RAYA FF:Sirf meri Ho *THREAD-5 part-67 on page 126 preview on page 144 - Page 50

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Posted: 11 years ago
oh god it was very painful to read this part feeling very sad while i was reading
ashwin is such a criminal mind want to shoot him he did very wrong with shruthi and now he assualting priya
ram was in so much pain to see priya like this
glad he reached at their hideout with police and vikram just want that priya is fine and ram able to find her soon
continue soon thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: joemahika

very horror update but ashwin assaulting priya, lip kiss with ashwin totally ashwin digest nahi ho rahi hai and all these in video call ye toh bilkul digest nahi ho raha hai anyways real life aise bohuth saarey hain jisko kisika bhi parwa nahi hotha hain its good to get know what happens around the world but yaar raya ke zindagi mein aisi din kabhi nahin aana chahiye priya sirf ram ki hai little bit depressed yaar jis tarah ashwin ne priya ka saree remove karna uski cleavage ko touch karna usko lip kiss karna very disappointed sorry to comment like this but this is our priya yaar ram ki priya sirf ram ki hain kisi aur ki nahi sorry to this but this update very horror




From the writer:
Hi Neetu, i completely understand your feeling.
I know I took a drastic step in this ff.
One person can stoop any level in his revenge mood and for that one happy family can broke down because of the result.
What is wife and husband relation, how its going to effect in their lifes i wanna show it throw my fav characters, while writing it i cried. I know how readers must felt.
As Raya is our fav characters you might disappointed reading this.
Trust me you will love the story in future updates.
If i won't give the details what had Ashwin done readers may not connect in future.
Sorry for that. HOPE YOU like future updates.
Thank you for the genuine review
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Neel Di & Writer... 😊

Being a law student I have came across many cases.. which r worse.. very worse..
On writing part I can say.. tremendus..
Each & every persons role superbly executed.. 👏 ⭐️

P.S.- Its a request to i di.. Kindly pls dont write too too too sad parts.. Although its a real incidence.. Sry if u felt bad...

thanks for pm..
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
plz update next part fast...
we r waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi




From the writer:
Hi Neetu, i completely understand your feeling.
I know I took a drastic step in this ff.
One person can stoop any level in his revenge mood and for that one happy family can broke down because of the result.
What is wife and husband relation, how its going to effect in their lifes i wanna show it throw my fav characters, while writing it i cried. I know how readers must felt.
As Raya is our fav characters you might disappointed reading this.
Trust me you will love the story in future updates.
If i won't give the details what had Ashwin done readers may not connect in future.
Sorry for that. HOPE YOU like future updates.
Thank you for the genuine review


i understand anyways thanks for pm i hope that coming up story might good yaar iss baar aapne humara dil dhukaya toh aapko penalty bharna padega are u ready
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Posted: 11 years ago
aswin assaulting priya is not yet all good..pls finish this track soon.😭😭😭we want only RAYA romance..
as usual nice narration
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Posted: 11 years ago




THIS SWINE KA THO MEIN


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Posted: 11 years ago
😡 😡 really want to kill this ashwin for doing this to Raya n also touching priya di it was superb update as usually n pls Raya ko kuch mat karna n continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pls fast with ur next update and finish priya's torture soon..
Pls pls..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey neel di first of all thanks for the gorgeous peacock pics even i love them i have seen the big peacocks in mysore zoo and they danced for me😛
oj coming to the update mrng was so beautiful glad sab nikal gaye but apne kuch likha hi nahi kya hua wahan pe
kanyadan by ram aww and see in balh ek baar bhi nahi dikhaya
finally priya is preggy but wer is she hope she is fine

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