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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Friends
Please help me that how can i mentioned page no. of various Parts of this FF on main page.
Edited by nee_agrawaal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2

Nice update..
Poor Priya..😆 everybody is teasing them with Pihu the smart rockstar's question round..loved how she asked Priya in total Priya's style..😆
Then came Ram's bouncer..hahaha
Loved it..
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Part 3

Wow..awesome update..
Neha- Vik will understand totally different thing now..😆
Romantic RaYa..late night movie show..😉
Loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nee_agrawaal

Hi Friends

Please help me that how can i mentioned page no. of various Parts of this FF on main page.


After ur post on first page..edit option is there( one of the 5 option present there below ur post)..from there u can edit ur title with part no nd page no of new updates nd ur post too with previous parts details..like part no with page no..
Hope it helps.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dou Dewaney Sheher Mai...

(Two lovers in the city)

(Dear Readers Hope you like it. Eagerly waiting for your comments...😛)

Part-IV

" Come tiger...Happy..OH..ho! Cuttie ko toh Pihu bhul gai"...Sub aa jao TV dekagai." Pihu entered in the room. She saw here and there. Happy- Tiger sit here...PIhu TV on karti hai..." She placed both toys on bed and cutie in her right hand and started searching TV remote..

." Mom ney kaha rekha hai...table per...sofa per...paleng per...dressing table per...Oh! Dressing table...😉

Pihu came near dressing table.."Wow..Mumma ka make-up kit". Suddenly Pihu forget about Remote and started looking into vanity box very curiously...As like her Nani Pihu was very much found off makeup but Mom never allowed her to do so..."Bacchay make-up kay beina hi bahut suder dektay hai"...Mom always told and Pihu had to obey because once Mom said "No' means "No" after that no one even Papa never dare to disobey her.

But Pihu is also Junior Pirya she knew very well how to "Handle" Mom. Like Papa Mom loved Pihu a lot and never bare Pihu's cry so whenever Pihu found herself in some crises she laid on floor and started crying very loudly and Mom always impressed. Apeksha Bua laughed in these situations.."Well done Chintu"...She always said.

Pihu opened the Vanity Box..OMG! so many things...Lipsticks..."try karkai dekti hu." Pihu open one purple colored lipstic and start applying of her tiny face as like Mom..." Right to left...left to Right..then she saw red one..Oh.. like Mom...She put it on forehead as "sindoor" and "ruse" on chicks..then brown...Marun.."Ab tum bhi teiyar ho jao.." she said to Cutiee and "Make-uped" that Pink soft toy with black Kajol and Many sheds of Lipstics. Then she applied perfume spry. After that Pihu wore Mom's black goggles' ...Heigh-heel sandal and at last open the last drawer of the dressing table...there she took a long pink scarf cum stall which is generally available with sexy lingerie's (Pihu got this some days before and hide it here without Mom's knowledge). Pihu wore it in her little neck as like chunni on her Grey - Marun tunic. Now Pihu was "ready"...She saw remote on bed side table...Oh!...come cutie..."

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Ram and Priya were still in each-other arms in same position" Aaj office nahi jana hai kya?"..

...Priya wishpered...No! I think this meeting is much more important for me. Ram answered in a very dim voice. His hands were moving around on Priyas body as much as possible.

"Hmmm! My ever time romantic Mr. Kapoor... I have a different important meeting...so let me ready for that. Priya tried to push Ram but not succeeded as Ram's griped her so well..

..Suddenly Priya listen something...

"Mr. Kapoor...Mr. Kapoor"..."Hmmm!...Ram was still busy in tasting her ...

"I think some-one is in our room...we...I should change my clothe ..." Priya said in a husky voice..

" This is yours .." The Ram kapoor's personal bedroom Darling!...Makkhi bhi aanay sai pehlay poochthi hai"...Ram assured her very proudly... "Ha...mager gharwaley nahi."...Priya teased him.

Before this that Ram could reply there was a huge mugic sound in the air..".hulala...hulala...hulala .. ..and some thing fall on the floor ..."

" What's happened Priya! Let's see...Ram said seriously and Priya also took her bath robe and both rushed outside from changing room...

