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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 21

ab yeh kya naya twist hai yaar... RaYa ek dusre ki presance feel toh karne hi lage hain na... ab HM aur Ram's past saath me abhi abhi toh pyar shuru hi hua hai... ab iski past k hathon se band mat bajao yaar plz... RaYa HM aache se ho jaye but loved this family kitni positivity hai no negetive checter at all... maza aa gaya padh k its awesome... too gud...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haila mast preview hai...
pls continue soon ji
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I was suppose to update my FF on Sunday but I thought to update today so here goes the next part, its an unedited and uncut version, so if MODs find it obscene anything plz feel free to bash me.

recap

...Priya bhi soo chuki hain bas usse neend nahi aa rahi thi, woh apne kamre se aasmaan ko dekh rahi thi toh tabhi uska phone bajta hain, usse pata hain ki Ram usse phone kar raha hain par woh uthati nahi hain, phone ko switch off kar deti hain.




Priya ki health ab pehle se kaafi better hain aur woh kamre hi walk karti hain without anybody's support. Priya ko bilkul achha nahi lagta koi uske liye itna pareshaan ho par iss baar woh sach me bohot weak ho gayi thi toh usse sabki madat chahiye hoti hain. Today is Sunday so sab Priya se milne aaye hain. Peechle 4 din se Ram continuously Priya ki khabar le raha hain aur koshish karta hain ki Priya se baat karle par ho nahi paa raha hain, kisi na kisi bahane Priya taal rahi hain. Aaj sab aaye hain toh Ram bhi aaya hain. Sab Priya ki condition dekh ke bohot khush hain, she is really getting well. Everyone is seating and chatting with her, toh tabhi Neha kehti hain


Neha – Priya, chalo tumhare kamre me chalte hain, kuch baat karni thi


Priya – kya baat hain bolo na


Neha – tum chalo toh sahi, saying she makes her come to the room with her, while coming she signed to Vikram.


After sometimes both Vikram and Ram also joined them.


Vikram – Priya tumhe aise dekh ke bohot achha lag raha hain, warna tumne toh dara hi diya tha, aur Ram itna darr gaya tha ke samajh nahi aa raha tha ke kise samhale hum


Ram – ha toh yaar darrnewali baat thi toh isiliye darr gaya tha


Neha – pata hain Priya tum jab tak unconscious thi tab tak fatty ne tumhare kamre se hila tak nahi, hum log toh samjha samjha ke thak gaye the, kitni mushkil se usse khana khilaya hain sirf hum hi jante hain


Hearing this Priya look upto him and saw a childish face smiling but his eyes are almost teary, seeing this Priya looked other side.


Vikram – achha ye chhodo let me give a good news to u Priya


Priya looked towards Vikram with inquisitiveness in her eyes.


Vikram – Ram has been selected for the prestigious Global Entrepreneur Award for 2013. The award will be conferred on him on coming Saturday and it will be in Mumbai as this is their rule that whoever is chosen for the award receives it at their own country, this time it is for The Ram Kapoor


Neha – while clapping, said yayyy, am so proud of you fatty


Ram – tu bhi na Vikram and said thanks to Neha


Vikram – main kya Ram, tu janta hain this is the most prestigious and coveted award and u seriously deserve this.


Ram mann hi mann bolta hain, mere liye sabse bada award hain Priya, agar woh mere saath nahi hain toh kuch bhi mere liye mayne nahi rakhta.


Priya after hearing all this said, Congratulations! Mr. Kapoor.


Ram looked at her, she was still annoyed with him but atleast she congratulated him, yehi soch ke Ram khush ho gaya and said, thanks.


Ab sab bahar aate hain and Vikram gave this news to everyone and everyone congratulated him. It was decided everyone is going to attend the event.


Beech ke din apne hisab se beet gaye, Priya abhi bhi Sharma House me hi hain, aur usne college bhi join nahin ki hain, Ram din me 2 baar phone karta hain aur Priya ki tabiyat ke bare me poonchta hain, ab Priya ne uska phone lene se inkaar kiya hain toh Ram ko Sharma house ke landline pe hi phone karna parta hain, isi liye zyada kar bhi nahi pata, halaa ki Neha se aur Natasha se regular update milti hain. Aajkal Priya apne aap me hi khoyi rehti hain, ab uski tabiyaat theek hain toh woh chupchap beythne walon me se toh hain nahi, toh Shipraji ko woh kitchen me help karti hain, apne aap ko hamesha busy rakhhna chahti hain taki uske dimaag se Ram ki woh saari baatein mit jaye, par yeh usse hota nahi hain, uss din Ram ko dekhne ke baad Priya ko bohot dukh hua tha, par phir bhi woh koshish kar rahi hain ke kaise sab kuch bhool jaye lekin isi koshish me woh Ram se aur pyaar karne lagti hain.


