New FF 'Only If...!!!' Updated - 25 April - pg 10 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sinalbest

Part 1

Nice start.. 😊
Different story.. 😛
Moving on to next..


Originally posted by: sinalbest

Part2

Awesome update.. 👏
Felt bad for Priya.. 😒
Continue soon..


Hey dear...

Thanks for commenting... and extremly sorry for late reply and update...

I will be posting next part in few min... do let me know ur views on it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Balhians...

I know... I am very late and its been months since I updated this story of mine... however, i am hopeful that u all remember this story line and are willing to read next parts...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Recap

Today on her 18th bday

She just came back from temple and got the biggest surprise... Kiran and Karan Singhania were present with a team of lawyers and waiting for her. She came running and hugs KiKa... they wished her bday and kissed her on forehead and asked her to pack her bags as she is moving in with them. She looked at her uncle/aunt and tried to deny but Kiran cupped her face and said if she considers them as mother-father, then she won't deny... she nodded in affirmation...

And now she is sitting in car cuddling with Kiran who is consoling her. Karan with the help of laywers was able to take all belongings of Priya or elder Sharmas...

On her way back she stopped at the temple and visited the Baba and happily introduced Singhanias.

Baba blessed her and requested Singhanias to keep her happy and said don't worry Vikram ko bol dunga tujhe who Mumbai mai hi mil lega...

Bidding goodbye to Mount Abu and baba, Singhanias along with Priya reached Delhi, were she got enrolled in Rajat's (her brother - Singhania's son) college and a being a bright student soon got scholarship for studying a course in UK but denied saying she wants stay close to her KiKa and hence the opportunity landed on Rajat (being the second ranker) and he went away to UK and here Priya now was pursuing her Bachelors in Hotel Management from Delhi. She is slowly coming back to herself and is opening a bit...

I guess that's enough for now...

Keeping reading to know how the title Only If...' is relevant and from next part the story will take a leap of 3-5 years...


Chapter 3

Early morning, you see a room - a huge and beautiful room in violet. There is a man sleeping away to glory in his white kurta surrounded by files, laptop. A buzz on phone disturbs his sleeps, the man irritantily covers his ears with pillow failing trying to shuu away the stupid phone. After few minutes are trying in vain, he wakes up replying to phone in a sleeping voice... and we realize its none other than our Ram'...

Ram: Yes, Vikram... Don't you have any other than work other than disturbing my sleep on Funday... (Sunday)

Vikram: I know yaar, but you forgot today you have a flight to catch to Delhi...

Ram: Ohh shoot... yeah buddy thank you... I will get ready... btw you are also coming right?

Vikram: Yes, but I won't be able to accompany you to function as I have to meet someone dear...

Ram: Ohh ok... No problem... chal see you at airport then

At the same time in Delhi... Singhania's Residence

We can hear a loud voice calling for KiKaaa... Hurry hurry... we will be late... pls pls... he is coming today only not tomorrow... Ohhh god I woke all of you nearly 2 hours back and still none of you are ready... Common, I want all of you here near gate in 5 min or I will leave...

ohh goodness, Priyu wait baccha , we are all ready... And we are well before time plus the place is not far also, we will reach in 20 min... and as is he is going to come here only... And he had said not to come to receive him... he will come by his own...

Priya frown... so... I am going to see him after such a long time... I want to surprise him... chalo chalo...

And soon 2 cars zoom away to its destination... carrying Sighania's, Priya in one and other as an extra

At Airport

KiKa and Priya waiting in the arrival lounge... Priya eyeing everyone person to get the glimpse of the person... who has not only become his brother... but his best friend... (i.e. Rajat... Lolol I know some of you might have thought its Ram :P) he is coming back after 3 years along with his GF and to be wife - Sheetal (a US born Indian girl... Rajat's classmate.. daughter of Vinay & Sapna Mathur - famous Doctor couple in New Jersey...). Because of the occasion, she is also accompanying Rajat on his short visit to India to see her future house and country.

And soon her wait was over as we see Rajat coming along with Sheetal coming with trolley loaded with bags... Priya start a run to hug his bro... seeing Priya, Rajat too started to run and hugged his little sister... lifting her in air... Sheetal, kiKa smiled seeing the duo... Soon they hugged each other...

Karan: lets go... Rajat and Sheetal have to get fresh and we have to leave for the function as well...

Rajat side hugged Priya saying... ofcourse... the moment for which we came here...right Riya (Rajat lovingly calls Priya as Riya) to which Priya smiles... as they move towards the parking, Priya excuses herself for a minute saying she will join them near car

They all moves towards parking... while on the other gate we see Ram and Vikram coming out with a hat to avoid media... Vikram stand near the gate waiting for car and Ram who went to buy a coffee.

Here, on reaching near car... KiKa, Sheetal and Rajat are waiting for Priya...

Priya run towards the coffee shop to buy a Hot chocolate' for Rajat - as she knows her brother loves it... while she is waiting in the Q... Ram who was talking on the phone and walking towards the shop gets a reflection of a crystal affecting his view... he blocks the reflection using his hand and steps aside to continue... As soon as he shuts the call, and see up... his eyes falls on her... a beautiful face... innocent eyes... desperately waiting for her number... at the same time waving to someone near gate... such was an aura and effect of her... Ram stopped in his tracks... his eyes, heart and mind was captured by this beauty who was completely unaware of her effect on others near her... he slowly slowly started to come near her... but before he could reach and touch her... she left turning away with a swift that her hair sweeped past from Ram's face...

Ram's eyes kept watching her till she was out of sight... Vibration of his phone... brought him out of his dream world... it was vikram who had been waiting for him forever...

Still in awe of the beauty, Ram was in no mood of a bitter coffee... as his heart was now in need of sweet girl... while walking away he noticed a crystal bracelet near his foot... he picked it up... it was nice and simple crystal bracelet with letter P'... a smile appear on his face as soon as he realized that this belonged to that girl who has captured his heart... Shamefully keeping the bracelet in his inner pocket of jacket... ram started coming out of airport whispering to himself...

My dear... if you are not taken already... I m promise you and myself... you will be mine and only MINE... forever...

Laters ...

I know not a long update... but hopefully will continue tomorrow as well... in the mean time

Do hit the Like' button and post your comments

Edited by fan_forever - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Super good
I am too happy after long reading next part of this story
Priya a bubbly and full of life girl and Ram seems in first glimpse fallen in love with her.
Do continue soon dear

P.S. Please all the readers do take regular part in day to day discussion of Balh forum and try to like and comment every post. Do try to participate in ongoing Balh celebration thread too.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Superb update..
priya is simple n bubly girl
waiting raya's 1st meet
nice continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
awesome update
plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

kaha gaya ho gaye yaar plz continue this waiting form so long plz continue plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: leena04


kaha gaya ho gaye yaar plz continue this waiting form so long plz continue plz...


Hey Leena

Will try to update soon... I had time but somehow was not in a mood to type...

But will update soon.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey fan forever...am an huge fan of ur write ups...one of it is ur ss...tanhayee! woah...i have read it sooo many times..really dont have a count! :-) well will love to read more of it...and plz do post grumpy golu! :-P ;) didnt read this will read this to and do continue this also... :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3
OMG it was getting so interesting why u stopped in middle way god to good update perfect story & situations you placed here so Ram lost his heart at first sight bur Priya have no clue of Ram feeling Vik will be the path to meet them both again... waiting for next if possible plz do continue soon...

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