RAYA FF:Sirf meri Ho *THREAD-5 part-67 on page 126 preview on page 144 - Page 34

Originally posted by: sinalbest

Hi Neel di.. 😊

Excellent writing.. 👏 ⭐️
Wrds nhi h.. 😛
Family scene raya scenes well written.. 👏 ⭐️
Hats off to u.. 👏 ⭐️
loved Raya romance... 😳

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continue soon.. 😊

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

absolutely beautiful, ek hi update me itna sab kuch ho gaya and am very happy for Priya, she is carrying twins, Ram toh khushi se pagal hi ho jayega, plz its a request iss baar aisa kuch hone mat dena, bohot mannat ke baad mili hain iss khushi ke pal, I loved the way how Priya handled Apeksha, so very touchy yet so very true, plz continue ASAP

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

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Originally posted by: MittalKanu

Awesome

Shadi ho gayi

Priya good news liye bina kahan chali gayi

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Originally posted by: 123fiza

Wonderful update 👏 Thank you so much dear .. 😛

all family member left for mumbai leaving ram n priya in machan...so that they can have some time to spend together 😉... raya also did that 😛

Lol they left them alone in the machan
let thetm have their special time ki 😉

comimg to ape marriage function...it was so beautifully described..i became emotional by reading it...like a friend priya has supported apeksha.apeksha might be having mixed emotions..happy n sad at d same time...grt moment fr her... i loved this part...

Ape marriage was well written aww baby same feeling here ..
like friend priya handled ape , as you said she must have mixed emotions ..
priya wiped her turmoil in secs ..
Thank you so much for liking the part .. 😛

ram was so tensed..finally he did the kanyadan... its one of d best moments for him...
wow priya is pregnant...yayyy 🥳

Yah Ram was so tensed and finally he did the kanyadan ..
Its one of memorable moment for him
and yayy priya is pregnant ..

priya doesnt even know abt d good news ...
what is gonna happen?? 😕 note
thanks fr d pm di..cont soon.

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Fantastic update Di..

Thank you so much dear ..😛

Hayee mrng Ramance of RaYa as always..so beautifull 😳 poor RaYa time dekh kar dono ki band baj gayi😆 par iss bar bach gaye dono teasings se😉😆

Yah Raya wont leave a chance of morning romance ..
Lol youu are correct ..
poor of them time dkh kar dono ki band baj gayi
but this time they saved from teasing ..😆

Good idea by Sudhir ji..Vik was grinning ear to ear😆 trip got finished with nice happy family moments..

Yah its a good idea . 😛

Peacock scene nd writer's experience with pic..lovely

Aww thank you .. glad you liked it ..😛

Aww Ape got married..inner turmoil nd fear of Ape nd emotions of everyone related to mrg sometime happy nd sometime getting emotional nd worried for Ape...with some happy, little teasing nd lots of blushing moments..superbly shown..👍🏼

Yah Ape got married ...
her inner feelings ,
Everyone s emotions regarding the marrige is clearly shown
.Im glad you liked it 😊

Rishabh here too didnt leave the chance to tease Ram😆

Lol..Yah he wont leave any chance to annoy Ram .. 😛

Ram doing Kanyadaan nd seven vows( while every other couples reminisced their mrg vows)...nicely describe everything nd emotions related to every scene..👏

Ram did kanyadan and he fulfilled his wish aswell as his fathers wish .
Thank you so much 😛

Dr came nd finally with her Good news will also come😉

Yah good news on the way 😛

Priya playing different role in her life..how she was there with Ape, made her calm nd gave her moral support as well to Ram..nd also how lovingly nd motherly she handled Ram nd made him sleep..too good

Priya ..is completely involving in every role of her act ..
For ape she is like bhabhi ,for Ram she is supporter like a pillar .
dor evry family member she is like their own girl who cares about them very much .

Priya's check up got done nd she missed hearing this happy news..😔

Yah she missed hearing this happy news .. 🤢

Who called Priya? Shruti? Or she got to know about what happened in KI thats why she left?

May be it will be shruthi or some one informed about something
dont know what s in writers mind
will see what will happen in next ..

Is Ashwin is behind all this? But thank god nothing happened..lots of twist

May be your gues will be correct
will see whats stores for us ..

Loved the update..nd all the pics u have added in it..
Eagerly looking forward to see both Ram nd Priya's reactions after hearing the best news of their life..
Thanx for pm..

Originally posted by: sssabcd

as usual raya romance was gud.. Ape marg was beautifuly describbed... So hapy tat pria s pregnt with twins.. We want to see raya hapines soon :(:( bt fire in KI?

pls update soon. Thnks fr pm

Originally posted by: chillpc

superb part...!!!

ape ki shadi hgyi... 😛

babies...!!! 😛

confused wid the later part...!!! 😕

call ???

accident...!!!???

contn soon...!!
!thxn fr the pm...!!

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

lovely lovely lovely lovely update

but u updated in the afternoon😔

Thak you so much dear ..
yah updated in the afternoon
sorry i forgot you will be busy na at that time 😆

hahaha even KM people also know Raya will take time to came down...I loved their morning romance.

Lol..yaH everyone knows Raya will take their own time
and Raya havent disspointed them ..😆

I also have pics of two peocock...but both are males😆...I like how cutely Ram explaining about the difference between male and female😆

Lol...you too have the peacock pics,..
NOT Ram ..Priya had explained about the differences .. 😛

nicely showed the marriage...Ram as a father did all the rituals and priya gave her support.

loved Priya giving strength to Ram.

Ram as a father he did everything to Ape ,priya is her strength

it's a big day for Raya but Ram is busy...and Priya is missing.

yayyy...Priya is preggy and carrying twins🥳

Yah priya is pregnant and she is missing from the place .. 😛

where she is gone😔...who called her..No idea...actually I didn't understand the cid part

preview Ram will know about her pregnancy...but who is giving this news Priya herself or Doctor😕

please continue soon and thanks for PM

Originally posted by: devmohan

Very beautiful part

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