Aaj Saturday hain, award function ki raat hain aur dono gharon me jaise dhoom machi huyi hain, Shipraji toh sabko bolte bolte thakti nahi hain, arre bhai damaad hain, aur usse itna prestigious award mil raha hain toh khushi toh double hogi hi. Sham ke 6 baj gaye hain aur sab taiyyar hone me lage hain, Priya apne kamre hi thi, chhupchap beythi thi, toh tabhi Sudhirji aate hain wahan


Sudhirji – Priya, beta tu abhi tak taiyyar nahi huin?, tabiyat toh theek hain na teri?


Priya – ha papa, woh main abhi taiyyar hoti hoon


Sudhirji – baat kya hain beta, jab se hospital se aayi hain, dekh raha hoon tu kuch chhup chhup si ho gayi hain, kya hua hain bol na?


Priya – kuch nahi hua hain papa, main bilkul theek hoon


Sudhirji – Ram har roz phone karta hain, tera khabar leta hain, tu ek baar bhi usse baat nahi karti hain, uss din bhi maine dekha tu Ram se baat nahi kar rahi thi, kya hua hain tum dono me


Priya – kuch nahi hua hain papa, sab theek hain


Sudhirji – dekh beta main tera papa hoon, teri aankhen par sakta hoon, tu mujhse share nahi karna chahti hain toh theek hain par teri aankhen sab kuch bol deti hain


Priya didn't say anything and kept her eyes down


Sudhirji – dekh beta, pati patni ki rishte bohot nazuk hoti hain, kachhe dhaage se bani huyi hain, zor se khhenchne se tut sakta hain, isi liye iss dhaage me agar gaant par jaye toh rishta mazboot hota hain, agar tum dono ke beech koi problem hain toh tum dono hi usse solve karoge na hi koi teesra, yeh ek aisa rishta hain jisme teesre ki koi gunjaish nahi hain, agar koi baat hain toh tum aur Ram dono milke solve karo, beta mushkil ka hal tabhi nikalta hain jab do log apas me baat karta hain. Main nahi janta ke tum dono me kya hua hain bas itna keh sakta hoon, aisa kuch bhi nahi hain jiska solution na nikle sirf zaroorat hain toh beyth ke baat karne ki aur jahan tak main Ram ko janta hoon, woh bohot sensible hain aur uski aankhon me ek honesty hain jo usse sabse alag karta hain, mera kehna mann tu Ram se baat kar, maine uski aankhon me tere liye dard dekha hain.


Priya was listening to her papa all the way but his last words make her come out of trance, she looked up and saw him.


Sudhirji – beta baat karne se hi hal nikalta hain, mera kehna mann aur Ram se baat kar, ab ja jake taiyyar ho ja, itna bada din hain Ram ke liye, aur agar tu hi aise rahegi usse bilkul achha nahi lagega, ja taiyyar ho ja, main jake teri ma ko dekhta hoon.


Priya come to her wardrobe and was still thinking about her papa's words, yehi sochte sochte she chose a dark red colour saree, its not designer one but very pretty, its not actual red but it's a brownish red with zari border. Priya bought this saree long back but never wear it, she thought of wearing this today. She came out of washroom wearing the saree and was trying to put the hook of the blouse when she remembered how Ram put the hook of the blouse in the reception party, a smile crept into her face. The blouse is deep cut only a hook at the back with a dori on the shoulder. Priya is looking absolutely stunning. She let her hair fall in one side, a big earing adorning her ear, wearing diamond studded bangles in both hands, neatly lined kohl in her eyes and dark lipstick complementing her look, put the bindi made of sindoor and also adorning her maang. She was complete. All get ready to leave when Shipraji said to Priya that she is looking absolutely stunning and saying this she put a kala tika behing her right ear.


Everyone came to the Hyatt Regency and got down from car, at the exact time Vikram and Neha also reached the place. Everyone was happy to see Priya and all were enjoying the moment. Neha who was also wearing a black and golden combination saree said to Priya,


Neha – iraada kya hain?


Priya – matlab?


