RAYA - My Way... Update 38 pg 124 - Page 25

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb updt dear
thanks for pm
cont soon
no the story is moving in right direction and
iam loving it

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

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<font size="3">o darling after a longgg gap ..again u r
back..love it from core..now badly i want Priya will do something specila for
Ram ..as she hurts him a lot..thank u for ur pm..and update asap..</font>




Thankyu dear nd yes its been a long so vil try to update d nxt asap 😊
Lets c wt hpns nxt...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

the story is going absolutely perfect, there is nothing which we readers could complain about, am loving this, specially this part, Priya is defo angry and I always love the way she showed that on Ram, its cute as well as perfect, I would like to read more from you so plz continue ASAP



Thankyu so much dear vil keep writting more such raya moments for u all readers... will continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .sangs123.

superb updt dear
thanks for pm
cont soon
no the story is moving in right direction and
iam loving it



Thankyu dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
UPDATE 18


In Study...


Ram is sitting on couch vid a drink nd thinking ..
I kno u r hurt priya bt den also hw can u thnk of me like dt.. u kno me more den myself den hw priya hw ?
Jst den he sees vikram calling..

Ram- ha vikram bol
Vik-ha ram vo jo saari bookings tune boli thi sab ho gai he aur kal ki sabki tickets b mere pass aa gai he..
Ram-hmmm thik he kal aa jaana aur lunch yehi per he yaad he na ?
Vik- ha yaar he.. achha ek baat bata kya hua he itna low kyun sound kar raha he ?
Kal sab milke pehli bar ghumne ja rahe he vo b tere kehne per aur tu khush nai lag raha he
Ram-are kuch nai yaar tu na bas kuch bhi mat bol.. offcourse m very happy nd xcited abt d trip..
Vik- achha ab tu mujhse juth bolega.. chal ab sidhi tarah se bata kya hua he
Ram- vik yaar mujhe neend nai aa rahi thi to bas study me kuch files dekh raha tha..
Vik- achha tab to def tere aur priya me kuch hua he aur tu study me jaake drink kar raha he haina ?

Ram dsnt reply..

Vik- ram.. batyega abhi k me aau vahan pe neha ko leke ??
Ram- nahiii koi zarurat nai he..
Vik- ha to bol ab

Ram tells him abt all d thngs happend btw him nd priya.. nd also abt d surprise he has planned for priya..

Vik- dekh ram priya ne jo kaha vo frustration me gusse me kaha nd m sure she dint mean dt balki abhi bhi she must b thnkng abt u.. nd yaar usse thodi na kuch pata he vo to naturally aise he react karegi na...

Ram is listening nt replying..

Vik- dekh ram ekto tune usse uske parents se milne nai jaane diya uper se shipra ji ne bhi mana kiya priya ko.. to use ajeeb lagega na yaar..
Aur fir tu use ched raha tha yaar kaise teri itni himat hui apni pregnant biwi ke saath aise mazak karneki jab ki vo gusse me thi..
Ram stops drinking - matlab tu kehna kya chahta he ?
Vik- are yaar ti kyun bhul raha he teri biwi pregnant he ..
Ram- mujhe pata he vikram !!
Vik- ha to ye bhi pata hona chaHiye k pregnant biwi ko kabhi bhi mood swings hote he aur specially jab vo gusse me ho unhe kabhi bhi pareshaan nai karna chahiye varna husbands ki band baj jaati he..
aur tune to mere dost saari limits he cross kar di.. pehle to tune use roka fir gussa dilwaya fir tang kiya use aur fir vo...
Ram- ha bas bas aage mujhe pata he kya kiya maine..
Vik- ha to fir priya to aise react karegi na its natural yaar.. aur tu h ki hurt ho k betha he.. are agar priya ki jagah neha hoti na to mujhe to kab ka ghar se bar nikal diya hota aur tere saath me drinks le raha hota ... kher mana k priya ne aisa kuch to nai kiya tere saath..
Ram-shutup yaar vikram ...
Nd den both laughs on wt vikram said...
Ram- yaar bt me usko surprise dena chata hun isliye ye sab.. ab mujhe thodi na pata tha vo aise react karegi..
Vik- dekh ram biwi k reactions ka na koi bharosa nai karna chaiye aur teri biwi to pregnant he to ab na tera kuch nai ho sakta..
Ram- yaar tu dara kyun raha he..
Vik laughs nd den says- kuch nai hoga chinta mat kar ab kal priya bilkul thik ho jayegi jab use sach pata chalega to..
Ram- i hope so...
Vik- chal ab rakhta hun kal milte he aur chill kar ab..
Ram-ha thik he

Ram sighs nd sits resting his back on d couch..

