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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04

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ohh Nairita di what to tel u i have just Thank you so much for wriiting the story as the way i wanted always i mean i m so happy that u wote this such beutiful way... i wanted like this only sineiory if Priya goes in Coma Pihu should have realization what she lost & her one lie cost in everyone's life along with her this is just awseome another thing is best is Pihu told the truth to Ram & she was even dying every momemt seeing her peresnts dying so head off to u for wriiting such gud story...


you know i could have made peehu heartless like they are showing but peehu is an adorable character for every regular BALH follower. I cant make peehu so heartless ..
Thank You for such lovely comments .. stay tuned for RaYa Romance .. Before sherni returns .. ☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IM__NB


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Ram I left you alone .' she suddenly said in the darkness of the night. Ram stood up and went to her. He found her awake. She is doing well now. She can walk now with his support. Ram is there with her at every moment. He caressed her hairs. Priya looked at her husband . A lone tear escaped her eyes. He wiped out her tears.

I left you alone , all these days how you managed everything , if I was you , I could have never be able to do this Mr.Kapoor.' She said taking his hand in hers. Ram moved his hand to her cheeks. They looked at each other. Ram sat on the patient's bed and leaned down to her . He hugged her. Priya hugged him back.

Hugging her he whispered , I carry your Heart with me.. I carry it in my heart... I was never alone neither will be... anywhere I go , you come along...' Ram looked at her eyes once again. How much they love each other , it can't be expressed in words , neither of them can do that. Their love is eternal , a tale which will make everyone jeaolous of them , may be that was the reason , they have to face such tough times in their lives.

I love you Ram..' She spoke... He replied with a soft peck on her lips , adding , I love you too...' Priya asked him to hug her once again . Ram leaned closer to her hugged her. She whispered , stay near me please , I want to hear your heart again . I want to listen to the best music I have ever heard.' Ram lifted her , helped her to lie down on his chest , hugging each other , they dozed into deep slumber.



good one. actually i loved this os more.. it has pain n love.. now stop tempting and update soon.. am waiting..
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Posted: 11 years ago
❤️...my married life is dream like in real life,but still I wonder can such ethereal love like RaYa's is ever possible?
but your writing makes it so believable.
thank you.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome preview waiting for more raya magic
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Posted: 11 years ago
Extraordinary.
right from Pari missing her mom. Doctor Kathy interogating priya, ram n priya's talk, neha n ram's convo , coffe, ram handling over debot card to pihu,vik ram talk, neha making priya smile n ram witnessing this feeling happy.outstanding.
jus fabulous.
You are truly a great writer.
hats off
Thx for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Preview -promising of being together as always-its priya's melancholyof being away n ram's assurance he carry her every where.
looking forward.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvbalh



good one. actually i loved this os more.. it has pain n love.. now stop tempting and update soon.. am waiting..


Hahaha I really Liked the comment will update sooner 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Incredible writeup...!!
Excellnt...

Contn soon..

Intrestng preview...!!!

Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
A NEW JOURNEY VERY BEAUTIFULLY PENNED ...EXCELLENT WORK ..EVRY SMALL CHAPTER AND THE FLOW OF EVERY EMOTIONS ARE PERFECTLY BLENDED..HATS OFF TO YOU ...BRILLIANT WORK😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IM__NB


Hahaha I really Liked the comment will update sooner 😃



u liked it .. haha that's what i want.. now plz update so that give me a chance to like the update.. what is the use keeping it to u .. 😆

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