RAYA - My Way... Update 38 pg 124 - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 16

awww Priya is darling of everyone all r so happy for trip everything is going so perfect just too gud... loved RaYa's small happy moments too they r just megicle as always too sweet RaYa is so happy... i guess Ram is trrying to convaince Sdhirji & Shipra for trip but they r dening to come don't worry hamara Golu apni Gudiya ko mana hi lega awesome... waiting for next do update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04

Part 16

awww Priya is darling of everyone all r so happy for trip everything is going so perfect just too gud... loved RaYa's small happy moments too they r just megicle as always too sweet RaYa is so happy... i guess Ram is trrying to convaince Sdhirji & Shipra for trip but they r dening to come don't worry hamara Golu apni Gudiya ko mana hi lega awesome... waiting for next do update soon...



Yes she is a darling... nd ya raya is jst magical... 😛
Hmmm vil try ro update soon... thankyu 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
I kno its been so long so heres a quick recap...

All r gng to Australia.. priya helps al in packing while ram helps priya in packing...
Priya cals up at hme nd ram nt allowing her to visit sharma house.. priya angry vid ram Nd a surprise by on a way for Priya by Ram...
Ab aage...


UPDATE 17


At Dinner table..


All r xcited nd happily chatting abt d trip enjoying d dinner ..

Ram observes priya is nt looking nlre talking vid him only passing him food ben he asks without looking nd serving him..
So be pusposely asks for more paratha nd xtra butter bt to his surprise she passes him dt too vidout saying ne thng nor reacting as she does normally..

All oders r surprised too bt looking at priyas mood no one speaks ne thng dey hv n idea as to y priya is quiet...


Nw peehu seeing dt mumma dint stop pappa from eating More she also asks for xtra butter nd paratha too bt priya dint allowed her to eat nd instead gave her more vegetables nd roti to eat..

She sulks nd den argued as to y pappa got nd nt her ..
Priya jst glared at Ram nd Ram immediately put dem back nd tells peehu dt c pappa is nt eating ne more nd nw dey can share vegetables nd serves himself some veg nd smiles at priya ven peehu happily shares her food vid her pappa..


Priya jst glares in return at Ram nd all oders supress der giggles seeing d scene in front of dem..
Nd ram nd peehu quitely finishesh der food much to priyas surprise bt den she dsnt reacts..



Priya retires to her room after tucking peehu nd khush in bed wondering y isnt Ram still in d room bt den she rembers wt Ram did nd after dt she is jst only nodding nd dng wt he says vidout arguing offcourse nt looking nd talking vid him to show her anger..
She also dint pick up d cal which was from her mother a while ago nd cz of repeated calls she switched off her mobile..
cz she got to kno from dadi ven she asked at dinner tym abt natasha nd she said she is at sharma house since noon nd has nt return yet..
She is angry dt her mother dint allowed her to visit saying she is busy so nw she is nt taking d cals...


Ram comes into d room nd observes priya standing deep in thoughts..
he bolts d door acquiring priyas attention bt she immediately looks away..

Ram cals her bt she is nt repling jst standing..
Ram asks her y she is standing nd thnking insted shld sit nd do wtever she want..
so vidout replying she goes nd sits on d bed..

Ram sees her dng nthng nd sitting like a statue..

RAM-wt is wrong vid u priya ? Y r sitting like dis dng nthng..

She dsnt reply..

RAM- priyaaa... for god sake speakup..

Instead of repeated attempts nt gettng ne response he jst goes inside to get fresh nd change..
ven he comes back he sees priya sitting as before only...
He sighs nd goes near her..

He tries to hold her hand bt she takes back nd looks away from him..

He observes her for sometime bt ven she is nt ready to even look at him den getting up he speaks..

RAM-enough nw priya go change urself nd den sleep its quite latr nw u need rest..

She vidout even looking at him immediately goes in washroom..

He wonders y is she bhaving like dis..
den suddenly realises dt she is dng wtever he is asking nd telling her to do.. nt arguing nor replying even nw nd before also at dinner..

RAM- ohk so madam is showing her anger in dis manner...hmmm

he smiles thnking hw crazy his wife is bt den he loves her tooo much nd so plans somethng nd dials a num...
Ahter ending d cal he turns nd was abt to go but Jst den priya enters d room ..
he looks at her dt she is gng to bed ignoring him..

He smiles his tounge in cheek nd tells her to stop..
She stops hearing him..
He comes in front of her..

RAM-uhh priya can u plz get me some hot chocolate i..

She turns nd dials thru intercom vidout listening to him further bt ram puts dwn d intercom immediately before she orders...

RAM-i want u to get me priya..
She flinches nd den stamping her foot goes out of d room ..

Ram smiles broadly whiles priya murmers to herself while gng to get his hot chocolate..

PRIYA-pata nai kya samajhte he apne aapko.. hot chocolaye chayie ab is waqt vo bhi mujhse banva rahe he .. ab fikar nahi he pure tym to rest karo rest karo ab dekho..huh

When she enters d room she finds it dark only few scented candles r burning igniting her scenses vid its aroma nd d smell of hot chocolate mixing vid d aroma.. she inhales sharply nd enters d room ..

She sees Ram standing near d window looking outside..
She puts d cup on d table a bit loudly so dt he can hear it..
while dng so she notices a rose lying on d table vid a sorry card..
she nw looks at him who has by nw come near her standing in front of her taking d cup sipping d hot chocolate...
She glares at her smiling face nd den tears d card nd puts back d pieces on d table covering d rose nd turns to go..