Ram- m sorry priya mujhe aisa nai karna chahiye tha per kya karu gusse me tum itni cute lagti ho mujhse raha nai gaya..
Nd he smiles broadly thinking abt her...
Ram- m sure priya kal tum boht boht khush ho jaogi... aur fir aaj jo hua uska me pura hisab lunga tumse m nt gonna leave u priya...
He grins naughtily nd finishes his drink nd moves towards der room ..

He enter d room nd sees priya sleeping soundly .. he smiles nd silently closing d door goes near her nd sees dry tear marks on her face..
Seeing her tears he feels a pain in his heart .. he kisses her forehead nd whispers..
Ram- m sorry darling m so sorry...
He wipes her cheeks carefull nt to disturb her nd den settles himself besides her taking her in his arms...

Feeling him close she snuggles closer to him resting her head in his crook of d neck her hand hugging him tight...
A broad smile forms on his lips feeling priya snuggling closer to him nd he hugs her tight nd sleeps kissing on her hairs whispering a love u to her...


Early morning rays falls on her nd she stirs in her sleep..
Slowly opening her eyes she finds herself in rams tight embrace..
Seeing her husband so close to her a smile creeps on her lips.. she ruffles his hairs nd he stirs in his sleeps.. bt den again he snuggles closer to priya nd starts snoring...
enjoying dis Priya again ruffles his hairs nd seeing his frown in sleep she smiles nd den softly kisses his pouted lips which immediately turns into a smile...
She watches him sleep close to her for sometime..

Den she remembers previous days events..
A lone tear escapes her eyes.. she looks at ram nd whispers..
Priya- m sorry ram i dint meant to hurt u.. m so sorry... plz forgive me...
She caresses his hairs nd whispers...
I love u Ram...
Nd den she slowly slips out of his embrace nd went to frshenup...

Ram opens his eyes smiling broadly saying..
Ram- i love u too priya nd i promise dis is gng to b d best trip for u...



At breakfast table..

Ram is surprised to c al his fav dishes on table..
He sits nd sees priya serving him his fav food.. he looks at her bt she is nt looking at him ..
He hides his smile...
She sits nd starts helping peehu to clean up ..

Peehu- papa pata he aaj na saara aapka aur mera fav bana he..
Ram- achha.. per aapko pata he aaj kyun sab fav bana he hamara ?
Nd he looks at priya..
Peehu- nai papa .. mumma batona aaj kuch special he kya ?
Priya looks at ram who is looking at her nd den at peehu says..
Priya- ha baby aaj hum sab ghumne ja rahe he na to ye aapke fav mumma k parathe vahan nai milenge na so mumma ne socha ki aapko aapki saari fav chize aaj khilai jaaye taki aap holidays me mumma ka khana miss na kare..
Peehu- wow mumma u r best.. i love u.. ye to maine socha he nai tha.. thankyu mumma..
Nd she kisses her cheeks nd runs away to play vid khush..
Nw only RAYA r der on d table...

Ram looks at her .. she is nt looking at him nd silently eating her apple..
Ram- tumne subh se kuch khaya ?
Priya loooks at him surprised hearing his question..
Priya- huh..matlab ?
Ram a bit sternly - matlab subh se bas ye apple kha rahi ho ya aur kuch liya tumne ?
Priya- nai bas vo .. ye... abhi... nd looks dwn..

Ram sighs nd den cals bansi kaka..

Bk- ji sir
Ram- bk mujhe bf apne room me chahiye aur ha mujhe ye sab nai khana he..
Aap isme se sirf paranthe laiye aur saath me cornflakes oats aur veg sandwiches laie...
He looks at priya who is staring at him...
Ram- bk saara bf priya k saath uper bhijwa dena jaldI se..
He gives one last look to her saying m waiting nd leaves from der..

Priya is still sitting der thinking abt wt ram said..
Her chain of thoughts breaks ven bk comes to cal her..



RAYA room..

