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Posted: 12 years ago
part 11

awww awesome update yaar Rahull's idea worked Ram didn't feel akward to kiss Priya means he have also feelings for Piya in heart & soon gonna realize it too... awww Priya is on cloud 9 after Ram kiss & extra care too gud they all set for party but Priya don't know how to wear saree how will she?? hhehehe seeing precap lagta hai Ram ab iss riste jaldi hi next leval0pe jane wala hai... too gud the best plz plz post next waiting egarly...
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CHAPTER TWELVE

Today was the re union party, Ram was ready in hi s black tuxedo looking dashing n handsome as usual n Priya was still not ready. Ram asked her to get ready soon n he'll be waiting for her in hall. Half hour passed by but there was no sign of Priya, so Ram went to the room to look what's the matter and there he found his wife sitting on bed with her head in her hands. Ram knocked n went inside.

Ram: Priya tum abhi tak tayyar nahi hui

Priya gets up and seeing her Ram started laughing but controlled immediately. She didn't drape her saree properly.

Priya with a sad face: I am not coming, u go ahead

Ram: but y?

Priya: I don't know how to wear saree n today's party dress code is saree... so u better go

Ram: y don't u take anyone's help?

Priya: maine socha tha k Neha ya Shruti meri help kar denge but Neha ko bhi saree pehenna nahi aata aur Shruti toh delhi se directly party mai hi aayegi, aap jayie otherwise u'll be late

Ram didn't want to leave Priya alone n moreover he knew how excited she was for this party. So he offered his help

Ram: mai kuch help karu?

Priya confusedly: but kaise?

Ram smiles: shayad tum bhul rahi ho maine tumhare liye saree pehenna sikha tha

Priya smiled remembering: I do remember, kaise bhool sakti hoon

Ram: ok then I'll guide u, u just follow my instructions

Priya: ok

Ram started guiding her but every time she messed up with something or the other, they tried for one hour but still Priya couldn't do it properly. She remembered how she made Ram to learn drape a saree.

***FLASHBACK***

Every year Priya's college conducts beauty pageant in college for girls but Priya never participated. So in order to make Priya participate, Ram made it compulsory for every student to participate in contest otherwise they'll be failed for that year. When Priya got this news, she was very angry on Ram and she felt like killing him, she thought he might be taking revenge for calling him Healthy. So she directly went to Amar to complain about him.

Amar: hello Priya beta, kaise ho

Priya: pehle theek thi par ab theek nahi hu

Amar who was working on laptop closed it and sat beside her.

Amar lovingly: kya hua meri beti ko, kahin us prof. Mehta ne toh kuch nahi kaha na

Priya: nahi ... Aapke beta ki wajh se upset hu

Amar: kya kiya usne

Priya angrily: mujhe lagte hai k wo na aapka beta hi nahi hai

Amar teasingly: mujhe bhi doubt hai iss baat par

Priya: uncle pls... mai mazak ke mood mai nahi hu

Amar: accha theek se batao kya kiya hai us nalayak

Krishna too joined them in their conversation. Krishna: kise nalayak keh rahe ho aap

Amar: hamare bte ko

Krishna: mera beta nalayak nahin hai

Amar: accha...mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha

Priya interrupts: aap dono baad mai decide karna ke apka beta nalayak hai ya nahi, pehli meri baat toh sunlo

Amar: haan bolo, kya problem hai tumhari

Priya: Ram ne trustee hone ka fayda uthate huye iss sal beauty pageant contest mai sab ka participation compulsory rakha hai

Amar: that's good, my son is quite intelligent...toh isme problem kya hai?