"OMG!" RAYA shouted astonishingly together.

Entire room was messed up. Pihu was dancing on the bed .She was trying to copy song's step typically in Pihu's style. She wore black goggoles ...and a pink stall as chunni on her neck...her face..hands..cloths..dressing table...toy and even bed sheet was painted with different colours. Hu..la...lala song from dirty picture was shouting on full size LCD screen ...and a very expensive wall-peace was laying with its all broken pieces on the floor..."Happy" was also laying next to him.

" Pihu...Pihu..I said stop this immediately.." Priya shouted but Pihu totally ignored Mom presence and kept enjoying her " Paleng Fhodu " dance as Rishab chachu always said.

Suddenly Pihu made another round and this time she throw tiger so forcefully that even RAYA had to protect themselves ..tiger fly in the air and hit to the dressing table's mirror...

"Tadak"...with a very loud sound mirror of dressing table broked-down. As expected this made Priya so angry...she rushed to the bed ..." Pihu! Pihu TV ka remote mujah dou"

Now pihu saw Mamma rushing toward her and Papa with a very big smile ( as Ram some how manzed to control his laughter ) standing different side of the bed. Pihu immediately stand in the middle of king size bed..."nahi deti...Pahelay payer sai bolo?"...She replied in same tone to Mom..

"Oh ! God ...Pihu! remote do?"...Priya tried to be cooled as much as she can...But Junior kapoor was not satisfied with this..'Aaisey nahi..Kaho...Pihu..meri gudia ..Meri priencess remote do na Please.." Pihu made a Pappy face.

Priya didn't answered. This time she climbed on the bed to catch out pihu..Pihu rused on other corner of the bed..he...he...he...she was teasing to priya and laughing ..." Yeh ! pakad liya."..Ram caught her from other side and took her in his lap.

"Mr..Kapoor... Mai kaisi leg rahi hu.." ...Pihu asked to Papa absolutely in Priya's style. Now Ram burst out in laughter and Pihu got a chance to jump from his lap. Some-how she forwarded the picture and there was another scene from dirty picture...(some intimate-sence) .".Oh..Hye..Aauch.." and Pihu start watching the scenes very carefully...TV was as usual on full volume.

Now Priya was totally bust out with anger...This was 10.30 am in the morning time . Everybody was ready in the house and about to go for their respective works..Suddenly they listen a huge noise...screaming- fighting from Ram's room. Rishab came immediately from his room and saw that Dadi already going toward Ram's room...Both listen Priya's voice... .."Mr Kapoor! Are you mad..yeh! kya kar rahai hai...Bacchi kai samney... yeh sub...I said..."

"Oye ! Rihab..Khotey Jakur jaldi dekh..yeh! Halla kasiy mach raha hai?" ...

Rishab about to entered in the room but see that Apeksha was coming from different side.." What happened Rishi"..."Pata nahi... di"..let's see. At same time in the room Priya tried to switch-off the TV with main switch-board as it was on some height but couldn't able to do so...Ram came in her support and suddenly Pihu asked very curisoly ..'Papa yeh! Uncle- aunti..kya kar rahai hai?"...Ram was Goosebumps. He didn't understand what to reply. He immediately took remote from Pihu's hand and switched- off the TV ...meanwhile Priya tried to take the support of the table but lost her balance at fall upon Ram. Both were about to fall on the floor but Ram somehow manage to catch Priya..."Oh...Mr. Kapoor...Chodiyah Mujah...mera hath ...Mr. kapoor.".Priya became shouting with pain..and Rishab, Apeksha...dadi were entered in the room.

All were shocked and saw that Ram hold Priya's hand very tightly and she was bagging for released her hand and Pihu was quietly standing in a side. The entire room was messed up..

"Oye! Gollu!..tuh yeh kya kar raha hai?..."..Dadi asked to Ram...Ram and Priya was stunned & embarrassed to see the family members. Ram immediately released Priya's hand..."Kuch nahi dadi..Ap..Ap jaiyai.. Maie..Handle kar luga..?" This was enough to provoke Dadi..." Tuh kya kar lega...mai bhi dekti hu..."