Neha – aaj toh fatty gaya, tum jo itna keher dhaa rahi ho


Priya – kya Neha tum bhi


Neha was about to say something when everyone notice Ram has arrived. He was looking the most handsome person of the evening. The hair cut has given him a sexy look, wearing his famous business suite with white shirt and red tie, he was simple but the most desireable man of the country. He saw Priya and was about to come to her when media surrounded him and he had to answer them. In the meantime, everyone came to the banquet hall and and took the seat. Ram came and sit beside Priya.


After the dinner got over, everyone was gearing up for going to home when Ram asked Sudhirji


Ram – papa kya main Priya ko ghar le ja sakta hoon?


Sudhirji looked at Priya and said, beta woh tumhari patni hain, tumhe pura haq hain.


Now Priya was in Ram's car and both were silent. Ram stared at her for few times but Priya doesn't say a single word.


They both reached Kapoor Mansion and come to their bedroom, Priya entered the room and saw night lamps are lited, she came to the window and stand there, Ram entered the room and bolted the door, Priya heard the sound but didn't say anything.


Ram – Priya, I need to talk to you


No answer from her side


Ram – please, mujhe tumse baat karni hain, its important


Priya turned and said, mujhe nahi lagta hum dono ke beech aur kuch bacha hain baat karne ko


Ram – tum galat samajh rahi ho Priya, mujhe samjhane ka ek mauka to do


Priya – kya kahenge aap, yehi na ke Sarah Matthews apki past thi, aur aaj bhi woh aapke zindagi me maine rakhti hain, main janti hoon Mr. kapoor, aap aaj bhi usse pyaar karte hain, waise bhi humari shaadi toh compromise ki hi thi, peechle kuch mahino me hum dono ke beech kuch badla hi nahi, main hi pagal thi jo sochti thi ke ek na ek din aap iss rishten ko apna lenge, but I was wrong, ab jab yeh sachhai aahi gayi hain toh aap kya chahte hain ke hum log alag ho jaye, is that makes u happy?, then fine……………..


Bas Ram se aur bardaasht nahi hua, how dare is she to say that they should get separated, Ram pulls Priya and kissed her harder, Priya ko pehle kuch samajh nahi aaya tha, par jab usse ehsaas hua ke Ram uske saath kya kar raha hain, she felt numb, woh kuch nahi kar payi aur bina realize kiye she also reciprocated, Ram felt that and deepened the kiss. After some time both wanted some air so Ram left her lip but was still looking at her, Priya who had her eyes closed had tears in that, Ram wiped the tears and very slowly called her name, Priya


By now Priya got back her senses, and slowly opened her eyes to found Ram is staring at her, uski aankhon me bohot pyaar tha Priya ke liye par Priya ko laga Mr. Kapoor pati hone ka haq jata rahe hain, bina kuch bole woh wahan se jaane lagti hain tabhi Ram usse pakad leta hain, ab Priya Ram ko dekhte huye kehti hain


Priya – chhodiye mujhe


Ram – aaj main tumhe nahi chhornewala Priya, tumhe meri baat sunni paregi


Priya – u r hurting me


Ram – so do you, tum jab mujhse baat nahi karti ho, mujhe dard hota hain, mera calls nahi leti ho, mujhe dard hota hain, mujhe ignore karti ho, dard hota hain mujhe, baat baat pe mujhse jhagda nahi karti ho, daanti nahi ho, dard hota hain mujhe, bina sachhai jane jab tum mujhse door chali jati ho, mujhe dard hota hain bohot dard hota hain, pata hain kyun?, kyun ki main tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon, yes I love u, mujhe laga tha zindagi me aisa din phir kabhi nahi ayega, lekin zindagine tumhe mujhe diya hain, mujhe phirse jeene ka maqsad mila hain, Sarah ke jane ke baad mujhe laga tha main kabhi aur kisise pyaar nahi kar payunga par tumne mujhe phir se pyaar karna sikha diya, I love u so very much, tum mere zindagi me kya aayi sab kuch achha lagne laga, rishton par bharosa karneka bhi mann karta hain, main sabke liye tha par mere liye koi nahi, bohot akela tha main, par aaj main janta hoon ke mere liye bhi koi hain, jo sirf mere liye jeeta hain, jo mere liye sochta hain, jo mere saath sab kuch bantneke liye taiyyar hain…………………Neeti ne tumhe sab kuch bataya hain Sarah aur mere bare me lekin ek cheez nahi bataya hain, yeh baat kisiko nahi pata, Sarah aur mera break up hua tha lekin uski wajah Sarah thi, woh nahi chahti thi ke hum log ek saath rahe, maine Sarah ko nahi par Sarah ne mujhe chhod diya tha, saying such he narrated the whole incident to Priya, Priya on the other was hearing him and her tears were dropping continuously, she can felt the pain and pathos of Ram……………..after finishing Ram again said, jab Sarah ne mujhe chhoda tha mujhe laga tha mere hi pyaar me kuch kami reh gayi thi jo Sarah ne aisa kiya, aur phir mera rishton se bharosa uthne laga, par jab tumhe pehli baar dekha toh mujhe laga duniya me abhi bhi aise log hain jo rishton ko ahmiyat dete hain, I confess today that mujhe tum pehle din hi pasand aayi thi par main nahi chahta tha ki tum meri zindagi me aao, kyun ki mere paas tumhe dene ke liye kuchh nahi tha, par dekho kismet ne hume mila diya aur dheere dheere mujhe tumse pyaar ho gaya.