Priya sulkingly: problem ye hai k I don't wanna participate in the contest, maine aaj tak kabhi part nahi liya aur mujhe iss bar bhi participate nahi arna hai, I am not comfortable doing all that stuff

Krishna laughs at her: beta usey modeling karna kehte hai, stuff nhi kehte

Priya: jo bhi ho par mujhe nahi karna hai ye sab

Krishna: tum ne kuch toh kaha hoga use, warna wo aise kabhi nahi karta

Priya: do din pehle maine use kaha tha k London jaake wo kaafi healthy hogaya hai

Krishna: tumne usey mota kaha tha, very bad beta

Priya: aunty healthy kaha tha mota nahi

Amar: toh mai kya help karu isme

Priya: aap principal ko bolke ye rule cancel karwayie, papa toh interfere nahin karenge toh aaap hi kuch kariye

Amar: beta mai cancel toh nahi karwasakta but kuch add zaroor karwasakta hu

Priya confusedly: kya?

Amar asked her to bring her ears and he whispered something in her ears which lit her face with smile.

Priya sadly: par ye kaise hoga?

Amar: don't worry mai principal se baat karlunga , tum bas apne competition ki tayyari karo

Priya hugged him tightly: thank u uncle, love u so much

Amar: love u too beta, take care...aaram se jaana

Krishna was looking at her husband suspiciously.

Krishna: aapne aisa kya kaha ke wo itni khush hogaye

Amar proudly: kal tak ka wait karo tumhe pata chal jayega

Next day all students gathered in auditorium as principal has to make some announcements. Ram was wondering why Principal has called him. So he asked Priya.

Ram: Priya mujhe kyu bulaya hai Principal ne?

Priya innocently: I don't know, tumhe nahin pata after all u r trustee of college

Before Ram could say something, principal seeked everyone's attention.

Good morning everyone!

U all might be wondering that why I have called u, well there is some twist in the contest this year.

All students looked up to him thinking now what's the new twist

Principal continued: so the twist is not only girls but boys too have to contribute in this contest. Boys have to make the female contestant wear saree n do their make-up for the contest.

All girls cheered to this.

Principal: and this was the idea of Mr. kapoor( he forgot to mention senior kapoor i.e Amarnath Kapoor and all students though that it's Ram Kapoor). Ram was shocked and was thinking when he had said these things to principal.

Principal continued: any girl can choose any boy, be it ur classmate, ur senior, ur junior and wid a pause even ur Professor. So girls choose ur partners.

All girls started choosing partners, some chose their boyfriends, and some chose their crushes n some chose professor too. Now it was Priya's turn and Ram very well know whose name she'll take, so he closed his eyes.

Priya: my partner would be my only friend and trustee of college Mr. Ram Kapoor

Everyone clapped for him, Principal congratulated him saying he is lucky man that at least some one has chose him but he(principal) is unlucky since no one chose him. Ram understood that it was all Priya's plan, so he chased her to his house.

Amar: Priya how was the day?

Priya: it was awesome; Ram ke chehre ka rang dekhna chahiye tha aapko

Sudhir: kya kiya hai tumdono ne

Priya was startled and turned towards her father: papa, maa aap dono yahan, what a pleasant surprise!

Sudhir: baat mat ghuma Priya, bata kya kiya hai tum dono Ram ke saath

Ram from the entrance: mai batata hu uncle

Priya hid herself behind Amarnath.

Sudhir: kya hua beta

Ram narrates him whole story, how he made beauty contest compulsory for everyone and how Priya and his father have avenged him. Throughout the whole narration, sudhir was gazing Amar and Priya continuously.

Sensing his anger, Amar said: Priya wo hamara kal ka assaignment adhura reh gaya hai, lets finish that

Priya: haan uncle, let's go

They both started moving but to be stopped by sudhir.

Sudhir came towards Amar n taps on his shoulder saying: kamal ke ideas aate hai yaar tujhe, aise ideas lata kahan se hai tu, bechare ko saree pehnana padega and bursted into laughter.

