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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Hi 😊

A very long one 😲 bt nice one too 👏 ⭐️
Like family moments 👏 ⭐️
Raya moments well expressed 👏 ⭐️

thanks for pm
continue soon 😊

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Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Hats off Ujjaini. the beauty of your writing is u keep in mind the tiniest things and highlight it so nicely so that it blends well with the story . Like Shamiyaana, arrangements , girls shopping, saumya with her lehenga for matching jewellary , rishabh n Saumya together selecting Mangalsutra, Neha inquiring about Nutz sasuraal , priya sar pe pallu leke dehleez pe jhukna and ram noticing it and admiring, ram n krishnaji asking saumya's parents if they have anything else in mind finally priya noticing ram when saumya's parents praised him ye sab koi achha pita hi kar sakta hai and priya feeling so much proud of her man and getting convinced he surly will be the best father of the world just fabulous they add so much value to the story n make it beautfiul. U describe so well. i m amazed.

Convo of ram n Priya this time was so touchy assuring each other i m their for u. Taking a step ahead ram telling his Gudiya is with him and priya taking out ram's insecurity or doubt of being a good father. Just beautiful. Ye rishta bahot khaas hai jaha do insaan apne saare insecurities ,care,love,affection,darr jo bhi ho share kar lete hai and find someone at his/her side always n feels strong. Kehte hai na to be loved is a real blessing. Inki yahi openness aur ek dusre ko compliment karne ki saadgi hi iss rishte ko khaas bana deti hai and i love it.👏👏👏

Aur mujhe aise FF padh ne ka muaka mila i feel lucky n proud too.so thanks.

Fantatsic.

Edited by bpatil3 - 12 years ago

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Advitha

@Sakshiram

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Asusual lovely update...hd pleasure while reading tht...sorry dear cant give long update thoda busy hoon,sorry sorry sorry...thanks for pm

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youandme272000

@youandme272000

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Nice update... continue soon nd thnx for pm 😊

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

- this is one of my fav ff..i like everything of this ff..from the 1^st chapter till now u keep its essence in tact..i love it..and yes raya's love is so special..so sacred .beyond imagination.

Thank u for ur pm..

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.sangs123.

@.sangs123.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

cute updt
the marriage preparations are going on nicely
u really potrayed the marriage scenes so close to reality
thanks for pm
cont soon
sorry for late reply

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: chillpc
Nice update...
Loved the way u potrayed evry charecter...
And raya ka tadka bhi laga diya...

Thnx fr the pm...
Contn soon..

thanks for commenting😊, RaYa has to be there in every update, otherwise my update can't be complete😉...my pleasure

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: tulshan1989
wonderful update
yeah it is true raya complement to each other
continue the ff till waiting
thanx for the pm

thanks for commenting😊, thanks for liking...my pleasure

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sakshirambalh
Congrats for nw thread comment abt update little later

thanks for the wish, will wait for that

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sinalbest
Hi 😊

A very long one 😲 bt nice one too 👏 ⭐️
Like family moments 👏 ⭐️
Raya moments well expressed 👏 ⭐️

thanks for pm
continue soon 😊

thanks for commenting😊, tried to show as per the situation, thanks for liking...pleasure is all mine