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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ram's love at 1st sight was awesome!!!
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beinteha mohabbat hai tumse

part 3


next day;
in ram's office;

vikram entered in ram's cabin with an invitation card and placed it infront of ram.

vikram;ram,ajj sham oberai's aur mital's ki collaboration party hai aur yeh uska invitation hai,oberai sahab ne espacially request kiya hai family ke saath aane ke liye.

ram;haan to theek hai,tu chala ja aur meri taraf se wish bhi kar dena,tu to janta hai ke mujhe yeh parties main jana bilkul pasand nahi hai.

vikram;ram,aur parties aur iss party main farak hai,tu to janta hai oberai sahab hamaray kitne purane cilients hai,aur unse hamara rishta 15 saal purana hai,mujhe lagta hai tujhe zaroor aana chahiya.

ram;ok,i'll try.

vikram;try nahi ram,tujhe aana hai aur saath main rajat aur bua ji ko bhi lana,unhe accha lagge ga.

after vikram left,ram called bua ji and informed them about party,they happily agreed because they very well know how to utalize these parties for fame?

at the party...

ram,rajat,bua ji along with vikram and neha make their entry in the venue.the party was really grand and lavish,and alomost every industalist and socilite was present.

mr.oberia;thanks for comming mr.kapoor.

ram;pleasure is always mine mr.oberai,meet my bua and my brother rajat.

after formally greetings,mr.oberai introduce them to his family,his wife,son and daughter "sneha oberia".

ram and vikram immediatly recognized her.sneha also remember them but nobody react as per demand of situation.

after mr.oberai got busy with other guests and bua ji and rajat went to see their friends and collegues vikram said.

vikram;to app mr.oberai ki beti hain.
sneha;ji
ram;waise uss din ke liye i am sorry.
sneha;its ok mr.kapoor,aur kitni bar sorry bole gain,its absolutly fine.
vikram;waise apke saath jo uss din lady thi woh dekhai nahi de rahi.
sneha;woh priya bas aati hi hogi[just then her eyes went on enterance]there she comes.

priya with her parents arrived.

sneha;"excuse me pls" and went to see priya.

ram eyes was fixed on her,she was wearing lemon yellow anarkali suit with maron embriodery flowers on neck and border,lightly curled hair with those lovely khoyled eyes and above all her own beauty had made her elegant.ram really dont know why his heart goes out of control on seeing her,he is a 40 year mature and composed man who always maintain healthy distance from girls but this time he is behaving like teenager who just lost his senses on seeing a beautiful girl.he can't understand his emotions which is attracted towards her,seems like there is some sort of unknown connection which drawns his attention everytimes she comes infront.

vikram;ram kaha kho gaye ho

ram coming back to his senses;kahi nahi chal drink pete hain.

both goes to the bar counter to have their drinks,while having drinks ram time and again watches her,who was talking to sneha.

vikram;agar itni pasand hai to baat kyu nahi karta usse.

neha came behind them and over heard everything,before ram could answer neha speaks.

neha;kisse baat kare,aur kuan pasand aagai hai isse,aur yeh tum dono kya chupa rahe ho mujse.

ram and vikram both don't known what to say.

ram;kuch nahi neha,yeh to bas aise hi
neha;come fatty don't lie,i know tum dono mujhse kuch to chupa rahe ho,uss din dinner par bhi kuch khusar phuar kar rahe the.i want to know the truth.

vikram know very well that neha is not going to spare them easily so he narrated everthing.

neha;i dont believe this,ram kapoor is interested in a lady.

ram;shutup neha asisa kuch nahi hai yeh vikram bhi na kuch bhi bolta hai.

vikram;come on ram,agar woh acchi lagti hai to hai,tu accept kyu nahi kar raha.

ram;arre jab kuch hai hi nahi to accept kyu karo.

and left from there to avoid further discussion

neha;yeh fatty se to kuch nahi hoga mujhe hi kuch karna parega.
vikram;par tum karogi kya
neha;just wait and watch honey.

neha goes to sneha and said somthing to her where as vikram join ram who was talking to some industalist,after sometime neha along with sneha join them.

neha;you know ram sneha ko painting ka bohat shwak hai aur jab maine isko bataya ke painting tumhari hobby hai to issne zid ki ke woh tumhari painting dekhna chati hai.

ram stirred neha angerly because he does not want the world to know about his secret skills.neha made a puppy face to signal apologise to him.