Ram was shocked: uncle aap bhi! Meri side toh koi nahi leta

Krishna n Shipra: hum tumhari side pe hai beta , u don't worry hum tum ko har style ki saree pehnana sikha denge

Ram: aap dono ko mazak sujh raha hai

Krishna n Shipra suppressed their laughter: nahi toh, hum toh sirf tumhari madad karne ki koshish kar rahe hai

Ram practiced hard and learned the art of draping saree but he didn't got a chance to drape saree on Priya since she felled ill before the competition and withdrew her name (of course Ram removed the compulsion of participating too)

***FLASHBACK ENDS***

Ram snapped his finger against Priya who was lost in her thoughts: Priyaaa

Priya: haan

Ram: kya kar rahi ho, dhyaan kahan hai tumhara

Priya: mujhse nahin hoga pls aap chale jayie

Ram with hesitation: kya mai kardoon?

Priya replied by blinking her eyes n gave saree to him. Ram started draping the saree n in the process touhed her body many times.

Mathe Pe Pasena, Taiz Dhrakne, Halka Sa Ahsas E Haya.

Haye mujh Pe Kya Kuch Beet Gayi Ek Bar Uske Choone Se.

Ram: hogaya...dekh lo thek hai ya nahi

Priya: thanks

Priya did her make up in jiffy as they were already late and in that process some of her lipstick was smudged.

Priya: I am ready let's go

Ram looked up at Priya and was drowning her beauty, he kept looking at her for some time and then they headed towards the car.

Nazar jub tum se milti hai main

khud ko bhool jata hoon,

Bas ek dharkan dharakti hai,

main khud ko bhool jata hon,

Tumhain milne se pehle main

bohut sajta sanwarta hon,

Magar jub tum sanwarti ho,

to tumhari JANNAT me,

main khud ko bhool jata hon...,

They sat in the car and while stealing glances at Priya Ram noticed her smudged lipstick. He directed her to wipe it off but Priya couldn't do it, so he involuntarily raised his hand to wipe it n traced his fingers around her lips.

Hain Hont Us K Kitabon Men Likhi Tehreero'n Jaise ...

Ungli Rakho To Aagay Parhne Ko Jee Karta Hai ..

Lost in their own thoughts and remembering today's incident that conspired between them, they reached the venue. Everyone welcomed the guest of honor and his wife with bouquet. Priya was all the time with Ram meeting the guests. Suddenly Shruti came and dragged her to their bunch of school friends. Ram didn't like it, but he had no other option. He too wanted to join them but there were many people who wanted to meet him and they kept him busy, but his eyes were still on his wife.

Shruti to her friends: so meet Mrs. Priya Ram Kapoor

Friends: hello Priya, tu ne shaadi karli par bataya nahi

Priya had no answer so she kept mum.

Rita: u r looking stunning, kaafi khoobsurat lag rahi ho is saree mai

Priya blushed: thanks

Shruti whispers: tujhe toh saree pehen ne nahi aati toh kaise pehni... ek min, kahin Ram ne toh nahi

Priya blushed and nudged Shruti's elbow. Shruti understood that today Ram had helped Priya in draping saree

Shruti: khoobsurat toh lagan hi hai saree jo

Before she could continued, Priya kept her heels on her feet.

Shruti: ouch

Priya innocently: kya hua Shruti

Shruti: kuch nahi

Ram was listening what they were talking from small distance.

Two three boys joined the group and one of them immediately recognized Priya.

One boy: hey Priya, do u remember me

Priya confusedly nods her head in no

Boy: mai Nitin

Priya still didn't recognize him.

Nitin: arey yaar tumhare chakkar mai Ram ne kitni pitayi ki thi meri

Now Priya recognized him and was laughing remembering that incident.

Shruti: toh tum ho wo jisne maar khayi thi?

Nitin: haan aur nahi toh kya...jis din Ram ne meri pitayi ki baaki sabhi ki himmat toot gayi

Shruti: baaki sab matlab

Nitin: arey tumhe nahin pata...school mai har ladka Priya se baat karne ko bhi marta tha, everyone wanted to be her friend rather more than friend but ye madam poore school mai sirf ek ladke se hi baat karti thi n that was Ram. Lekin jab maine Priya ko approach kiya Ram ne itna maara k bas pucho mat, uske baad kisi ladke ne Priya ko approach hi nahi kiya

Priya lowered her eyes and was blushing hearing all this. She was amazed that she had that many secret admirers.

