SS: DHADKANEIN Part 15 Updated on Pg 139 on 17.10.2016 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: armanz

Rosi I gave update part 2 and will try to give update part 3 soon


Sorry Viji,
I am not going to read any stories in Fasting Period
So can please send me PM
I will read & Comment, when my fasting come to an end


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: armanz



I hope you enjoyed this part also
Thank you Rosi


Ya enjoyed a lot, But i missing you story now😭

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal

omg...i m really...feeling..good reading ur ff..yaar...jst amazing...story... raya r sooo much busy in there world...plzz..doo me a favour dnt...get any third person in between... amazing plzzz nxt asap


Thank you so very much
Raya are so busy in their world
there wont be any third person , their egos are much benefit for them 😆
will try to update soon


Originally posted by: chillpc

read the parts in a go...>!!!!

lovely that was... 😛
but is there smthng in ram's past or he is arroagnt as usual??? 😕

vik and neha are a pair rght??? 😕 😆
as neha is alrdy in love???😕


priya in love wid golu dr. 😆
only neha can cmmnt such

contn soon...
waitng gfr nehas wrds to turn true...

thnx fr the pm..!! 😊


Thank you so much for the comment

You will definately come to know why he is arrogant in future updates 😉

vik & neha pair ??? 😕 Thats also will clear soon 😆
yes only neha comments such 😆
will try to update soon



Thank you


Originally posted by: anupam_dil

awesome ...update.serial ki second episode jaise hothi hai bilkul waise hi tha...loved it
continue ASAP
thanks for pm😛


Thank you so much
Im glad you liked it
will try to update soon


Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Lovely part i like raya meeting n hope u finish this ff soon too


Thank you so much
Don't knw when i can finish this but not so soon
as im busy in my work also 😛

It's my plesure

Originally posted by: iLuvRamKapoor

loved the secone part too viji
i found this ram to be different frm da first one in first part
happy to see nevik in raya lyf
thanks fr pm


Thank you Mani

Yes you will see many shades of him in future

will try to update soon







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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Haiii Vijiii


I know i know .. im very late but
why don't i post it now ..
Here is your surprice from both 😉
with a sorry note 😛
love you muhaaa
hope you like it
choose the best one for your story
Nail bitinggg ...









Hello IF Rock star Neel
Awesome Creations👏

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rosinagoor


Sorry Viji,
I am not going to read any stories in Fasting Period
So can please send me PM
I will read & Comment, when my fasting come to an end



sure will send pm to you
no worries
happy fasting

Originally posted by: rosinagoor


Ya enjoyed a lot, But i missing you story now😭


dont worry
you can enjoy bunch of stories when your fasting ends
be happy

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: armanz


sure will send pm to you
no worries
happy fasting

dont worry
you can enjoy bunch of stories when your fasting ends
be happy


Thank u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priyajan12

Hi di

First time commenting on ur post
lovely update
hope they get time from their busy lives to fall for each other
intresting story
btw aapka naam kya hai??


Thank you so much priya

They wil get time in future

will update soon
I alredy told my name in other post 😉


Originally posted by: sandhyasn

Part 2

By the end of this SS...I definitely learn some new medical words..thanks for the full forms...use it everytime...please
Priya doesn't like his presense😕
Priya- neha talk...wonderful...loved it...Neha is as always over excited.
Ram dedicated his full life in Hospital...very busy life
lets see how Ram and priya find their love in each other
totally different story...like it very much
thanks for PM..please continue soon


Thank you sandhya
yes hopefully by the end of this SS you will learn some medical words
Sure i will use the fullforms everytime 😛
Neha is like that only .. 😆
will try to update soon


Originally posted by: deeksha_saxena

very well written

it's a an super duper good update as a Freindship...

Love the Convo b/w Priya_Neha And Ram_Vikram...

thnks 4 d pm


Thank you deksha

Im happy you liked the update and their convos


Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Helooo

when you going to update next



Neel
it will be soon



Originally posted by: bpatil3

Hey u write so well yaar ..

that teasing part was so well..😆😆
and that neha has been characterized erfectly, saans lene deti nhi questions ka line laga deti hai😆😆 priya and her impression about ram very well depicted, but still khinchav to hai😉😆😆 anjaana sa 😆😆
Vikki baba bhi Doc😆😆 very nice convo between ram n him, they share a great bond , i luv the way vikki was staring priya, he is impressed? vikki kahi priya ko apne liye toh nhi dekh rha 😆 ya fir ram se setting karwana hai..
the whole ram n Vikkis convo was super duper doc.