Priya was listening to him and tears were still flowing from her eyes, Ram closed the gap between themselves and wiped the tears and cupped her face and said Priya main tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon, jo 17 saal pehle hua tha woh beet gaya hain, aur aaj ki haqeeqat yeh hain ki tum meri aaj ho, main apni puri zindagi tumhare saath bitana chahta hoon, saying this he took her lips in his and both had a passionate kiss. Ram's left hand was on her waist and right hand was supporting her neck, after sometime they parted but Priya's pallu slipped from her shoulder making her cleavage revealed, Priya tried to cover it but Ram was more swift, he lifted her and placed gently on the bed.


At outside it was complete dark and moonlight is making their way to witness the most blessed night of RaYa. In the room Ram placed Priya on the bed with his left hand on the waist, Priya was shivering with this new touch, Ram was enjoying every moment of it. Ram gently give a kiss on her forehead and then to her cheeks and following the path to her jawline. He kissed her neck leaving a love bite over there and a moaning from Priya, by now he has come on top of her and his hands are on her neck and waist. While trailing the kiss from neck he come to the cleavage where he gave wet kisses and at the same time he opened her dori which gave him more access on her breast. He slided her blouse from the shoulder and gave enormous kisses on her chest leaving her gasping more. Priya continue to moan in pleasure. Ram placed his palm on her cleavage and slided down till her waist where he unfolded the pleats and he took out the saree. He left love bites on her waist. He took the soft flesh of her naval area and left a love bite over there. All this while Priya has her eyes closed and enjoying her Man's assault. Ram continued his kiss and he came to the Priya's feet and he kissed that while taking out her silver anklet. He again came on top of her taking her lips in his and this time due to his assault her lips got bruised. Priya couldnot take this more and came on top of him, her hair was falling from her shoulders, her bindi got smurged and her lips got bruised, she was looking absolutely stunning. She looked at her Man for sometime then gave a gentle peck on his forhead. She trailed her kiss to his cheeks and then to his jawline, Priya opened his shirt and kissed on his chest, Ram groan in pleasure, while doing this Ram had his hands on Priya's back and waist, he was very gently trailing his fingers on her back giving her sensations, while doing this Ram opened her blouse hook and in reflex action he turned her and came on top of her, Ram opened her blouse but Priya crossed her hands on her bare chest. Ram too opened his shirt and throw it away along with his inner. Priya was breathing heavily, Ram kissed her tightly engulfing her from her waist, due to this Priya had to surrender to him and she removed her hand from her chest. Ram looked at her breast and saw they have become red due to the assault. Ram caressed both the breast and took one of the nipple in his mouth. He licked, sucked and gave enormous wet kisses on both the nipples. He squeezed the breast with his hand. Priya moaned in pleasure. Ram then took her peeticoat off from her body leaving her complete naked in front of him. Ram for some moment gazed at her. He kissed her waist and then to her thighs and inner thighs, he felt Priya was wet enough. He knew she was ready to take him. He parted her legs. He also took his pant off and come on top of her. Priya could feel him at her entrance. Ram massaged her c***oris with his finger. He wants her to come for him. Priya clutched the duvets with her hands. Ram saw that and raised his motion, Priya couldn't bare his assault and said please Mr. Kapoor make me yours. Ram smiled and said I want you to come for me and saying this he raised his motion again, within few seconds Priya come for him, and Ram slipped in her, she felt a steep pain in lower portion of the body and a moan escaped from her mouth but Ram took her and within few seconds both were in rhythm. Ram again took her nipples in his mouth and assaulted that with his love leaving a dark red love bite. He kissed Priya harder and this time it was a full mouth kiss. They were on the journey of pleasure and pain. Both were enjoying the journey and both were equally satisfied. Both felt completed. Their rhythm grows higher and higher and they started panting and at that very moment both moaned in pleasure and they both reached the climax as their juice exploded in themselves making them calmer and satisfied. Ram collapsed on Priya's bosom and both their bodies entwined with each other and their eyes were getting heavier and heavier until they fall into sleep. The night got to witness the beautiful sight of human relationship.


