SS: DHADKANEIN Part 15 Updated on Pg 139 on 17.10.2016 - Page 34

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rosinagoor


Viji, Check my comment for Part 3
Moving to Part 4

P.S. My Inbox lots with PMs, I want give comment to 20 Updates
After Fasting means it's increase so I am start give my comments ๐Ÿ˜‰

Yeah checked and replied.
Haa I can understand. No worries.
Thank you Rosi.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rosinagoor

Part : 4

I can tell about this update in one word means Mind-Blowing ๐Ÿ‘
Viji, Awesome Write up & Story going very interestingโญ๏ธ
Ram So happy about Daadi
Daadi telling about Female doctor
Ram didn't know that it Priya
Priya Vikram scenes are very nice
Ram back with bang as a Angrily man
Always he behave like this na, without knowing anything
He shown is angry towards Priya
When He know that Priya is who make his Daadi normal
He felt very bad & He follow Priya everywhere & told his apologies
Again Neha & Priya scenes are Awesome
So Neha fall in love
Priya Fall for Ram,
Ram fall for Priya Interesting
Vikram told every thing about Neha & Priya talk,
I that scene i love Priya's Expressions very much
So Vikram is Neha's lover
In Last scene, Ram misunderstood Priya & Vikram
Hope in next update Ram will know the true ๐Ÿ˜Š
Thanks for the lovely update & sorry for the very late comment ๐Ÿ˜Š


Thank you so much Rosi๐Ÿ˜Š
Am๐Ÿ˜ƒ seeing your comment.
Yeah every confusion or whatever readers got in previous updates they got cleared in this one..
And U commented for every scene well.
Dont say Sorry yaar. Its good that U commented.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

God this is so amazing babes ..๐Ÿ˜›

Thanks sweety

Ram is soo worried about vikram and priya's talk ..๐Ÿ˜†

Hehe I loved his possessiveness ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰..Bechari vik sandwich bangaya in dono ki love mai๐Ÿ˜‰

But I loved Ram & Vik's talk .๐Ÿ˜›

Great going๐Ÿ‘

Haa soo possesive even on bestest buddy ๐Ÿ˜‰. Sandwich woh bhi buri tarah se๐Ÿ˜†

Thanks Neel๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Arey wah priya came so early today , and planning to kill Neha๐Ÿคข๐Ÿ˜†

Hehe oh my what an Idea priya ji ..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Neha was hell shock to hear Radhae came to meet her ..๐Ÿ˜†

And Vik only arranged a guy to give boquet to her .superb

And the way Neha is ranting and the way priya is dealing her๐Ÿ˜†

Gosh so beautiful potrayed the whole idea๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Thanks again baby..it was for fun and hope you enjoyed..Yeah Priya planned and made Vik help๐Ÿ˜†

You know Im confused ki which dialogue is best I loved it so so much๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Aweee this is one of the best compliments

And the way Neha came

Kaun hai be tu ??rofls rofls๐Ÿคฃ

God you don't know how much I laughed for this ..๐Ÿคฃ

My Mil is asking Tell that Joke to me also I will also laugh ,I said it's a story character ..Lolz

๐ŸคฃMeri type dialogue hai woh but seriously I am happy ki u were laughing like anything.

Neha herself blurted out who is vikram๐Ÿ˜†

And That Haddion ka doctor ๐Ÿ˜†... OMG priyas look is I can so so visualize infront of me ..๐Ÿ˜›

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†See Priya made her blurt out..

And the way vikram came in her rescue the way Neha held him his neck , and he pulled her in a hug and kiss bhi ..woh wohh๐Ÿ˜ณ

Priya is there guys watch out ...๐Ÿ˜‰

๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†yeahhh

And priya is too good .. if your romance got over can we sit ..๐Ÿ˜†

And Neha blushing .. this is new to me but she will blush so cutely

So both are super good . and love the way you potray everything in details ..

Thank you baby..Lol priya isnt less in pulling leg..

And and the imp one was .. the promice vik is asking .. lol๐Ÿ˜†

Both girls are surprised to hear Ram felt possessive ness .. Too good yaar๐Ÿ‘

Yeah too good things need special appreciation hai na..for this scene me too๐Ÿ‘

I loved their reactions especially priya is feeling shy .. Muhaa darling

Coming To Ram ..oh my oh my he is thinking about priya , her walking style , her smile , her eyes .. awww he also fallen for her๐Ÿ˜›

But he is thinking about his ambitions

Okk soo cool .. so he wanted to discuss with priya kya ??