sneha;its interesting to know ke the bissnuiss tycon ram kapoor,ek painter bhi hain.

ram;bas kabhi kabhi rangon se khelne ka dil karta hai to...
sneha;apni paintings kabhi hamain bhi to dekhayain,mujhe aur priya ko paintings ka bohat shawk hai.

ram got struck on hearing this,neha was waiting for this

neha;kaun priya
sneha;my best friend,main abhi milwati hoon

sneha turn around to signal priya and neha gave a victorios smile to ram and vikram.
priya was talking with some lady after sneha signaled her,she excused herself and move towards them,on way her foot twist,she tripped and was about to fall when two strong arms collected her in support and she landed savely in them.she had closed her eyes in fear.the man just keep looking at her retiring figure for sometime and mumered softly"beautiful".priya on hearing this open her eyes and tried to stand up on her feet,he support her in doing that.

priya;thank you
rajat;its ok,apko kahi lagi to nahi
priya;nahi i am fine.
rajat;thank GOD,anyways i am rajat kapoor
priya;i am priya sharma
rajat;nice name"priya"
priya;thanks,well rajat will u excuse me,meri friend mujhe bula rahi hain
rajat;ya sure u can carry on.

in the meantime,sneha came to them.

sneha;are u ok,kahi koi chot to nahi lagi
priya;nahi i am fine,inho ne bacha liya
sneha;thanks
rajat;its ok
sneha;aao tumhe kissi se milvana hai.

she took priya to ram,vikram and neha.

sneha;priya yeh neha hai,vikram aur insse to tum mil hi chuki ho ram kapoor.

priya shake hand with neha and formally greeted ram and vikram.

ram;i hope apki ghar ka zayada demage nahi hua,i am really sorry..

priya;arre nahi pls,app sorry mat boliye,balke mujhe apse uss din keliye sorry kehna chahiye,i was very rude,maine kissi aur ka ghussa app par nikal diya.

ram;matlab,main kuch samjha nahi

priya;woh acctually ussdin meri ek bohat important deal thi,jo nahi hui aur phir woh saab hogaya,i am really sorry.

vikram;to app buisness karti hain.

priya;ji,meray papa ki ek choti si cosmatic company hai

ram;ok,then lets forget everything,its nice meeting u miss priya.

priya;same here mr.kapoor.

sneha;well priya,tumhe yeh jankar aur bhi khushi hogi ke mr.kapoor ek painter bhi hain,aur woh bohat jald hamain apni painting dekhane wale hain.

priya face lightened up on hearing this,
priya;really mr.kapoor,app kab dekhain gye humain apni paintings.

ram;apko paintings pasand hai.

sneha;arre sirf pasand hi nahi balke painting karne ka bhi shwak hai,agar yeh uncle ka buiness na sambhal rahi hoti to zaroor ek painter hoti.

priya;tu bhi na sneha,

neha;well agar tumne ram ki painting dekhni hai to tumhe hamaray saath usske farm house jaana parega kunki woh wahi painting karta hai.

sneha;phir to woh kissi sunday ko hi possible hoga,kunke priya ka sunday hi off hota hai.

vikram; yes ram bhi sunday ko free hota hai,ok phir next sunday chalte hain.

sneha;what say priya.

priya;ok

vikram and neha was happy to see ram's smiling face,they thank GOD for sending priya in ram's life and prayed for their love to blossom.

precap;destiney had some other plans for raya.


well friends this is my update,i am not getting enough comments but hope this time u do comment.

Edited by afshaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: .pia_12.

Ram's love at 1st sight was awesome!!!
Continue soon

thaks for liking 2nd part,know enjoy part 3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Lovely story pls dnt bring rajat in btw Raya n pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Great Raya met in a party agian
all mu is cleared now
Vik Neha is trying to brought RamPriya close
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

Great Raya met in a party agian
all mu is cleared now
Vik Neha is trying to brought RamPriya close
continue soon

thanks dear 4 liking my work,btw what's your name
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Lovely story pls dnt bring rajat in btw Raya n pls continue soon

well dear i know everybody wants raya love,but the story will go very tragic later own,my apologies in advance
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
nice update...
Ab aage dekhna hai hota hai kya hamare raya ke saath...
What destiny planned for them...
C.ontinue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Superd update
Lovely raya k common interest😉
Awee... Raya gona meet again!!!
Ram toh gya kamse... He is falling 4 priya😳
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
wow too good..pls cntinue soon.n pls next time pm me when u updt

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