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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

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preview will be on tomorrow😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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congratulations for 100 pages..

dis concept of urs is totally different nd i luved every bit of it..👏

the character of ram is very different..

i vl b waiting for the day when ram realises his luv...😊

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: shut
congratulations for 100 pages..

dis concept of urs is totally different nd i luved every bit of it..👏
the character of ram is very different..
i vl b waiting for the day when ram realises his luv...😊

thank you for such beautiful glittering wish😊

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

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thank you all for sharing your views about this SS and my write up, I felt humble and ecstatic and that you all love my writing, its the greatest gift for any newbie writer like me, I sincerely hope that I can continue to come up with all your expectations, keep reading, RaYa saga is about to begin as they are going to unite under the holy thread of matrimony 😊

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

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here comes the preview, ENJOY

Ram - aap sab hain yahaan pe, achha hua hain, main aap sab ko kuch batana chahta hoon.

Dadi - kya baat hain Golu sab theek toh hain na?

Krishnaji - Ram koi pareshaani hain kya?

Ram - nahi ma, koi pareshaani nahi hain, mujhe aap sab se Priya ke bare me baat karni hain

Dadi - Priya ke bare me?

Ram - haan dadi, woh darasal...,saying this he said everything about her and Meethi's relationship, about their bond, Meethi's attachment with her and her fear of loosing her di, yahan tak keh ke Ram ruk jata hain, then he said that his promise to Meethi.

Everyone was listening to him including Neha and was thinking that Ram started caring for Priya, may be unknowingly but he do,thinking this a smile curved on her lips. Ram stopped and look at his mother and dadi.

Ayesha - tu yahaan hain, main kab se tujhe dhoond rahi hoon

Priya composed herself and said, kyun?

Ayesha - tu ana, batati hoon, saying this she literally dragged her to the cafeteria.

Priya opened the door and found that everyone of her team and other colleagues of her have arranged a fairwell party for her, with that to her surprise Rajat and Shruthi are also present.

Priya - haan kaki, aaj bohot late ho gaya, maine...

Shipraji - thoda aur soo leti beta, saasural me jaake kahan soo payegi

Hearing this Priya remembered that she has already left her job and her marriage is tomorrow.

Shipraji was still continuing, achha sunn main yeh baatane ke liye aayi thi ke aaj tu khana nahi banayegi, aaj pura din tu hamare saath ki rahegi aur wahi khayegi.

Priya - kaki, iski kya...

Shipraji - mera aur tere kaka ka bohot mann hain beta, beti chali jayegi bas aakhri kuch pal reh gaye hain, saying this she chocked.