SS: DHADKANEIN Part 15 Updated on Pg 139 on 17.10.2016

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peeyara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#901

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Ramji doc k Khud k personal hai 😆 😆 😆
Golde unki natkhat mastikhor Beti hai ,Jo Mumma ko saare rhymes baar baar sikhati hai lolz

Haan yaad hai mujhe k Viji di ke paas unke personal Ramji hai 😆
Aww such a cutie she is...she is making sure k her mumma dont foget anything ❤️

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Malati

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Posted: 8 years ago

#902

Originally posted by: peeyara

Haan yaad hai mujhe k Viji di ke paas unke personal Ramji hai 😆
Aww such a cutie she is...she is making sure k her mumma dont foget anything ❤️

Haan ,bahot active hai wo Kitna cutely baat Karti hai u know ❤️ 🤗 ,ek Jagah pe nhi rukti 😆

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peeyara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#903

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Haan ,bahot active hai wo Kitna cutely baat Karti hai u know ❤️ 🤗 ,ek Jagah pe nhi rukti 😆

Aww i love talkative bacche 😳 bht zyaada cute lagte hai but most of the ppl hate talkative ppl

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umayal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#904

Hi dear (writer),

Its a beautiful story dear..

Thanks to naseem😳, due to her reply in this post, the thread was in first page and i was able to read this story...

Naseem i wuld return your favour😆 by giving a summary of what i felt on reading this story which in turn will remind u the story...and i am sure it will, since U know the length of my summary..😆

I hv read 13 parts, reading the last posted part..after finishing will come up with the post on what i felt...

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peeyara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#905

Originally posted by: LuvSSever
Hi dear (writer),

Its a beautiful story dear..
Thanks to naseem😳, due to her reply in this post, the thread was in first page and i was able to read this story...
Naseem i wuld return your favour😆 by giving a summary of what i felt on reading this story which in turn will remind u the story...and i am sure it will, since U know the length of my summary..😆

I hv read 13 parts, reading the last posted part..after finishing will come up with the post on what i felt...

hey Uma u read this one too😳 pleasure is mine 😆

sirf mai nhi viji di bhi thankful rahegi for ur update 😆

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umayal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#906

Hi dear...

As I said before,since the thread was in first page and Ur title 'Dhadkanein' hooked me to read the story..And the pleasure was mine to read the story...thanks for penning it down...and special thanks to naseem😳... i was able to read another superb story other than her superb ones...😊

Though I loved to be an enginner and being one, I always see 'doc' profession with so much respect and good doctors are always kept on a pedestal by all of us...

So the first point interested more was to read a Raya story on such a backdrop.

Raya being doctors and the story revolves around them and mostly in hospital... too good..

Certain terminologies we know and we came to know more of that sort, about the things in hospital and how things handled here... realistic in most sense since its written by a doctor.. good to know all tht..

Then now coming to story, there are many parts i went awwed...so beautifully penned down at many places...though i am not a believer of love at first sight, your Raya won me over it...I wanted to believe for them😳

I can visualize the story as i read...Raya and VikNeha all coming before my eyes...

But Trust me, rather raya, the most lovable character in your SS and won my heart hands down was Neha.. oh i loved her to the core... I hv close loved ones similar to her too but I sooo wish a friend like her, who is so much of life,chirpy and with so much care ,love & concern...

Her charactersation was superb... And I love Neha-Priya friendship bond to the core.they and their bond are so lovely here...

All the awesome foursome were great, be it Ram, priya, Vikram,Neha..

Ram ,the arrogant, attitude wala top surgeon, but who went head over heels in love with priya and a completely changed man now.

Priya, as always the down to earth, sweet,soft lovable doc with anger shown to her love ram and neha alone...

Vikram, the ever helping friend and a cutie lover who handles both love and friendship with so much care.

Neha, i so love this girl, the ever witty, lovable, lively wire with so much love for her friend and as always keeping her love vikram at her commands and love them both equally...

And special mention to Nutz, she too was good but her part was less, likewise krishna and dadi were good too..

I dont know where to start and where to end ,to explain the story i read,

I think it might go into pages...😳😆

Ok i will try to cut short...😳

There are three parts of these 14 parts that i luved more to read..

First one is part 4 , where ram yelled at priya, priya being hurt and pouring her heart out to neha, about her turmoil, confusion on her state,loved her heart talk to neha...

Then part 7, where that low life Raj attacked priya, ram saving her, her vulnerable state, ram trying to console his lady love,his soothing words, again hw priya become uncontrallable infront of neha, all 3 of them trying to find a way to soothen priya, all 4 feeling helpless, ram anger infront of MD, finally his words to priya when she was in sleep, vikNeh visualizing it...

All 4 people's state of mind and actions well written there...

