Priya.

Saying this he pecks on her forehead.

P(with slight tear in her eyes): Mr. Kapoor,you are the light of my day and the star of my night, My day starts with you and enda with you. Each and everyday I thank the god for giving you to me as my better half. I pray for your innocence. I pray to him seeking another day with you. I love you. Happy Anniversary Ram.

She leaned on his chest listening to her favourite song, his heart beat.

After Ram shouts for Priya from the changing room.

R: Priya. Priya. Where do you keep my things yaar. I don't find a single thing where I keep them.

P(coming from the kitchen): Uffoo Mr.Kapoor. what happened? Again started? Every morning same problem. What do you want?

R: Where are my Cuff links yar ?

P (taking them from the cupboard): Here they are. You keep them somewhere and scold me for that. This is not done.Now what else?

R: My Watch?

P: here

R: My wallet?

P: here

R (with a sheepish smile): my tablets?

P: here

R ( rolling his tongue in his cheeks): My Kiss?

P: Her... So this is the matter. Mr. Kapoor you are the father of 4 children. Keep it in mind.

R (taking her in a hug): So what? I am still a husband to my lovely wife.

P: You are impossible Mr. Kapoor

R: Priya. You know what. I may be impossible. But you are irresistible. Moreover you have spoilt all my habits such that I am unable to take even a single step without you. What will I do without you?

P:You neednot worry about that. I have no idea of leaving you.

Sorry guys I thought of writing a short OS but our RAYA memories made me to make it into 2 parts. All your comments are welcome.

thelostgirl thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: rags06

Thank you guys for your support. i am on the way to post my update. But unfortunately due to some mistake in Capcha my post was not posted and since i didnt save it all got erased. Sure will post it tonight. i am typing everything again. please wait for sometime😊


take ur time
will be waiting
thelostgirl thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#14
lovely os
where s the part 2
LovingRaYa thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#15
It was short but very cute
Haye Raya morning romance
after 25 years of marriage both can't get enough of each other
P.S. Hey edit ur thread that u have updated ur Os so other can also read
rags06 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#16
thank you. actually i tried to edit but i didnt know how to do it.
rosinagoor thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#17
I will comment soon
Edit your First post & Change the title As OS/SS/FF & mention the page no
Then only other people read & Comment
Edited by rosinagoor - 11 years ago
Rayaland thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Superb yaar love the morning wala love of Raya pls continue soon
rags06 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#19
i tried the edit option but only the post could be edited and not the thread name.
Thank you for the help. Awaiting your comments. I will update the 2nd part tomorrow. Raya's party.😛

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".