The darkness of night faded and a new day was about to begin, a new day, a new life and a new meaning of life. Ram and Priya were both sleeping peacefully under a duvet entwining their body. Priya lying flat, having Ram's head on her bosom and Ram's hand clasp her waist securing Priya in his embrace. The AC was in full swing but still Ram had sweatbeeds on his forehead. Priya very lazily opened her eyes and found her Man is sleeping peacefully. A smile creeps into her face. She felt his touch on her waist. She kept her left hand on his right hand which encircled her waist. She very gently wiped the sweat from his forehead and rested her chin on his right shoulder longingly looking at him. A smile crept in her face while she remembered how much passionate her Man is, very slowly she uttered I LUV U. Ram who was awake by now was enjoying what Priya was doing with him, still closing his eyes he said, then prove it. Priya was startled to hear him, she thought Mr. Kapoor was sleeping. Priya wanted to shift but she was already late as Ram tightened his grip on her waist and pulled her more closer. He looked at her and said, prove it that u love me. Priya found the naughtiness in his voice so she said, I don't need to prove my love. Ram looked at her and said, definitely u have, otherwise how will I know, I need some proof, in fact I have proved my love yesterday night saying this he pointed his finger on her bruised lip by touching. Priya felt shy and kept looking down. Ram had a mischevious smile on his face. After some moments he again said, well then I must rethink about our relationship, u don't love me so its better we get parted and I may consider to end, Ram hasn't finish his words and Priya came on top of him and taking his lips in her, kissing him feverishly.


After some moments they parted to take some air and Ram came on top of her, Priya was still panting from her action. Ram tucked her hair behind her ears and said softly in her ears my warrior princess. Priya looked at him and saw he is grinning. Priya ko yeh bilkul pasand nahi aya aur usne kahan, aap ko chhune ka haq sirf mujhe hain, aapko dekhna ka haq bhi mera hain, aap sirf mere hain, main aapse bohot pyaar karti hoon, phir se dobara aisa kuch mat kehna, I love u Ram, I love u, main aapse bohot pyaar karti hoon, and saying this her eyes welled up in tears. Pehli baar Priya ne Ram ka naam liya, it was like honey to his ears. Ram ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ke woh kya bole, he was just teasing her, but she became very emotional. Ram cupped her face and wiped the tears and said Priya main sirf aur sirf tumhara hi hoon, mere zindagi me kisi aur ke liye koi jagah nahi hain bas tum mujhe kabhi chhor ke mat jana, hearing this Priya stared at him and saw emotions are welled up in his eyes also, Priya said, mera waada hain aapse main aapko kabhi bhi chhod ke nahi jaungi, saying this they both hugged each other tightly. Ram took her lips in him and they kissed passionately and again made love.


The sun lights peeping into RaYa's bedroom and wishing them a blissful journey of new found life. They are also very happy to see them like this. Ram opened his eyes lazily this time, he rubbed his eyes and adjusted them in the sunlights which is adorning their bedroom. He looked at Priya who is still sleeping peacefully. He very gently caressed her hair and drop a kiss on her forehead and said


Ram – good morning


Priya – mmm, good morning, arre aap itni jaldi kyun uth gaye Mr. Kapoor, abhi abhi toh soye the


Ram smiled at her child like antics and said, its already 8:30, dear


Priya hurriedly opened her eyes and said, shhh, 8:30 baj gaye, gharwalen kya sochenge?


