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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#981

Originally posted by: armanz
Wer r u waiting

I just posted before your post ..

Bahuth timesence ha...

stars are your side 😉

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Sanjukta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#982

superb

i was crying di...

u did a wonder job here

1st made ram so good human being and caring not only for his wife ..for shruti too

i love the caring nature

and

the most imp..their pain.. the thought...when u described Sruti.just my mind was wandering with

the delhi case and its telecast episode..

so much pain..

superb update

thank u for ur pm

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#983

Originally posted by: armanz
Hurraayyy Am first..FIRST..FIRST..
Kya Update tha yaar Priya's feelings, her doubts, anger, pain, sorrow and now and then her smile, madness it was wonderfully penned down.
You know fell in Love with Ram all over again..his care n concern his thoughts about their future about his Priya..Wahh kya baath
YOu know loved this Dr. Ray how well he alleviated their worries atleast lil bit..
Ram's condition was even more worse..he cant bear her pain/tears and seeing her like that he was dying in himself and I had seeing him.
Hope Sruthi will be fine soon..
Dard tha, emotion tha,Pyaar tha, care tha..madness thi..totally totally loved it.
But had tears when she yelped with pain..and cried hmm
But Priya's thinking is troubling me.. She wanna stay away from Ram..but woh usse nahin chodega..I knw Golu is sweet n lovely..
Awesome update yaar ..👏..Written by a doc na so can feel it through out..Loved it.
Continue soon.
Pm nahin mila abhi tak..😆

Yah you are first ... Love you ..

You know this time i didnt give reply to last post thaki i can check who will come first

Lol..but you did it again ...

Yah priya's pain .. sarrow ,her all modd swings shown clearly bcz in future they may all needed for her works ..

Rammm he is so caring and concern towards her and their future

he will be going to built a healthy relation ship 👏

This dr.ray character is Giris one of knonw doctors behaviour anta .. she loved his talk to patients so she implinted here

ofcourse readers like me wanted these type of clarification na ..

about priya thinking yah its just giving wrong indications but as she said there is no separation

Ram may avoid all her thoughts

lets see what happenns ..

I thought i may spoil your lovely comment with smileys

so giving reply all at once

that was such a lovely omment dear

thank you so much for it

🤗will try to cont soon

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armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#984

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

I just posted before your post ..
Bahuth timesence ha...
stars are your side 😉

Yeah I didn't chk ur thread properly these two days so came to read the comments..Was missing u so just posted that and Haii Hukkuu haii Hukku haii haaii type lo Sunil shetty dance chesthu i came first.,.😆 SHEER LUCK.

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#985

Originally posted by: armanz

Yeah I didn't chk ur thread properly these two days so came to read the comments..Was missing u so just posted that and Haii Hukkuu haii Hukku haii haaii type lo Sunil shetty dance chesthu i came first.,.😆 SHEER LUCK.

Yup you were busy na ...

Hope your kiddo is doing all types of things to make you busy with her 😆

Lol...sunil shetty dance...

yah sheer luck 😆

Congrates ... I thought choti or sandhya willl reserve ki ..

so i can tease you ani ...

hehe but cngrates ..

I know how you will wait for the update ..

way to go 😉

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aanchal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#986

very well written loved it
Ram and doctors are right in their view about telling truth to priya
Priya is not in her senses but ram is handling her with calmness
so sweet of ram he went to temple for priya and shruthi
hope she will recover soon
thanx for the pm waiting till next part

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#987

Originally posted by: sandhyasn
Lovely part

Ram not telling the truth and waited for Shruti to speak...but y????? what priya is thinking is too wrong...it's better she knows the truth😕

Ram pray for Priya and shruti and also met shruti in the hospital

Shruti is also recovering...and really she is brave.

sab kuch dheere dheere normal ho raha hai.

loved raya scene...where Ram is trying to speak and Priya is silent.

I know the pathaka😆..she is really a pathaka😆..it's Neel..am a right na😉

yayy...from next part we can see raya moments..but still I believe Priya has right to know the truth.

Priya ke saat agar ram ho toh Priya sab sach face kar sakti hai

thanks for PM...and please continue soon

Ram is not telling the truth because she can't handle if she comes to knw the miscarrige and she may even think becaue of ashwin assult only she lost her babies ..

Anyway Priya is in dilemma wether it happened or not but assuming ashwin assulted her

so Ram is leaving her like that thinking he can deal with her with that matter ..

So when sruthi will woke up obviously the confusion will get overed with the convo ..

and when she asked about this cleaning thing issue he is trying to think what might he tell her stil he is in his thoughts ..

Ok if she knows the truth ,if she went into deep shock or she could do something herself

because she is not able to think at present

so he must wants sometime to recover her up

Hope you understand now

anyway we will see in future updates ..How its gonna happen .. really she is brave

everything will come to normal slowly and yah from next onwards you will get to see many raya moments

yah .. he met sruthi too in the hospital ..

Ok priya will know the truth but it will be entirely in different way [as per writers thought ]

that will come in future updates for sure

Hawww your guess is absolutely correct

yah that pathaka is Neel only

hammaaa how you guessed it 😆

will try to cont soon

Thanks for lovely comment

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youandme272000

@youandme272000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#988

Nice interesting bt sad too.. :(
Continue soon

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#989

Originally posted by: iLuvRamKapoor
Res
viji 😭

*UNRES*

This is getting better and better Neel di It had everything you potrayed all the emotions so well You know which was the most heartbreaking The scene when ram cries in shower😭 muje balh wala ram when he cries on priya when she was in coma yaad agaya
I can very well understand how priya might be feeling she loves him but feels he doesnt deserve her coz of what ashwin did to her(acc to priya)
yes i am satisfied with your explanation of ram not revealing the truth to priya that was very sensible decision after the bday part this one is my fav
I liked the lil scene of ram and shruti too tha was nice and also the part of Ray and Aruna when they touch der heads that was sweet
priya couldnt control herself and confessed her love but the ashwin thing is haunting her again so sad
i am all in for the nok jhoks of RaYa and i know ram will always stand by her to protect her as always coz he loved everyone unconditionally

Aww Thank you so much .. I told you na you wil love future updates ...see

Okk coming to the comment ..

I agree with you The scene when Ram cries in shower its heart wrenching and i can so imgine infront of my eyes ..

Yah you are correct Priya loves him but she is feeling he don't deserve her ...

Aww thank you so much for satisfing with the explanation and thanks you loved this part after the bday part . well its going good than ..

Yah Ram is taking care of suthi too not because of priya beacause with humanity

yah drs are so nice ..

Atlast Priya unable to control she blured out her love , than her moodswings ..

And you will get to see aya knok jhoks ... and he wil be therewith her every time

Thank you for the lovely comment

will try to update soonish ..

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#990

Originally posted by: chillpc
Super awesome part...

Iam loving it more and more..!!! 😛
Rams agony... Dr. Ray pov evrythng was very well dscrptd...

Later the little cute moments of priya's thoughts and raya...
Ram.being possessive..
And priya's nghtmare takng over her emotions fr him...
Ufff... Superb...

Di spl thnks cheppandi writer ki fr such a beautiful part..!!!

Ab ye pathaka kaun hain???
Hope he/she is a real pathaka 😉
doing some magc and restoring raya relation..!! 😆

contn soon..
thnx fr the pm...