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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iLuvRamKapoor

beautiful end to the beautiful story ujjaini This is one of the beautiful story on RaYa will always remember it

The story started with Friendship ,caring and then love..
The Best think about the love story is Their Friendship and thats how the love story should be first they should know each other ,understand each other and then move in to love making.
This is the reason i love Raya of balh too thats how their relation is..
In Balh First they cant stand each other then they became friends and finally they consummated
Perfect love story 👏
I am in aww with this update every one should get husband like Ram who gives space and freedom to wife.⭐️
RaYa family is so happy to see them finally happy as a couple especially Priya's parents.
And a baby girl for RaYa thats so cute😊
And UFF the romantic scenes Maar daala❤️
I remember the days when you started writing Fan fictions and you used to say that romance is not your cup of tea and now you are doing fab in romantic scenes 👍🏼
Kudos to you👏
Only sad thing is The story is ended
every good thing comes to an end
So looking forward to another beautiful story from you end




thanks for such beautiful comment😊❤️, am really happy that you loved this OS, this one was also very close to my heart, I too fell in love with Ram of this OS, hope he comes back to me again😉, thank you once again for liking
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sinalbest

hi.. 😊

superb ending.. 👏 ⭐️
finally all is well.. 😛

thanks fir pm.. 😊



thanks for commenting😊, yes all is well, pleasure is all mine
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 123fiza


wow... 👏 perfect ending...
both found their love in eachother
after a long time happiness was there for them 🥳

both went through a tough time in past...but now their present is beautiful with eachithers presence...at last they got the support , care , love which they deserved...
ram is so caring...his scareness during priyas labour ...loved d line where ram said why he made priya pregnant 🤣
it was d last part
thanks fr d pm..cont soon




thanks for commenting😊, yes finally happiness knocked their door, Ram was actually too nervous and Priya's screams were making him feel guilty, I know that's hilarious par bechara kya kare, he can't see tears in his beloved eyes😉, pleasure is all mine
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anupam_dil

I read before only but could not comment then...Very nice update but it could be done in 3 to 4 updates minimum😔...lot of info in this only but we are always hungry to know story so ek hi update mei pura milgaya😛😛...thanks🤗... and thanks for pm


meri favorite thi...ye ab khatam hogayi😔😭




thanks for commenting😊, don't feel bad dear, every good/bad things will have end otherwise how will others make their places, anyways will come back again with some other RaYa story, till then bye, pleasure is all mine
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crystal30

Hi dear, that indeed was a nice justification to the story..it really takes a while for the reality to sink in & once achieved there's no turning back. Thank you!




thanks for commenting😊, well said
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

Good ending

at last Ram ne Priya ko dobara Pyar karna sikha hi diya.
aur aaj dono ek dusre ke saat kush hai
nice story...thanks for PM




thanks for commenting😊, haan Ram ke pyaar ne Priya ko bhi phir se jeena sikha diya, pleasure is all mine
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz

Everything is in thier perfect place..jst perfect ending..beautiful..waitting 4 ur next writting




thanks for commenting😊, will come back surely
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IndYa4u

Oh wow... All in One scene it was 😉😛

what a fantastic ending to a beautiful story... 😛 😛

Happiness.. Heartbreaks.. Hurt... Pain... and Love... Beautiful journey of two people.

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Will wait for you to tell us another story of two people.. and their journey.. soon 😉 😉 😉





thanks for commenting😊, RaYa journey it was, tried to show every emotion of theirs, will come back surely
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04


part 7
wowoowoow awesome no words left for this to me... just mind blowing the way they consumited their marrige & Ram said in his husky voice "if he moved forward he won't be able to get back from having her" was the best & Priya even said "she didn't want him get back too" awww to gud I just loved how the whole things fals on it place heheheh RaYa r love in their love land like a Love birds get lost in their love nest... awww they back to India too all r happy to see Priya well & gud they got their jhalli back awesome but Ram was not happy as he was missing her as she was in SH but at night of marrige of Kartik & Esha RaYa again lost in their love world was so gud... & after 2 years they got their bundle of joy Pihu so gud to see I loved that a lot where Ram was just pacing up & down lol RaYa happy with their love ever after...
but yaar 1 complain I have with u...
wish u had shown 1 part only of RaYa romance & then in next KarSha's marrige part along with Pihu's arrival it would be so amezing to read yaar... but happy what ever u wrote I m really enjoyed it a lot it was really awesom & great... waiting for next do post new concept soon...




thanks for sharing😊, they both wanted to continue with their relation to next level and it was Ram who wanted Priya's assurance and she gave herself to him after that there was no look back, will take your complain as suggestion and will remind that, thanks for loving this OS
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

wow is update me sub kuch hai romance emotions happiness all loved it nd sorry for late thnks for pm me its soo hoot also 👏👏




thanks for commenting😊, pleasure is all mine

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