Priya enters vid bk along vid d food.. she instructs dem to keep d food on table near couch as Ram was sitting der waiting...
While bk was serving..
Ram- bk aap yahi khana chod dijiye we vil manage..

Bk nods nd leaves..
Ram watches priya standing nd looking at him.. he gets up nd den went towards d door nd bolts it...
He comes near priya who is looking very confused bt is nt asking ne thng..

Ram- abhi b gussa ho ? Baat bhi nai karogi mere se ?
Priya- aa..ar..are..u..angry ??
He dsnt rply ne thng nd stares at her..she is nt able to meet d intense gaze of Rams eyes so she lowers her head..
Ram takes her hand in his nd says..
Ram-lets eat priya m very hungry nd i kno my babies r also hungry so lets feed dem come...
Nd he takes her towards couch nd makes her sit beside him...
He serves dem in single plate nd feeds her vid his own hands lovingly...
Priya cant take it ne more nd she jst breaks dwn hugging him tight...

Priya- m so sorry Ram.. pata nai mujhe kya hogaya tha kal.. m sorry...
She is sobbing hard nd is nt able to speak more jst whispering sorry nd hugging him tight..

Ram takes her in his tight embrace caressing her hairs says..
Ram- its ok baby.. m sorry too..jst calm dwn plz.. u kno na i cant handle u crying.. plzzz darling for me...
Nd i understand u completely nd m nt hurt priya .. look at me baby ..
He tries to cup her face bt she nestles more close to him hiding her face in his chest sobbing silently...

Ram jst lets her b nd caresses her hairs nd back..
After sometime ven she stops crying he speaks..
Ram- waise priya i kno ye sab tumne mere liye banaya he to mujhe khane kyun nai de rahi ho kabse bhukha rakha he mujhe..haan..
Wt r u upto darling ??

Priya cmng out of his embrace looks at him who is grinning at her..

She smiles shyly nd looks dwn..
Ram comes closer nd kisses away her tears.. resting his forehead on hers ...

Priya- m sorry ram..
Rma-shhh no more sorry nd actually its me who should say sorry ok nt u.. so m very sorry for..
Priya- nai ram aapki koi galti nai thi vo to me bas ma k vajah se aur fir aap...
Nd she looks at him..
Ram- i kno maine mana kiya tumhe isliye.. bt trust me baby its all for ur good only..
nd nw m really really very hungry so ab aap mujhe apne hatho ke bane pranthe apne haatho se mujhe khilyengi plzzz... nd makes a puppy face...
Priya smiles looking at him nd den kissing his nose says..
Priya-i would love to do dt...

Both smiles .. she takes d plate nd feeds Ram..
Ram feeds her oats bt she refuses nd instead eat d same parantha which she was feeding Ram..

Ram-are tum mera parantha kyun kha rahi ho.. tumhare liye to ye cornflakes aur oats ye sab haine fir..
Priya- kyun aapko kisne kaha ki me paranthe nai kha sakti..
Ram- per tum to bf me ye sab khati ho na fir...
Priya- ha per mujhe aaj paranthe khane he.. aur maine aapse nai kaha tha aapne khud he ye sab mangvaya.. to ab aap he khaye me to paranthe khaungi..
nd she relishes d paranthas nd ram is jst wtchng him..

Looking at his face she smiles..

Priya- kya ? Aise kyun dekh rahe he ?
Ram- yaar tum akele akele paranthe aise kha rahi ho aur mere liye ye sab khana chod diye he.. nt fair priya...

Looking at his face she laughs laudly..
Ram- aawww Ram .. u r sooo cute...
me to bas thoda sa tang kar rahi thi aapko...
Ye lijye... nd she feeds him lovingly...
Ram too feeds her nd smiling hugging dey finished der bf...



To b continue... :)

Do like nd comment pplz...
Nd A VERY HAPPY & SAFE DIWALI & A PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR TO U ALL...njoeee :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank god raya are not angry with each other nice one continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thts gud...everything is now settle..now waitting for next..thanks 4 pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 18
awww loved Jai veeru's talk hay they both r so cute while talking loved their friendship... loved RaYa's morning scene too so lovely & amezing just awesome way to gud... finally RaYa is not angry with each other so happy to know that... waiting for next do post soon... Happy diwali to u too...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tulshan1989

thank god raya are not angry with each other nice one continue soon



Yes.. thankyu 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arrre wah patch up toh favourite dish k saath... super.😆

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