u made it again, what next


Thank you so much malu For the apreciation
Neha is such a crazy girl ,I too love her charcater
yah except Neha the threesome are docs 😆
Im glad you liked the part
as well as Vik is impressed by priya
Lets se how it turns 😉
will try to update soon


Originally posted by: jodude

nice update...😊

priya to bilkul pasand nahi karti ram ko and ram also utna imp nahi deta priya ko...😆😆😆
but vik ko priya pasand hai...😕
hahahaha😆... ram ne priya ko thin kaha...😆
neha never leaves a chance...😆
continue soon...😊


Thank you Jo
Both are opposite poles
will see how it turns out in future

Ram is healthy man he felt she is thin 😆
Wil try to update soon


Originally posted by: jodude

thanks for the pm...😊


It's my plesure


Originally posted by: neema.khudarath

awesome story plz continue soon...i read two parts beautifully written👏next time pm me...pzzz update 3rd part soon


Thank you for liking the story
Im glad you liked it

will surely give Pm from next time

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvsakshi

surprised to see your update 😛

Lol U na..really like this kya😆


And Im reading like this

Aweee so cute..😛



OMG OMG you updated..Aww so sweet of you

Love you for this update

Thank you sweety

Kya baath hai .. their first official meeting

Simply superb .. Oh my how Easily he said "Im I looking that old "

I laughed out loud reading it

Lol thank god I could make you laugh... Thanks re

And the way priya answered was mused me .. super cool

😎hai naaa.

Aww my queen got nervous ness ..haha hona hi chahiye na because

she already fallen for him ..Lolz😆

Yup queen has fallen for the king unknowingly..😉

You know what while reading Priya and Neha convo ..

I remembered my self with my another friend

God Neha is to good and the way priya handeld her was superb and so so realistic .. loved it re

😆I know who it is 😉

Coming to vIk .. Oh my oh my he is an ortho surgeon and he is waiting for a physian to attend the case

And they called my darling priya

And she rushed to se the case ,,ahhh superb I felt like Giri's day in

hospital ..she always tells me what happened in the hospital so im so

so familiar with all the wording over here . and moreover I loved to

read doctor stories I told na

And im a very big fan of Grey's anatomy serial ...

Yeah Priya was called and she attended and yeah I know about hospital updates (hour by hour hai na😉)

Yeah super hote hain aapke said stories..read many medical novels..

And this story just got in to correct place and with your flawless

writing its coming beautifully ...

You know what am ☺️..thank you..

Hope Raya meet again with a good note ..

So Neha is not a doc and vik is doc .. I wanna know how these both

meets up also ..

Yeah will see in future updates😉

Waiting eagerly damn eagerly ..Love you

Love you too baby..hope can end the wait soon..

"Your writing is just like a peaceful wave hits the sand in a beach "

Way to go girl ..

Please update soon ..

Oh my Neel thats best compliment ever I have got..

will update re..

Simply superb lines are

P: Shut up duffer, what nonsense..


N: Common Priya, woh bechaini woh bhara bhara dil, its nothing but love.


P: I dont believe that you can so stupid.

N: How mean.. (sad)


P: Then from where did you bring that love? If you are in love, how

will you think everybody has same feeling. Stop that. And that

arrogant and attitude wala insaan se mujhe pyaar woh bhi love at first

sight?? NEVER...Got it.

Epic lines 😆😆

😆Thank you



N: Cool down baby, I was kidding.
P: Uff I am feeling am not comfo with his presence and you are talking

all nonsense. My head is aching..phewww


N: Sar dabadoo

P: Nahin...leave me alone for a while..please yaar.


N: Theek hai, am going to cook, you have a nap okk. We will discuss later.


P: (Glare) You wont change.

N: Happy realization..

🤣

This same happend with me and my friend 😆🤣 not exactly this scene but someother issues 😆

May I know what are those issues?/😆


God only knws how much I laughed at this convo .Im sorry but Jubine asked why you laughing I showed this convo ..He glared at me and went off ..

poor Jubine might have held his head😆

He thought I m reading a joke like yesterday "Acute Angina " wali

Lolz lolz

Now don't kill me ...

Runzzz

Neel you na..😡😆 but the joke was epic hai na😆

Thank you so much for the another beautiful update

Muhaaa

Thank you for the most wonderful comment..muaahh


Im grinning ear to ear while reading the update



Am jumping reading your comment re
Thank you so much..
Love you
Biggg huggg..
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Posted: 11 years ago
@viji
Ohmy
Im glad you liked my comment
Im also grinning ear to ear while reading your reply
hmm few issues were there ..i will tell later 😉

and yes the joke was Epic, I luaghed out loud😆

Thank you so much

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Posted: 11 years ago
You really write well
and im eagerly waiting for the next part 😉

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