RaYa - OS - it happened.......by chance, updated on pg 10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Part-2
hehehe sorry on suhagraat... kitna wait kraa diya bichaare golu ko... vaise lovellyyy OS didi...👏

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Part 1
what ever Ram did was wrong but his haert is still pure he didn't any kind of harm to Priya so Ok with it... this Sid will never gonna change jab dekho har ladki ka dil toshta hi rehta hai so sad... but loved this concept & set of the story... ek kahani jo shuru hui apharan se ab iska anth kaha hota hai dekhte hain... but honestly was really nicely wriiten up u try to cover up lots of part of story let's read next & will comment later...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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always loved ur Story Ujjaini really this one too... poor Ram have to wait for 2 years too get his love & say sorry to her... Priya ne bhi aacha khasa badla liya Do saaal tak ignore kiya Golu ko poor Golu kitna sehna pada 10 dino ki wajhase... but loved this story expecting more RaYa moments but sayad hi yeh aapki pehli story hogi were RaYa moments was less... but its ok story was best... loved siblings bond truly amezing i loved the whole part was feb do write more waiting...

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems

Thanks to you for writing such a wonderful story and will appreciate if you give in my request of an epilogue. Will be waiting for another OS SS FF from you. Got a pm from you about your old stories. I will start reading them soon. Sorry for the delay.
Thanks a lot once again for adding me. 😊

thank you so very much for loving this OS, am glad, will keep ur request in mind, if possible I will pen down, I will eagerly wait for your comments, u may read my other OS also, don't be sorry dear, pleasure is always mine, god bless you

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: sinalbest
Hi 😊

sry for late..😊
Superb yaar.👏👏⭐️
what an OS...👏👏⭐️ Mindblowing..⭐️

Just a ques. when Priya loves Ram then why she refuse for mrg first time..

Thanks for pm
continue soon..😊

thanks for commenting😊, don't be sorry yaar, its absolutely okay, well Priya loves Ram but somewhere she was terribly hurt and a little bit of ego has come in her so I think that was the reason why she opted out, remember she even told her father that she doesn't want to get married, I hope it is clear now, pleasure is all mine

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: Sakshiram
Finally suhagraat mein sorry bol hi diya..its a lovely os...thnks for pm and really sorry for commenting late

thanks for commenting😊, shayad hi kisine apne suhaag raat pe sorry bola hain but Ram is Ram, pleasure is all mine and don't be sorry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: name2saakshi

thanks you so very much for such lovely comment😊 👏

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: Birdy91
Part-1
Haha esha n ram r siblingsss great didi... Haha... intersstiiinnnggg n sooo nice... hailaaa golu ne kiya priya ka kidnap... awwwiiieee unique story line didi...Lovelyyy lovelyyy lovelyyy... sad to read abt esha...

thanks for commenting😊, am happy that you liked the concept

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Birdy91
Part-2
hehehe sorry on suhagraat... kitna wait kraa diya bichaare golu ko... vaise lovellyyy OS didi...👏

thanks for commenting😊, yeh sirf Ram hi kar sakte hain😉, iss baar kuch zyada hi intezaar karwa diya😛

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: leena04
Part 1
what ever Ram did was wrong but his haert is still pure he didn't any kind of harm to Priya so Ok with it... this Sid will never gonna change jab dekho har ladki ka dil toshta hi rehta hai so sad... but loved this concept & set of the story... ek kahani jo shuru hui apharan se ab iska anth kaha hota hai dekhte hain... but honestly was really nicely wriiten up u try to cover up lots of part of story let's read next & will comment later...

thanks for commenting😊, thanks for liking the story

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