And then part 8...where ram confess love to priya when she is sleeping, again when she is crying after getting up & reminded of tht incident, he consoled her with his words, tell abt his aim, aspiration and looked at his loved one for approval, she approved him by saying i stand by u always, and he hugged placing his hands around her waist and dug his head into tummy..aww...

And then neha's anger on not allowing her in and she melted just at the sec of hearing her name frm priya and throwing her into priya's arms..another aww... their love snd concern,understanbility of each other..

Then some fun moments between ram,neha and on tht injection episode..overall nice..

And i luved this dialogue below...ram telling tht he felt something afrer priya's eyes asked

"tum mujhe kaise chot pahuncha sakte ho Ram" ... oh tht was bang on,exactly wht priya's eyes told him..he interpreted her so well..

And priya's dialogue to neha on , saying those three words doesnt hold importance since promise for lifetime is already made and all she said following that was superb too..I feel same so..

This story had

Many fun elements, laughing instances ,many instances due to neha presence:

Vik insisting on priya's safety due to neha dhamki..

Neha's Radhe shyam...😆

Priya after coming to know about vik- neha, her plan to mk neha reveal, tht bouquet boy was hell scared..

Ram teasing priya at hospital...

Ram,priya,nutz lunch and teasing there..

Ram and neha encounters at neha home after priya hurt, doodh wala and all..😆

Finally toofan neha 😆blurted out truth to nutz,

Then neha's comment on bangles and priya mom at ram home

Many very emotional moments :

between Raya after priya miserable attack, all their confessions after tht..

between all four of them , between priya-neha , between nutz-priya-ram

Many light hearted moments :

fun ,teasing between Raya and neh-vik too..

Beautiful raya moments,

Raya first kiss and all their phone talks after tht..😳

She missed him so much..oh baby hw she misses him and neha pulled ram from office to her house for priya,.awww...

Natasha reaction on knowing raya love, her reaction,feelings,hurt and then consoling all were nice too... overall a nice mixture of all... there r certain update tht i felt it shuldnt stop at all..

And finally krishnaji came to know all by watching Raya and on nutz hint...

Finally ram's side all clean, he got approval for his marriage from both ma and dadi , approval from dadi to pursue his dreams too due to priya's help...so far all going well...

I am eagerly waiting to read the next update...

I knw u wuld be so busy with ur profession and as well as personal ones, so when this story is updated on ur convenience , i wuld read for sure...

Sorry for such a lengthy post, i tried to tell what i felt on all 14parts and post ended up like this😳😆

Edited by LuvSSever - 8 years ago

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umayal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#907

I know the previous post is too long and lengthy..aadhat se majboor hoon😆 .. i culdnt stop...

I told naseem, tht i am giving the summary in my post and u can know the story from it..

But now i think she wuld kill me 😆for that lengthy post😆

And she may say, i wuld hv read the story only again instead of reading ur post😆

So lemme give a short summary of story only here...

The main characters are

Priya - Doc , MD general physician.

Ram - Top CT surgeon.

Neha - Architect , priya's childhood friend.

Vikram - orthopedic surgeon , ram's friend and neha's lover.

Nutz - ram's sister and priya's junior in college.

Krisha - ram's mom

Dadi - Ram's dadi..

Sudhir and shipra - priya's parents.

Raj kishan - name to be ignored, a low life who harassed priya and a doc who works in same hospital as Raya..

Story is,

Priya and neha are childhood friends and now stay with each other in mumbai, priya wants to do DM, cardiology, so she looked for a placement that culd help her pursue her dream, neha helped in it thru her lover vikram to get a job in the same hospital where Ram is a topmost surgeon...

Seeing priya vikram thought she wuld be a perfect match for Ram, who so far postponed his marriage due to his dream of opening a chain of charity hospital for poor and needy.

Neha said she will help vik in bonding Raya but be sure not to hurt priya

Priya at first unaware tht vik helped to get job and vikneha are lovers..later she came to know thru viktam and made neha revealed too..

Main story was, priya's first meet and other instances made priya think RK was so arrogant and full of attitude... but her heart was saying something else..she culdnt understand.

Same way one time ram yelled at priya and she snapped bck with hurted tears, tht tears made ram feel something..

So both unkonwingly fall in love with each other but they themselves didnt realize, vikneha helped to realize but b4 giving it a form, Raj harassed priya, nick of time ram saved priya and thrashed raj to pieces and made raj to transfer to bhuvaneshwar too..

Then raya's care concern love story started...

Priya was on leave, ram,neha took care of her so well.

Nutz sister of ram,and priya's junior ,was so fond of priya and all praises ,since priya was the one who kept her on track according to her..but unaware of raya love, when came to know tht they hid, she was hurt but ram manofyed her..she was all happy for raya then...

