RaYa FF - mann ki lagan...ishq hain tumse, updt 139

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Dsudipa

@Dsudipa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#941

hey Ujjaini sry 4 late reply

wonderful update

u written very well

hope Ram fall 4 Priya soon

pls continue soon

thx 4 PM

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#942

Originally posted by: Dsudipa
hey Ujjaini sry 4 late reply
wonderful update
u written very well
hope Ram fall 4 Priya soon
pls continue soon
thx 4 PM

thanks for commenting😊, hope so, fingers crossed, my pleasure

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Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#943

Pehle sorry for late commenting thank u for PM. So formalities dil se puri kiya so no tension for me now. 😊
Well done priya. What a determined and sensible thought, matlab samne wala hil jaata hai. Accha laga ye dekh ke the ram kapoor ko zaroorat padne pe ek mahila e bhi sikha Sakti hai ki paise life me Mayne rakhte hai par usse kayi important cheezein hai Jo life mein matter karte hai, duniya dikha sakti y she do not want a baby agar maa bacche ko iss duniya mein laane ki himmat rakhti hai to uske hisse har sukh usse dena bhi chahti hai. Truly admirable.
Interesting move in the story line is ram getting involved in priya's life without his knowledge, and wo haq jamana asking her to sit in the car , n priya's faith on him still not diminished. Though not interested she left with him n calmness in the tone hit ram directly to heart. Wo priya ko pasand nahi karta ho par uske Jo principle hai ya fir uski Jo sachhayi ko saamna karne ki himmat hai ya fir ye kahoon uss vyaktitv ne kahi dil ko choo liya hai. Bas ye kaafi hai parivartan laane mein. when a woman made up her mind , though she is lost somewhere never show her pain n stands determined n strong covering all her emotions , acts she is tough n ready to accept the challenge

I just loved it . Grt job ujjaini. The way u write is absolutely making justice to raya. Dono kitne alag sochte hai. Well depicted their self thoughts for each other.

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devmohan

@devmohan

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#944

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

for that u have to read the updates...waise u tell me?, what do you think, is he still like that or he has changed...comment bada tha toh but I enjoyed it, I liked the way u presented it, writers always in want of readers response and comments😊

I think he has changed now, as every time he'll go near another women, he will hallucinate priya's face, as his heart is in direct war with his own mind... well thats only wat I feel...ammm are u going to clarify this next updates

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#945

Originally posted by: bpatil3
Pehle sorry for late commenting thank u for PM. So formalities dil se puri kiya so no tension for me now. 😊
Well done priya. What a determined and sensible thought, matlab samne wala hil jaata hai. Accha laga ye dekh ke the ram kapoor ko zaroorat padne pe ek mahila e bhi sikha Sakti hai ki paise life me Mayne rakhte hai par usse kayi important cheezein hai Jo life mein matter karte hai, duniya dikha sakti y she do not want a baby agar maa bacche ko iss duniya mein laane ki himmat rakhti hai to uske hisse har sukh usse dena bhi chahti hai. Truly admirable.
Interesting move in the story line is ram getting involved in priya's life without his knowledge, and wo haq jamana asking her to sit in the car , n priya's faith on him still not diminished. Though not interested she left with him n calmness in the tone hit ram directly to heart. Wo priya ko pasand nahi karta ho par uske Jo principle hai ya fir uski Jo sachhayi ko saamna karne ki himmat hai ya fir ye kahoon uss vyaktitv ne kahi dil ko choo liya hai. Bas ye kaafi hai parivartan laane mein. when a woman made up her mind , though she is lost somewhere never show her pain n stands determined n strong covering all her emotions , acts she is tough n ready to accept the challenge

I just loved it . Grt job ujjaini. The way u write is absolutely making justice to raya. Dono kitne alag sochte hai. Well depicted their self thoughts for each other.

thanks for commenting😊, my pleasure...I just wanted to say that a mother has every right to carry and abort the child, I know I might sound harsh and rude, but its true, she is the one who gave life to the child, if she thinks that she can't provide her child with all that things which is important in life she has that right...yes without his knowledge he is getting in Priya's life, somewhere he feels something for her but that is unknown to him, Ram was shocked to hear such from her, never expected such, her personality made him puzzled but its that which draws him more towards her, thank u so very much for liking the part

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#946

Originally posted by: devmohan

I think he has changed now, as every time he'll go near another women, he will hallucinate priya's face, as his heart is in direct war with his own mind... well thats only wat I feel...ammm are u going to clarify this next updates

well let's see if Ram has a change or not, he definitely has something for Priya, but what's that?, have to check out, wait for next part to get the answer😊

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peeyara

@peeyara

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#947

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

thanks for commenting😊, yes Ram needs to clarify his doubts and after hearing such from Priya he can't control himself😉, the reason behind his visit will reveal with time, so wait for that, my pleasure

kab tak wait karna padega wo bhi batado , i mean wen u'll update😊