"Arh! beta nahi ho raha toh tu bibi kai saat Mar-Pitai karega?"..." bacchi ka bhi lihaz nahi tujah?" ...Poor Ram! What more he could say?..

" Bhai..what is going on..Priya why are you looking so upset..".." Apeksha came near to Pirya and asked very warmly" .." No.. nothing to worry..Just..woh pihu...?"..Priya was also feeling difficult to handle the situation.

...All looked at Pihu...She gave a very wired look to all ("these useless elders" types)..."Chintu.. tell me what happened.. what is this on your face..?" Apeksha asked her.."Mumma sai puccho" ...Pihu wanted to rush but Mom hold her ..took her and rushed into the changing room ..This made Dadi more suspicious...

" kal teri Ma ki woh...OYE ! khotey..! kya... Kehtay hai usai?..Dadi shouted on Rishab.."Literature- Conference"..Ha..wahi... katum ho rahi hai ...Aaney dey usai..batati hu tari kartutay"...Dadi warned Ram and all were out from the room one by one.

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"Thik hai yar! Handle kur legai?"...Ram again tried to console Priya...But she was not in the mood to listen anything..."Thik sai batho"...She scolded Pihu who was seated in her lap and again busy to make her ready..." Dirty-Picture...Dirty-Pic..dekh rehay thai...Bibi ko chodkur submey interested rahtay hai." Priya was not stopped muttering. .

"Arh! Ab mujah kya pata ki Pihu TV on kur degi...galthi sai lock nahi kiya Yar!.."...Galti...Bacchi aasai-vesai sawal phuch rahi hai... aur...Dadi...Kya kuch nahi kah gai...kasai face karugi mayi..."

"Jaoo-Khelo"...Priya said to Pihu and came near dressing table and shouted ...OMG! Mr. kapoor...look what your ladli did...Aaj nahi chodugi mai isay." ..Smart Pihu immediately sensed the seriousness and hide herself behind Papa...

"Kaha gai..yeh ladki...Mera sara dressing table..Vanity-box sub barbad kar diya." ...Look this messy room...and Oh! No...She took one lip-stic..."Aysha nai kitney pyar sai di thi...Intni mehgi important lipstic.." this was enough to provoke her egoistic hubby...

"Oh! Hello madam!...Ek lipstick key liyai tufan mat macho...Mat bhulo ki tum Mrs. Priya Ram kapoor ho...Easi lipsticks ki factorya kharid sakta hu."

..." Aaj tak ek toh karid kur nahi di...factory kharidegay."..Priya made very bad face toward Ram...

..." tumhari jaisi kanjus aurat kay bus ki baat hai kya...koi dhang ki cheez afford karna...Arh! tumney toh shaddi bhi "ek kay saat ek free" scheme mai ki..varna..."

Priya came very closer to Ram she was about to say something...Both were looking each other with frown eyes..Suddenly Pihu interpreted..."Papa...Papa...can I come with you to your office?...RAYA was looking at Pihu..."Yeha to kisi ki koi personal life nahi hai?"...She compliant very sadly and innocently. Ram burst out in laughter. Priya rushed to the bed ...took a pillow to threw on Ram ...As she turned... father- daughter duo run away from the room.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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both the parts were fab and funny continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg you were fab yaar👏 kya ideas aate hai😆 pihu tho(luv you pihu)...aur dadi ne kya warning di biwi ko maarte hai raam😆...too gud I could not hold on laughing🤣🤣...agar ye BALH serial mei hua hota tho defenintly mast TRP aati thi...
continue soon with another mast update I enjoyed this 4th update more than other 3 parts too good👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hie...!!!

have been reading this in fb in rkr friends...!!!
bt was nt able to cmmnt there...!!!

superb going...!!!
lovely stry...!!

contn soon...!!!
waiting for the next parts...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update dear.. 👏
Pihu toh puri pataka hai.. 🤣 or rockstar dadi..biwi ko marta hai 😆 😆
Bechare Ram- Priya.. 🤣
Loved it..fab idea
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nee u can edit page no in main post just as u edit in title follow the same procedure just enter in second box where u have updated ur first part put like this at the end of part
Part 1 - page no. 1
Part 2 - page no 2
& so on... hope this will help u...

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