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devmohan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: .sangs123.
superb updt dear
just loved it
thanks for pm

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devmohan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: Dsudipa
very nice update, bt why u end so soon,we wan't to show the wedding and honeymoon pls continue if possible,thx 4 PM

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devmohan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz
Awww cute cute sweet sweet ending :D perfect...jst loved it <3 <3

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devmohan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
its so romantic and emotional, a perfect blend of of both emotion, loved the second marriage proposal, it will be good one, zamaana bhi toh dekhe ke Mr. & Mrs. Kapoor kitne romantic hain, nice one, jab bhi shaadi ho inn dono ki mujhe invite zaroor karna

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Well dear inn dono ki shaadi ka invitation main bhi lene ki koshish kar rahi hoon inn dono se par kiya karoon ye dono intne sharmile hain ki khaete hain ki iss ummr mein shaadi kuch awkward hai...maine bohot samjhaya ki aisa kuch bhi nahi hain aur phir pyaar kiya toh darna kiya...and pyaar kiya toh atleast love marriage bhi karlo...phele toh arrange marriage hui thi , toh abb iss love marriage ko bhi toh taste karna chahiye naa...😆

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devmohan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
thanks for PM

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leena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Part 1
a very nice intresting plot u created here Priya didn't go to KM but Ram stays at SH sometime & sometime in car down to SH was nice thought... he is trying really hard that Priya forgots him hope Priya forgots him soon very nice attempt & intersting too moving on next to read...

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leena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Part 2
what ever the questions Priya rised front of Ram was so true what it happen If Priya woke up after Ram & Juhi's marrige... Ram have no answer & he was so worried what happen next was more scary hope everything be fine... moving on next...

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devmohan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: leena04

Part 1
a very nice intresting plot u created here Priya didn't go to KM but Ram stays at SH sometime & sometime in car down to SH was nice thought... he is trying really hard that Priya forgots him hope Priya forgots him soon very nice attempt & intersting too moving on next to read...

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leena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Part 3
OMG what a story really yaar have no words to discribe hope Piya be fine... really very very nice gud attempt u poytrat the emotion & story very well... moving on next

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leena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#180

part 4
Omg Ram is such like toddler who is ready to anyting just to get his fev Toy or Candy but really loved the whole sequeances... Ram is so deeply in love with Priya even nurse knew it too so well awesome update moving on next...

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