Tere pyar ki hifazat hum ne kuch is tarha se ki

Jab kisi ny pyaar se dekha to hum ne nazrain jhuka li

On the other hand Ram, who was also listening this, couldn't stop himself from smiling

Nitin: so u r married now!pata hai tumhe tumne kitne ladko ka dil toda hai! Who is the lucky guy?

Shruti replied: wahi jisne tumhe peeta tha

Nitin: wooh! So my guess was right that u two will get married when grown up. Now I have to choose my words correctly since Ram is not only ur Friend but husband too...he is a lucky man...waise hai kahan wo

Ram was feeling proud that the person with whom whole world wanted to be for life time is his wife, she is all his.

Kyu Na Gharoor Karo Main Apne Aap Pe...!!

Wo Mera Hai Jiske Chahne Wale Hazaro

The ..

Priya looked around and found Ram looking in their direction. She showed Nitin where Ram is. Nitin met him and they had some casual talk.

Now there was announcement for dance, all couples joined the dance floor, Ram asked Priya for a dance and Priya was more than happy to oblige.

They hit the dance floor, the ambience was perfect: dim lights, soft music and what else required. The song was perfectly reflecting Ram's mood.

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare, dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin udhar nahin
Teri ore chale

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin udhar nahin
Teri ore chale

Zara der mein yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi kahan kho gaya
Zara der mein yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi kahan kho gaya
Bheed mein logon ki woh hai wahan
Aur pyaar ke mele mein akela itna hoon main yahan

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare, dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin udhar nahin
Teri ore chale

Shuru ho gayi kahani meri
Mere dil ne baat na maani meri
Shuru ho gayi kahani meri
Mere dil ne baat na maani meri
Hadd se bhi aagey yeh guzar hi gaya
Khud bhi pareshaan hua mujhko bhi yeh kar gaya


Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare, dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin udhar nahin
Teri ore chale

Throughout the song their eyes never leaved each other, Ram was so lost into Priya that he had the urge to kiss her. He slowly bends towards Priya , Priya closed her eyes and Ram slowly placed a soft kiss on her lips.

Us Ke Honton Ko Chooma To Ehsaas Hoowa,

Ik Paani hi Zaroori Nahi Pyaas Buajane K Liye.

Note: kis kis ki expectations poori huyi aur kiski expectations ko maine pora nhi kiya, pls bata dena 😆, if possible yeh bhi batado kya expect kar rahe the 😆. one more thing ab ye bhi clear hogaya na Ram ne saree drape kab aur kyu sikha aur Priya ko party mai saree hi kyu pehenni thi

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updt dear
so cutely written
ram aur saree drapping 😆
mazaa agaaya
priya kaafi shaitan hain😳
thanks for pm
cont soon 😊
Edited by .sangs123. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my god u rechd loved it loved it muahhh
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Posted: 12 years ago
soft kiss scene awesm tha...
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Posted: 12 years ago
just loved it especially the fb parts they are just awesome
ram helped priya in draping the sareee rather say he draed her saree so cute
thanx for tne pm pls continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊 nicely written yaar... loved the update n thx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara

your question will be answered before ending the ss😛
thanks for ur comment 😊


OKay I'll be waiting for ur answer ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww .. Bichara ram .. Kaha phas gaya poori family eksaath ho gayi priya ke taraf .. n Ram Poor Guy... Ohhhooo ab toh confession kara do .. Loved it .. continue soon .. Priya toh hadd se jyada shaitaan thi .. I wonder agar ram ne usse maaf kar diya aur apna love confess kar diya toh phirr se shuru kar degi ye saari shataniyaan .. waiting for that .. My only expectation .. :) :) Thanks for PM .. Continue soon :) :) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Once again superb dear..loved each and every bit of it both present and past and whole world knws thy r made for each other...ram s realising tht now,kiss superb,and want knw progression of the story.and why ram loved hr sister continue soon

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