RAYA - My Way... Update 38 pg 124 - Page 45

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .sangs123.

superb updt dear
just loved it
thanks for pm
cont soon
sorry for late reply


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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb yaar.. 👏 ⭐️
Sry for late rpl...
Thanks for pm
continue soon.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sinalbest

Superb yaar.. 👏 ⭐️
Sry for late rpl...
Thanks for pm
continue soon.. 😊


Thank you nd dnt b sorry.. its ok 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was beautiful one, love the way you narrated Apeksha's character, its very real yet very touchy, aisa hi hota hain, I too hope Ram aur Apeksha ke beech me sab kuch solve ho jaye, she too needs her brother, loved Ram's teasing Priya, plz continue ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

it was beautiful one, love the way you narrated Apeksha's character, its very real yet very touchy, aisa hi hota hain, I too hope Ram aur Apeksha ke beech me sab kuch solve ho jaye, she too needs her brother, loved Ram's teasing Priya, plz continue ASAP


Thank you so much dear 😊
Will try to update dis weekend...
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting 4 the update
continue soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .pia_12.

waiting 4 the update
continue soon!!!

will b updating in few hrs 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hope you all like this one ...
It was really an Imp. one which I felt should be shown between RAYA ..
I have tried to show it in a conversation between them about what they both feel...



UPDATE 24


IN CAR

Ram and Priya were sitting comfortably in the back seat..
Privacy shield was on..
They were moving towards d Dream House..
Priya was resting her head on Rams shoulder..

Priya - Ram m so excited to see the House..
She spoke very excitedly with a glint of sheer happiness and child like excitement.. Ram could not help but smile looking at her priceless expressions and admire her..

Ram - Priya I just cant wait to reach there and show u OUR House darling.. U know i never thought that someday i would actually take u to this house when i was building it.. Though i have dreamed of it a many times but wokeup only to face the bitter reality of not getting my dream come true ever..

His hold on her tightened around her while saying the last line..
Priya reciprocated understanding his feelings..

Priya - Ram. I m so...

Ram - Shhh...
He kept his finger on her lips stoping her from saying anything further..

Ram - Priya I have waited so long and now just I cant contain my happiness to take u there and m just sharing my feelings of wt I went while i was building d House.. This does not mean any sense that you have to Apologise .. I have forgotten it and I dnt want u to Apologise again and again evry time something like this I share with u.. so plzz now promise me else I wont take you there.. soch lo..

And he smile slightly wiping her tears..

Priya - I love you so much Ram and I m really very sorry...

Ram - Priya I said NO...

Priya - Ram let me complete plzz..

I m really sorry for hurting you and went away from you when u needed me d most and also hide our daughter from you which was you dream.. OUR dream..
And I understand wt u r saying but I just want to let u know this for the last time that m really sorry for wt I did and I promise to listen to u forever Ram.. FOREVER
I know you never talked abt it or share but i know that even today when u see Peehu u feel very hurt that u missed out on her childhood and I can see that in ur eyes Ram and I cannot forgive myself for dng this to you..

She paused looking at a teary eyed Ram and tears freely flowing from her eyes too..
She cupped his face with both of her palms..

Priya - I am so sorry Ram but I promise to give u all the happiness that u so deserve in the form of our these two babies and I just cant wait to c d hapiness in ur eyes when u will b holding them for the first time Ram..
I want to c everything of you which I missed at d time of Peehu and only then I would b able to forgive myself for wt I did Ram dt atleast u would b able to c ur child growing up which is ur right which I snatched away from u..

She sobbed uncontrollably..
Ram was too overwhelmed to hear Priya say all this..
He knew hw sorry she was for leaving him but listening from her was too heartwrenching and nw ven she confessed the little bit of hurt which was left inside his heart whenever he saw Peehuas rightly said by his darling wife, that too soothed by wtever Priya confessed..

He composed himself and then wiping her tears he kissed her forhead and took her in a tight embrace calming her in only one way he knew that Priya needed saying I LOVE U to her..

They stayed like that untill they heard driver calling and informing about their arrival..

RAm cupped Priyas face and smiled at her wiping her tears which refused to stop..

Ram - Priya nw that we have shared and talked about everything which i never wanted to discuss cz I knew it will hurt both you and me..
but m glad u talkd abt it it nw ders nt even a single amount of hurt left in me PRiya and Trust me ven I say this..

Priya looked into his eyes .. she can see the calmness and truthfulness ..

