OS: Intezaar- 'Saath Saal Baad' LAST PART: Pg 16 (22/11)

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Mi_AmOR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Superb part...
Very beautifully penned...

Contn soon...
No big twists pls...

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ShazK.123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: chillpc
Superb part...
Very beautifully penned...

Contn soon...
No big twists pls...

Thank you... I have no big twists planned, don't worry 😊

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3vennela

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Very nice u r blessed writer

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ShazK.123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: 3vennela
Very nice u r blessed writer

Thank you very much 😳 😊

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peeyara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

itna emotional update, i was on verge of crying but in the very next line Priya was responding and i didnt cry 😆

but last mai itna bada question? kahin sach mai dream sequence toh nahi hai na😕

ur blessed writer, u hv written it very brialliantly 👏 👏 👏

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ShazK.123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: peeyara
itna emotional update, i was on verge of crying but in the very next line Priya was responding and i didnt cry😆
but last mai itna bada question? kahin sach mai dream sequence toh nahi hai na😕
ur blessed writer, u hv written it very brialliantly👏👏👏

Thank you so much :-)

It could just be Ram's biggest fear... Ya dream sequence bhi ho sakta hai.. Abhi decide nahi kiya maine 😉 😊

Edited by ShazK.123 - 12 years ago

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haribol79

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Hello Shaz...
you know something your OS tittle INTEZAR is something which also reflect your long wait to show us and share with us your writing ability.. which is beautiful piece of work..

do continue soon... please PM me

jigna

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Emotional update..
Brillaintly penned down.. 👏 abhi tak kaha thi aap madam ji.. 😛
Every emotions is perfectly shown.. 👍🏼
But yeh last mein jatka de diya...dream mat dikhana plz..hehe
Cont soon nd plz pm me next time when u update..

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peeyara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: ShazK.123

Thank you so much :-)

It could just be Ram's biggest fear... Ya dream sequence bhi ho sakta hai.. Abhi decide nahi kiya maine 😉 😊

i'll help u in deciding...dream sequence toh bilkul mat rakhna😆