Ram puts d cup back on tables nd holds her hand to stop her..
She removes her hand from his grip nd went to dressing widout looking at him..

He goes nd bolts d door ..
She is brushing her hair nd was about to make a messy bun ram tells her to keep her hair open nd as xpected by ram she does dt nd gets up to go to bed..

RAM- wait
She stops
RAM-go
She goes
RAM-wait
She stops again

Ram does dis for a while till she reaches near d bed enjoying her angry xpressions nd red colour which is rising on her nose cz of anger..

He goes nd stands close to her .. her back is facing him..

RAM- turn

She turns nd finds herself very close to him bt den recovers immediately by taking a step back..

RAM- i dint tell u to take a step back..

Nd again comes a step closer grinning at her while she looks at him gritting her teeth..

RAM-its so hot around here i thnk u should remove ur robe before gng to bed..

She knows y Ram is dng like dis bt den she is angry vid him nd in no mood to talk so she jst removes her robe nd throws it on d floor glaring at ram..

Ram xpected her to argue nd answer back to him bt is surprised to c dt she dint reacted dis tym also nd thnks beta Ram she is hell lot angry on u .. aur de surprise biwi ko...
He sighs nd den thnks fine priya if dis is wt u want den ok..

He smiles naughtily at priya indicating her dt he is more den happy to hv dis view of her beaitiful wife..
she lowers her eyes colour rosing upto her cheeks..
He comes forwad nd whispers in her ears.. she can feels his breath..

RAM-kiss me

He pulls back to notice his wifes xpressions nd as xpected she gets to c her face turning from blush to shock to anger ...
She turns nd goes to bed...

Ram comes above her sleeping form close to her..
RAM- dis is nt fair priya...
Priya pushes him as he tries to come closer bt fails as ram pins her hands on bed..
She looks angrily at him..
Ram smiles saying- kya .. aise kyun dekh rahi ho.. i told u to kiss me nd u r nt ..common priya do as i say..
She struggles to free her hand bt fails..
RAM- nt fair darling shaam se jo bol raha hun u r dng dt viout looking at me nw y u nt dng.. gussa khatam ho gaya ? Nd he comes closer..
priya sees d smile on his face which angers her more nd she gives a hard push to Ram nd he falls on bed..
PRIYA- enough !! U r my husband dt dsnt mean u can do wtever u want nd u cant force me into dis.. aap jo bol rahe he vo me kar rahi hun bina argue kiye jaise aap chahte he iska matlab ye nahi he k aap iska fayda uthaye ..
pata nai kya ho gaya he aapko aaj aur ma ko bhi..
Aap kaise zabardasti kar sakte he ye jaante hue k m pregnant.. i dint xpected dis from u Mr.Kapoor !!
Its really disgusting of u...

Vid dt she gets up from d bed bt ram pulls her back nd pins her to bed holding her hands tightly..
She winces in pain Nd sees d bloodshot eyes of Ram boring into hers nd suddenly realises wt all she spoke abt him in anger..

PRIYA-R...RA...RAM...
RAM- jst shutup nt a word more nw !! U can thnk wtever u want to i dnt giV a damn !!
its u who started all dis i dint told u to bhav in dis manner..

He looks at her wincing in pain cz of his grip nd immediately loosens it .. his xpressions bcmng soft looking at her...
She looks at him vid teary eyes..

RAM- I kno u ver angry nd u shld b.. bt den I was jst trying to change ur mood .. bt if dis is wt u thnk abt me den i dnt thnk ders ne thng else which i can tell u nw xcept a sorry for nt allowing u to visit ur parents today..
m sorry i dint knew i hv hurt u to dis xtent dt u...
A tear falls from his eyes on her eyes...
He immediately wipes dt off vid his thumb nd den kisses her forehead softly moves away from her ..

Priya sees d hurt in his eyes nd feels guilty..

RAM- take rest priya u need sleep .. i hv some work to do.

Nd vidout listening ne thng more he storms out of d room closing d door behind..

Nd priya jst breaks into tears realising d pain of her words spoken to Ram in dt moment of anger nd d pain in his eyes...
bt den wt to do he made her so angry vid his unaffected behaviour nd enjoying her anger nd purposely ordering her to do everythng dt she completely lost it wt she was speaking..


So ppl Wt vil hpn nxt ??
All type of comments r welcome.. do tell wt u felt abt d update...


P.S - My main purpose of writing dis story is to show all d phases nd small moments in d life of RAYA...
So if its bcmng a bore for u all nd fell dt story is nt moving ahead den plzzz let me kno... THANKYU :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
perfect buddy amazing i swear it lovd it continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb part...!!!
aw...!!!suprise ke chkr mein jhagda hgya raya ke beech...!!!

contn soon...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

perfect buddy amazing i swear it lovd it continue



Thnx for commenting nd happy dt u lovd it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chillpc

superb part...!!!

aw...!!!suprise ke chkr mein jhagda hgya raya ke beech...!!!

contn soon...!!



Thankyu 😊
Ha surprise k chakkar mw jaghda hogaya...
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was great one raya are upset with each other hope they will not remain angry with each other continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 17
i must say yaar u r feb writer i nok jhok of RaYa yes normal wife behaves this way sometimes... i really enjoyed all this RaYa is hurt now by each other but i guess everything will fall on its place in next soon... do update next soon no need to stop waiting for next..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 17
i must say yaar u r feb writer i nok jhok of RaYa yes normal wife behaves this way sometimes... i really enjoyed all this RaYa is hurt now by each other but i guess everything will fall on its place in next soon... do update next soon no need to stop waiting for next..

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