RAYA FF:Sirf meri Ho *THREAD-5 part-67 on page 126 preview on page 144 - Page 95

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anupam_dil

preview is very emotional...will be waiting for the story ahead...


Thank you so much
will try to update soonish veena dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

I cannot handle this...please Priya ko sach baa do...y he is not telling her

Ram is really broken...emotional part...must say Good going
continue soon


Hmmm You cant handle this Ram also cant handle the situation
but he has to ... and why he is not telling her there must be some reason
we will see in the update what it will be
Thank you for liking it
will try to update today
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .pia_12.

Thanks 4 the preview!!!
its too emotional...cant see RaYa suffering like this😔
continue soon...


Thank you so much
you will get to see normal scennes in future updates
will try to update soonish

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kaushikaashu

I have a way in mind,it's kind of weird but this is what i thought on RaYa's present situation.As Ram is in dilemma,whether to tell Priya about her Pregnancy & Miscarriage or to convince her that ashwin only assaulted her not more than that.In either way she is going to get hurt and may be that can lead her to some critical condition.


Ram is reasonable somewhere,as he is not telling Priya about Pregnancy & Miscarriage because she will broke-down terribly(already she was badly craving for a baby,on that Miscarriage news that also happened without her knowledge.She was not aware of her pregnancy even,didn't get a chance to know about her biggest happiness and later Miscarriage,i think this is terrible,she can't handle all this,after that Ashwin's incident,her friend shruti's condition everything)

But she is suspicious also what Docs were doing with her,that Procedure.Though she is thinking in a wrong way but problem is,truth also she can't accept that was procedure for her Miscarriage.She'll continue to think that Ashwin raped her and will eventually fell in to guilt,that can be harmful for her psychological condition,can even affect RaYa's relationship also(as she already said to Ram,not to come near her,thinking she is a sinner did something wrong)

So in either way,Ram is in trouble.How to see her love in that drastic condition,that's unimaginable.

So what my take on this is,Ram can tell her she is pregnant and Docs were doing that procedure regarding her pregnancy(this way she won't be suspicious about Rape and will also feel happy as she is pregnant and it helps her to forget about all that Ashwin's incident,as she will be temporarily happy with her Pregnancy news)

After she recovers fully,Ram can tell her someday.As like in a pre-planned way or through some incidence,that she had a miscarriage(I know it's weird,may be she got huge shock because after so much of happiness this grief she won't be able to handle) but after sometime may be she could handle it(because at present situation,She went through that trauma already given by Ashwin,on that Pregnancy news & Miscarriage,that's truly unbearable thing)
But it's just to subside her terrible pain,that she is going through right now,later she will be bit stronger
This is what my empty mind,thinking earlier.It's just a thought that has nothing to do with FF,as writer asked,what is your take on story,so here it is,my weird type take so bear with it.
Am eagerly waiting for update,fingers crossed.Well that was my creepy imagination,not to bother to think even,just for time-pass but i am waiting for writer's input,how she is going to turn story,that will be a treat to read.
Aashu




Aashu definately I cant comment on this ..so the job goes to the writer

From writer :Hey AAshu ,Thank you so much for your feed back..First of all Iam sorry for not updating as you expected .second one by seeing this answer I know how much time you are thinking about the story and how you attached with it ..
I must say ..Yours is good narration ,But from your writing If he tells That she is pregnant ,With him whole the famiily should act infront of her as they were happy ...
and after few days if she comes to know she will feel more guilty na ,because by that time her attachment increases with the babies and she will turn too possesive na ..
Its not weird type take ..
I loved it .. You nailed some points and you wrote this not making priya guilty ..
But Shhh
can't share it here ..
why Ram is not telling Priya ... you will read in the update
and I asked Neel to colour up HIS reason in the update ..
so you will come to know what is it and how he is gonna deal ..
Thank you so much aashu ..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sinalbest

HI Neel Di.. 😊

Sry for commenting late... 😊
Very emotional update.. 👏 ⭐️
Waiting to see hw Ram will handle this sityation...
thanjs for pm...
continue soon.. 😊


Hiii bro
hope you doing fine
Your wait will over by next update maximum

No sorys
Thank you so much for the comment

will cont soon


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sinalbest

So Priva MUing everything...
nice preview.. di update asap.. 😊



Yah priya Muing everything
and we have to see how he is going to handle
will be trying to update by today
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aiyathasan

very emotional preview, feeling bad for ram.. Waiting for a long update...



Yah Emotional one .
have to see how he is gonna handle
Will be updating today but dont know wether it will be long wala or medium 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Sorry for late reply nice update n waiting for update n thank u for pm


Hey thats ok dear ..
will try to update soon
Thanks for comments
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Part 65..

Nice nd very emotional update Di..
Ram's plight as husband seeing his wife his love like this in so much pain, his deseperate attempts to keep her conscious nd Priya's condition..very well described
Shruti's dialogues nd pain showing how much she has gone through..good she gave punishment to him nd after Ram too from Priya nd his side..Ashwin deserves every bit of it..
Sudhir ji took strong place for Ram, Priya..whole family is going through a lot..
Nd last scene was so painfull..Priya's condition😭 Ram trying to handle her..even Dr got tears in eyes..😔
Police nd Drs re very supportive..
Fab work👏
Thanx for pm..
Sry for late..


Hmm its emotional one ..
YEs Ram cant see her like the way she is suffering and sruthi & Ram did justice by killing that rogue
Sudhir had to take strong place
as Ram is aleady shattered
Priyas conditin is painful
everyone is feeling sad ..
Thak you so much for lovely comment
No sorrys
Tc
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Nice nd sad part..
RaYa lost their babies😭 Ram's pain in that scene😭
Priya took the procedure of cleaning in a wrong way..not her fault definately she will think like this..
Her pain nd continues sobs saying she is a sinner..can't take it..
With RaYa whole family is going through so much pain..
Priya saying to Sudhir to take her their home nd to Ram not to touch her..i m scared whats going to happen now..i know she needs time but hope she dont take any decision which will punish both of them more as they cant stay away from each other..
Medical situation nd all..situation got more complicated..its becoming more nd more difficult for her to come out of it..
Ram cant say her truth but lie is also not gonna work here..lets see how he will handle Priya..
Awesomly penned down..👏
Thanx for pm..
Sry for late..


Another sad part .. Raya lost their babies
Rams hope lost ..
Priya took the entire procedure in wrong way
Yes not her fault the situation made her think like that
With Raya every family member is in so much pain..
Priya is in guilty and she must be thinking that ashwin assulted her so she is thinking she is a sinner and dont want to go to Ram
but eventually Ram will hanndle her
but how and when we have to read in the updates
Thank you so much for the great coment
will cont soon

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