Ram – yehi sochenge ki miya biwi maze kar rahe hain


Priya – Mr. Kapoor aap ko har waqt mazaak hi kyun soojta hain, chaliye mujhe jane dijiye


Priya tried to get up but felt she is naked, she covered her front part with the duvet but her back is not covered. Hua yeh ke both RaYa are sharing one duvet so Priya can only cover her front portion not the back. Priya got up but now can't come out from the bed, Ram was enjoying her helplessness and to add more to her woe he trailed his fingers from her shoulder to her waist giving sensations. Priya closed her eyes and shivered a bit, Ram closed the gap and hugged her from her back. He shifted her hair to one side and kissed on the shoulder.


Priya moaned, and said, please Mr. Kapoor chhodiye mujhe.


Ram – arre tum meri biwi ho aur waise bhi tumne hi toh kahan tha ke tum mujhe chhod ke nahi jaogi toh phir…………………


Priya – aap kyun nahi samajh rahe hain, sab kya sochenge?


Ram – kuch nahi sochenge, waise aaj Sunday hain


Priya – theek hain mat chhodiye mujhe, phir aapka aloo paratha toh apko milne se raha


Ram – achha theek hain, jao chhod diya, par ek shart par


Priya – kya hain shart?


Ram – tum mujhe mere naam se bulaogi


Priya – mujhse nahi hoga


Ram – par kuch der pehle toh tumne bulaya tha, aur waise bhi soch lo


Priya – aaacchhaa(stammered) theek hain, koshish karoongi, ab hatiye mujhe jana hain, par main pehnungi kya


Ram – aise hi uth jao, what's there to hide from me, I have seen u


Priya – aap bohot besharam ho saying this she hits him on his chest


Ram – achha theek hain yaar, ruko and he could get his shirt and gave to her


Priya – arre yeh toh apka shirt hain Mr. Kapoor, yeh main nahi pehnungi


Ram – jo haath me aya de diya ab nahi pehnna hain toh aise hi chali jao, waisa mujhe lagta hain woh hi theek rahega saying this he grinned.


Priya took his shirt and slipped herself in that, the shirt is big enough for her but it barely covered her buttocks, Ram was watching her, Priya came out of bed, her hair was ruffled, sindoor was smudged, lips bearing his love mark, but she looks complete her eyes were saying that I am complete now. Priya turned to Ram, and came very near to his ears and said thank u for completing me Ram and gave a feathery kiss on his lips and went to the washroom in hurried foot. Before Ram could stop her Priya bolted the door of washroom. Ram smiled and said in his heart thank u Mrs. Kapoor to be in my life. I love you.



I don't know how will u all react after reading this, kuch bhi lage plz comment zaroor karna, good or bad, I want to know, mujhe jaisa theek lage maine waise hi likha hain, now everything is in your hands, and once again sorry for uncut version, mujhe laga ke if I post edit version then it will be unfair on my behalf with my writing, still if u all find this too much s**y, plz don't hesitate to comment. If u all like it then do hit the "LIKE" button, I will wait eagerly for all of ur comments.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
ek din pehle update. aur woh bhi grabbing first place😃🥳
must say just awesome. very very romantic update.
right from the beginning to end U penned down very very nicely.
I like the description of priya's wardrope ,
then the confession of Ram. Priya confess her love in the next morning only😉.
loved the heating argument before love. loved the dialogues specially.
aaj pehli baar aapne Priya ko rulaya nahi aur muje bhi.😃.
aage kya????where is the precap??????😲
continue soon and thanks for PM😊
Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

ek din pehle update. aur woh bhi grabbing first place😃🥳

will read and comment


yahan bhi meri jagah koia ur leliya😭

wow it was just perfect no need to edit.. for me it was just perfect... raya ka realtionship omg.. u made me stay glued to screen...😳 raya was just awesome.. ram became naughty hailaa.. 😳 make him more naughty.. ab asli wla honeymoon bejdoo😆 an request from me samjooo

please continue and update soon😳
Edited by shamavi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shamavi


yahan bhi meri jagah koia ur leliya😭

😃🥳abb toh party banta hai aur woh bhi aapke saat.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Good one. Raya. N their nakhre. Hi hireminded me season 1.
They never forget ti tease each other. 😆 ab sach mein pati patni bangaye hai.
Thx for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

😃🥳abb toh party banta hai aur woh bhi aapke saat.😆



kisi ka duk ka party nahi manate😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: shamavi



kisi ka duk ka party nahi manate😭

arre mein toh tumhare saat mana rahi hoon.lo meine jinnie ko bhi invite nahi kiya.
tum na jinnie ko daato woh kal dene wali thi na toh aaj kaise diya.😆

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