Then priya's healing stage frm that incident, with ram,neha,nutz helping, raya confessing their love , ram said ILU, priya is yet to say those magical words though all other promise already made..

Nutz took steps to inform her home abt Raya and helped them to get krishnaji's approval... now both krishnaji and dadi ok with their marriage, dadi was ok to give property papers to ram too to help in pursuing his dream, priya manofied dadi on this...

Priya said she will inform her parents first, then krishnaji can talk to them...

Neha's parents are in dubai..she is there laadli daughter,they will accept wht she luvs..vikNeha are yet to tk their relationship forward.

This is the story so far.. and other dears if i missed something feel free to add...😳

Sorry naseem dear, if this was long too😳😆

Edited by LuvSSever - 8 years ago

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armanz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#908

PART 15

PRECAP :That has given by luvssever in previous post .thank you so very much dear

Ram pulled Priya and hugged her tightly and crying his heart out he said" I love you..I love you so much.. I am grateful to God for sending you to me. I love you" He kissed her on her forehead and lifted her in air yelling.. Maa, Choti, Vikram... dadi ne zameen bechne ke permission dedi Mumbai mein hospital shuru karne ke liye...its all coz of this angel...I LOVEEE YOUUU PRIYAAA...

I Love youu sooo sooo much muchhh...Priya was first shell shocked when he lifted her then got happy hearing his words and when reality struck her she turned into crimson red...she was hiding her eyes from everyone. Ram was in no thoughts regarding his actions and so he was just lifting her and pouring his love for Priya through his eyes...everyone else were enjoying the happenings with a broad smile and KK ji had happy tears seeing Ram. His happiness had no bounds and she too didnt want to disturb him. So she signalled to everyone and went away from there. Vikram followed her where as Neha and Nuts waved Priya thumbs up and suppressing giggles went from there.

When Ram put Priya down by that time Priya was totally lost in his eyes and he wasnt even blinking. He wanted to fill his every sense with Priya..Tears were pouring from him unknowinlgy and he was not even realizing it. Priya wanted to wipe them off but Ram held her hand and kept it on his heart.
"Am...am...I dunno what to say Priya..I just...its like..you know..I tried..I tried...but..I was feeling lost...but..I dunno..I never ever was able to get even a second chance. But today..she herself...its all coz of you my angel...God has sent you for me..for fulfilling my ambition..to make my life complete..I was just breathing...you poured life into that breath...pata nahi..tum...main...I..." he hugged her as if to hold her in his heart..so tight..so close and his tears werent stopping..

Priya was completely lost in his emotions and didnt say any as she was confused a bit..why did dadi say yes after I discussed with her..after all these years...??? this question was haunting her but she was in no mood to disturb him so she just stood calm in his embrace stroking his back as a mother does to her trembling kid.

Ram settled down after an hour and he left her slowly and was staring the floor. He was not feeling ashamed to hide his tears but he was totally shaken up even if it was a good news to him.

Priya wiped his cheeks and liften his chin...look at me...golu... Ram looked into her eyes. "I am so happy Ram..I know how emotionally you are connected to this project..but I didnt do any miracle or something..so its just dadi's love for you that she has agreed for all this. I dont why now but I strongly believe that she would have said YES only even if you could have persued the matter. But anyways am sooo sooo happy for you my dear golu..." pulling him down she planted a kiss on his forehead. Ram was all blushy blushy.

Hayeee ye golu ab lal tamatar ho raha hai kya huaaa...both Priya and Ram stood still on the spot shell shocked to hear the comment. Priya was the one to become normal after hearing suppressed giggle. "NEHAAA..." Priya literally yelled at Neha. Ram was turning crimson red...his eyes were literally touching floor..he was scratching his temple and started sweating heavily. Nuts came to the rescue..common Priya dont be a spoil sport. She just said the truth...issme kya hain? Priya howled at Nuts...Ye tumhara bhai hain..tum toh...

"Hellooo...first of all ye hugging, lifting in air...sara ghar sunne ke liye I love you...ye kya chal raha hai yaha..ghar mein aur bhi log hain and bade bhi hain...I think we should bombard YOU... and how dare you are coming at us...haaann..." dominated Neha.

Priya suddenly realized that it would be better if she ran away from there but Neha and Nuts were blocking her while Vikram was laughing at Ram. She was unable to come out of the shy that suddenly overwhelmed her. She wanted to hide herself somewhere...

Dadi came to her rescue...Oyee bacche log chodo un donon ko...mera golu saalon baad ittha khush hain..nazar na lage kissi ka..chalo band karo masti..meri Priya puttar ko kyun sata rahe ho. Chalo bhago. Nuts ran from there pulling Neha along with her. Vikram was all smiles seeing the life at Kapoor Mansion. All laughs were lost with Ram's busy schedules and his passion for his dream. Now it all became like it was there few years ago..lively..fun and love. He was all happy for Ram. He thanked Neha silently for making this happen. As she said Priya was perfect for Ram.