Ram - u kno me so well Priya but likewise I know u too and so I know wt u feel Priya.. But plz trust me nw and I dnt want all this to talk happen again as we decided earlier.. got it ?

Priya jst nods her head looking at him..

Ram - now can u plz smile or do I need to take u back to India cz I dnt want to c dis face of urs which says u r not at all happy ..I love it ven u smile darling..

she smiled a bit hearing him..

Ram - god Priya this is not done yaar.. m so xcited to show u d HOuse and look here u look like I have brought u here forcefully and moreover all will be here in sometime and i so wanted us to b alone...
and he pouted..

Seeing his cute pout she couldnt help but smile broadly ..

Priya - Ram u r such a nautanki..
and she laughed happily..

Ram made faces at her which earned more laughter from her..
She kissed his cheeks saying..
Priya - u r so adorable Ram and thank you for making me smile so much my cute polar bear..
and she laughed some more..

Ram looked at her smiling and felt blessed to have her in his life..


ON THE OTHER SIDE

All left to d house in respective cars..
They were on their way when they saw SYDNEY CRICKET GROUND[SYG] and something clicked in Vikrams mind..

Vikram Neha and kids were in one car along with Peehu..
Vikram whispered to Neha

Vik - Neha y dnt we go n c SYG first and then go to the house..
NEha - vikram r u mad.. we all r so tired and moreover we r here so excited to c d house and u want to go and c d SYG..!!
Vik - listen to me na first... see Ram and PRiya left early ans I supposse they must have reached there already.. dont u think they need some alone time with each other..
Neha - vikram wt r u saying..
Vik - Neha Ram has not allowed anyone of us in these yrs to visit d house or even c a pic .. there must b something very special abt d house which he built in Priyas memory when she was not with her.. nw dnt u think they both should need private space when they r visiting togrther there??

Neha understood wt vikram said and she immediately hugged him pulling his cheeks..

Neha - u r a genoius baby.. I love u..

Vikram smiled at nehas antics and immediately called Apeksha to inform the change and visit to SCG..
Initially all were aprehensive but then with lot oif convincing from vikram neha and kids they all agree to visit SCG..

Vikram winked at Neha as he moved away to cal RAm and inform abt their late arrival..


IN CAR

RAm - I love u Priya

PRiya - I Love you too Ram

he brought her face closer and...
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.they were disturbed by d ring on Rams phone..
HE looked at d cal dejectedlt and Priya smiled looking at him..

Ram - yaar Vikram abhi to thodi privacy dede ..kyun phn kar raha he..

PRiya rolled her eyes and his his arm lightly and Ram winked at her blowing a kiss to her.
she blushed looking at him..

Vik - Privacy dene k liye he phn kiya tha saale tujhe per ab soch raha hun plan cancel kardu..
Ram - kya matlab ? konsa plan ?
Vik - SCG dekhne ka plan banaya tha maine socha tujhe thodi privacy de du per ab tu aise baat kar raha he to soch raha hun sabko abhi wapis lekar aa jau .. kya bolta he ??
RAm - arreee vikram u r too good yaar.. dost ho to tere jaisa.. plzzz plzz sabko wahan rok le aur m really sorry maine aise baat ki terese but plz yaar tu plan cancel mat kariyo..

Vikram smiled hearing Ram and PRiya lokked confuse looking Ram talking like this..

Vik - saale ja tu b kya yaad rakhe ga .. chal ab rakhta hun.. enjoy...😉

Ram - thank you so muuuch vikram yaar..

He smiled broadly after cutting the phn and looked at Priya who was looking confused..

Ram grinned and bringing her closer to him he said..

Ram - all others hv stopped to see SCG and will b arriving late so nw can we move forward Mrs.Kapoor from where we stopped..
and he came more closer..

Priya blushed hearing him and then pushed him away saying..

Priya - Ram we have reached and driver is ouside plzz.. nw can we go m dieing to c the house..

RAm - I will get back to u for this Priya but first lets go inside the house then wait and watch darling and he winked at her and helping her out of the car..

Priya jst blushed biting her lower lip seeing which Ram grinned..




To b continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was just fabulous ...
splendidly penned down Raya love ...
Priyas plight superbly excuted ...


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Posted: 11 years ago
superb vidhi and yes friend ho to vikram jaisa
and the starting talk between them really much awaited snces for me .but cv forgot at last u gave us
thank u very much for that
and also for ur pm

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