SS: DHADKANEIN Part 15 Updated on Pg 139 on 17.10.2016

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haribol79

@haribol79

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

congratulations on starting new fanfic...
it's always a pleasure reading your story..

RaYa in medical romance is lovely..

continue soon

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armanz

@armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: rosinagoor

for the New Story & fulfilled our request 😊

Very big Congrats to your new story 🤗🥳

Thank you so much Rosi for this cute post filled with wishes. Its my pleasure to write story and get you people's responses.

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Dhristi

@Rayaland

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Thank u for starting new ff n pls continue soon cos the concept is very nyc Raya as doc hmmm interesting n also waiting for their 1st meetings

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armanz

@armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
OMG OMG That was so sweet title "DHADKANEIN "
And the tag image ..awww simply superb the heart image and the ECG waves ...
Awww so priya is doctor and Rk bhi a doctor hai .
Super sketch ..super line
Aww meri Priya ...she is always down to earth person
Im with her whatever also we start with ONE
and indeed she is looking and doing superb

Rk is so keen in his practice i think
The way he handled the other case and the assitant words to him ,i understud he is a Arrogant famous doctor ..
and she had already met him twice ..and now her sir introduced him
and her sulking was too good
Lol
i so so want to read next part
please update ASAP

You know I so loved to read doctors stories .Giri wanted to write but already her hands ful with 4 to 5 stories that time .Now she is full with two stories .Than she might be busy
But my wish has fulfilled thru you
that i really wanted to read this type of story on Raya
Im eagerly waiting for their milan
and their love or friendship ...
Hawww double eagerly waiting for marrige
and tis time i want to read some romance so try to write that also ...
Love you
superb ..stupendo fantabulous story ...
Way to go
your writing is just flaw less ...
Thank you for writing it down

Abrevations bhi given Lol
thank you for enlightening our knowledge but frankly few of us may not known to them
so thank you 😛

OMG the smileys are sooo cute re..Thank you..Most of us may know but I just wanted to expand the abbreviations as no one should get any doubt ki..😳

Muaahh

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armanz

@armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: rosinagoor
Hi Viji

When i seen this picture

I guess this story is based on hospital & doctor
My Guess is right
you start the story very Beautifully 👏
When Priya seen her board "Dr.Priya Sharma MD, General Physician."
i can easily imagine Priya expressions, that scene is awesome
Priya scenes are superb , well written
So Ram also a Doctor in the same hospital , interesting
Ram scenes are also Superb
I like this dialogue " "Where the hell is RK? Did you make a call or not?"
RK: You took the name of the devil and the devil is here." very much
I loved it 👏
Totally wonderful update
You wrote very well
Continue soon

Good that you have guessed it and it was bingo on target..😉

Thank you for the pretty words Rosi..

Yeah Priya was totally excited and Ram is some one you love to read😆

Thank you again.

Will post next part soon.

Edited by armanz - 11 years ago

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Mani

@Mani-RK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

aweee viji
this is brilliant stary
who said that you are new in writing FFs
ohmy such a talented lady u are
take a bow doc
autograph please
This story is better than the first
must say u r getting better n better with stories
aww i loved this story so much dunno what to say re
firstly thanks for this bful title n dat pic
u know rt how much i respect this profession
to top of that my fav actor Ram as doc gawd that was my dream to see man with White coat n recently am watching tnis series House M.D n i just Ram in the place of Dr. House
Gawd he is arrogant and egoistic but these kind of characters i may hate in real life but when it comes on screen they enact so well
i liked everything vijjuu
those medical terms n their professional designations
and the arrogant Ram
lol i am imagining Ram in lab coat with glasses n priya as doc with a pony
eee am so excited cant wait for future updates
only request please dont call my baby fatty i lubb him n fatty sounds good only from Neha
hmm no thats ok u can call himnwhat ever but make sure we will have loads of Ram in updates am missing him badly re
sweety dunno what to say am just blabbering as i cant put my feelings in words but am so excited
everything looks so perfect

congratulations for new story sweet heart

p.s not able to click like button n pics tho pucho bhi mat

but i hope u vil understand vijju

urs mani n nautanki lol

love ya

n sorry for yest absence n making u tensed

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peeyara

@peeyara

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Hi viji di 😛

lovely story n great concept ⭐️

Priya has newly joined the hospital and Ram is notable surgeon 😛

raya as doctors kise ne nhi likha hoga 😛...i do love doctors 😆

being written by doctor, i am sure it'll be realistic 😛 and i am very excited for this story 😃

already waiting for next part 😆

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armanz

@armanz

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: iLuvRamKapoor
Res

You have posted comment i 3rd page so why did you reserve here.for wishes kya..tu bhi na

Lol Love you

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deeksha

@deekshasxn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

good going dear...
Raya as a doctor seems somethng nice...
U change their whole character...
From teacher and tycoon to doctor...,...
Waiting 4 next...,
and more over they both are anjane ajnaabi type hai is story main...
Wo nice creation
thnx 4 writing it

Edited by deeksha_saxena - 11 years ago