Yeah fallen for her but wen he will discuss u will know in future..๐Ÿ˜‰

Is there any movement in next update .. want Raya Milan now hehe

But I will wait for your story progression

RaYa milenge meri jaan thoda sabar karo..and thanks for waiting

You are making me curious to your updates๐Ÿ˜›

After reading this I just wanted to read more more of this story Love you and this is simply fantastic

Eagerly waiting for the next update

Thanks for pm

Thanks a tonne baby and my pleasure๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Next update kosam chinna song ๐Ÿคฃ

veyi kannulatho vechi chustunna

therachatu dati cherada ne UPADATE๐Ÿคฃ [sneham!]
koti ashalatho korukuntunna๐Ÿ˜ณ
karuninchi aadarinchada ne sneham!๐Ÿ˜‰
pranamE neeku kaanu kantunna ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜†
maninchi Ivvaleva next UPDATE๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† [andukova nesthama! ]
Oh my Neel U r something..I so loved this peradi..๐Ÿ˜† Will try to end ur wait soon.

Neel your comment made me so so so happy re
Thanks for this
have to write re yet..will post with in a week..pleasee..
Love U๐Ÿค—
AM glad jumping and grinning like a fool
Thank u
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Posted: 11 years ago
Uff ram k jealous n his fell down, dil ka doctor toh dil ka mareez hogaya bechara lolz
and the sudden change in his beahviour and glowing face on hearing Vikram's gf is Neha, I so can visualize his expressions. that was awesome scene

hillarious one doc.
bechara the bouquet guy and bach gayi meri jaan wala run fab fab.
Neha cannot hide anything from priay so easily, aww priya trapped her and neha had blurt out. hugs to neha awww baby is caught.
sabse mat toh vikram came n saying Jhooth and finally to calm neha hugging her and priya ji is not used to such so madam is shy , aww typical indian girl.
I so loved vik neha's romance too good.

Well so ram k ko bhi realize hua kya so soon, dil ki baatein dil k doctor samjhne k liye, haddiyoan k doctor ka beech me ghussna zaroori hai.
fantastic update.

Thx for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice update...๐Ÿ˜Š
ohhh ram jealous of vik...hmmm good going..๐Ÿ˜†
priya neha ko tease karna chahti...hahaha...๐Ÿ˜†
loved that radhe shyam part...its hilarious...๐Ÿคฃ
and neha's dialogues woww...too good...
hmmm waiting for the next part...
continue soon...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: armanz

Neel your comment made me so so so happy re
Thanks for this
have to write re yet..will post with in a week..pleasee..
Love U๐Ÿค—
AM glad jumping and grinning like a fool
Thank u



I thouroghly enojyed sweety
Thanks for writing
Muhaaa
sure will be waiting for dhamkadaar update ๐Ÿ˜›
Love you too

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

Fab update

first part is hillarious
Priya very nicely took her badla..neha fully trapped

Yeah Priya took her badla very well๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†,...This smiley is too good.
Ram becomes impatient seeing Vikram and Priya together. he talk with Vikra.
Lol Sandhya the smiley ๐Ÿ˜†...but later he felt bad for talking like that

Ram started having feeling for Priya...and Neha and Priya are shocked when they hear about Ram
Haan RK respond karega woh bhi itni jaldi they wont expect na

Though there is no scene between raya ...but I know next part will be Ram and Priya confession...or at least they become friends
Haan no RaYa now but will see in next part pakka..

excited for the next part...Loved it very very much
Thank you so very much..๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks for PM...Please please Please continue soon.
My pleasure yeah will post next part soon.

Thank you for your wonderful comment
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rosinagoor

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Viji, you written very well๐Ÿ‘
I love each & every lines in this update
I can't explain which one is best
Totally Mind-Blowing Update
Hope Soon Ram & Priya share their feelings with each other ๐Ÿ˜Š

Oh my so sweet of you R osi..the gifs esp tweety I loved so much. Thanks a lot.

Am๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ seeing ur comment..its too good
Thanks again.
Haa they will but how know in next.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Sssuuupppeeerrr paarrttt...
Priya taking revenge...
Roofflll...ye naya radheshyam tapak pada...neha k aashqq... ๐Ÿคฃ [=)]
fas gyi priya ki jaal mein neha... ๐Ÿ˜†

Then the cute moment of vikneha and priya teasing them... ๐Ÿ˜†

Chaliye ab jldi se ram aur priya ko milwake raya krdo... ๐Ÿ˜†
But theres smthng in his past thts makng him step backwards... reveaalll...๐Ÿ˜›

Contn sooon...
Thnx fr the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg! Its jst superrr! Superb planning of vik nd priya...awsome scene of priya nd neha..meri toh haste haste halat kharab ho gayi..awsome threesome really! Thn priya's sweet blushing of ram...ghoss i can imagine tht sakshi special wala bitting lips and blushing..waitting 4 next!

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