os pehla pehla pyaar hain pg 40 updt - Page 34

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

too good os yaar ..i love from the beginning till end ..nice concept..and more over u describe it very well..i am late yaar ..u know puja time sry for that ..

Thank u for u .pm'

thank u for loving it and cmnts yaar 😛
my pleasure dear dont be sorry u cmntd on time 😃

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Awesome update Sangs..
RaYa met..MUs got solved..their families have accepted their marriage too..good
Aww how cute scenes with kids..sweet kids..poor RaYa 😆 😆
Beautifull story it was nd perfect ending but i felt u have done it in a big hurry..i know why 😒
Thanx for this OS sangs..

thank u viru dear for cmnts 🤗
hehe hm mu solved everything
hm i wrote in hurry becoz i was so shattered and wanna leave the forum 😊
hehe poor kids i wanted to wrote more 10 kids scenes with raya but just did nt feel like writing it 😊
my pleasure yaar😛

Originally posted by: peeyara

yay! finally they met this tym😊

bade badmash bacche hai raya ke😆

finally MU cleared, everyone has accepted them😊

it was beautiful os👏

but i felt u ended it in jiffy😔

but aapka reason bhi valid hai but still i am unhappy

thank u dear for cmnts 😛
hehe raya ki bachoo bohut naughty hain 😆
thank u for wonderful cmnts 😛

Originally posted by: leena04

Part 4

awww awsome update hain Sangs but was wwaiting for that kids split Ink prcap part... but this was even beautiful u ended story in hurry but did justic to this part... i enjoyed it a lot it was indid beautiful just like u but not fair yaar why u again leaving not happy with ur this decision... sorry to hurt u but not happy at all... as u leaving us...

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Originally posted by: krunalidivecha

just awesome update dear

thank u dear for cmnts 😛

Originally posted by: sinalbest

Hi 😊

Superbly written.. 👏 ⭐️
loved it fully.. 👏 ⭐️
thanks for pm..

HOPE TO READ UR MORE WORK 😊

thank u sagar for loving the ff and cmnts 😛
my pleasure for pm 😊

Originally posted by: sree0007

Lovely update

thanks for the PM

thank u for cmnts 😛
my pleasure dear 😊

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

its not fair to leave dis we r ll love ur work dear

thank u for loving my works and concern dear 😛

Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz

Sweet cute ending :) very nice

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Originally posted by: Dsudipa

Sry 4 late reply, read part 3 & 4 in one go, its a wonderful OS, perfect ending, bt why u leave this forum dear, pls reconsider ur decision, we all waiting 4 ur update, u r a fantastic writer, plsss don't do this 4 ur fan sake...

thank u dear for cmnts 😛
thank u for praises also dear 😛