Here Ram was feeling caught up with his emotions. He signalled Vikram and to come with him and slowly slipped from there. Vikram followed him. Priya was shy and hesitating to even stand infront of dadi but dadi made her sit beside her.

Priya puttar tu golu se khush hai na...This was something unexpected for Priya. She was taken a back initially but she quickly regained her senses and gave a feeble smile...Dadi main kuch samjhi nahi...woh Ram..mujhe kya problem hogi.. Mera matlab puttar ki tu Ram ki iss aspataal waspataal ki baat se khush toh hai na..woh sare paise iss mein barbaad...Priya interrupted her..maaf karo dadi lekin yeh koi business nahi hain ki iss mein fayda ya barbaadi dekhe..Ye unki tamannah hain aur mujhe bahut garv hai ki main Ram jaise acche insaan se mili hoon. Haan yeh main maanti hoon ki aaj kal hospitals bhi ek business ki tarah hi chal rahe hain. Lekin mujhe iss baat ki khushi hain ki Ram apne pure dil se logon ki seva karna chahte hain aur main khush naseeb hoon ki main bhi unki ye koshish mein bhagidaar ban sakti hoon. Paisa hi sab kuch nahi hota hai na dadi..aap toh ye baat bahut ache se jante hain. Priya lowered her gaze as she had nothing left to say.

Dadi palmed her hair saying.."chalo ab main aaram kar sakti hoon. Mera golu ab tumhari zimmedari..woh jitna bhi bada jo dil se abhi bacha hain. Yeh duniya bahut buri hain Priya puttar. Maine apni bahu ko apni aansoo peepeeke humare liye zindiga banathe dekha hai. Main golu ya Natasha ko aisa nahi dekhna chahthi. Agar tu usske saath hain toh usse koi taqleef nahi hogi. Khush raho tum dono.

Priya: Dadi kya main aapse ek baat puch sakthi hoon?

Dadi: Haan puttar..bolo kya baat hain?

Priya: Aapne woh zameen bechne ki izazad ab itne saalon tak kyun nahi diya?

Dadi laughed out loud..mere golu puttar ki goli ki permission jo chahiye thi..

Priya was completely red hearing her words...Dadiii she pouted.

Dadi: Haan Priya..mujhe darr tha ki isska ye pagalpan uski shadi mein taqleefein layega...(lost in thoughts for a while)...coming back to present haste hue...chalo ab jo tum jo agayi ho usko lagam dene mujhe toh koi pareshani nahi...tum jhello usse..

Priya: Dadiii(smiling)

Dadi: Hahaha Priya puttar...puttar main nahi chahthi thi ki kabhi paisa mere bachon ki zindagi mein mushkilein laaye. Lekin Ram ko toh apni kal ki fikar hi nahi. Usski biwi agar paise dekh kar usse door hogi toh mera golu toh sambhal nahi payega. Lekin tu na puttar badi soji hain..tune usski dil ki armaan ko badhake rakha..paise se jyada..toh mujhe na bolne ki wajah hi nahi dikha. Kuch bhi ho tu toh hamesha ussko saath degi na beta..vaada kar mujhe..

Priya..dadi ke haath mein haath daal ke...zindagi bhar ke liye doongi dadi.

Dadi with happy tears hugged Priya very tightly.

KK: Wiping off her tears came to them..keeping her hand on Priya's head..maa main chahti hoon ki jab Ram Puna jayega zameen ki baat karne Priya bhi usske saath jaaye.

Dadi: Badi changi baat kiya tune Krishna.

Priya: Maa..main kyun..woh aur Vikram jaa sakte...

Dadi: Cutting her off..Woh dono badmaash kya karenge saath mein..Tum dono jaao..Zameen dekh ke aao Priya..mere naal chali jao na..

Priya couldnt say No to Dadi's plead. She nodded her head thinking what to tell to her parents.

Prologue: Without knowing what's going to happen in future Priya had to say yes to go to Pune...Wait to learn more...of course I just hope I wont make you wait for one more year for next update...Sorry from my heart guys...I was tied up..lost interest...everything..but still wrote it down as far as I could to give u guys an update...Hope u still remember the story and will like this update.

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peeyara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#909

I hv recollected the story thanks to Uma 😳

Ram's biggest dream is coming true shortly(hoping no twists :P)

Dadi wanted confirmation from his would be daughter in law to give permission for selling land...she was reasonable thinking so as she didn't wanted any hurdles for Ram's married life

will be waiting for next one and expecting it will be soon...before my memory fades once again 😆

@Uma: thanks Uma for detailed summary...no it was not all long...was to the point