FF: Kuch Mere Dil Ne Kaha *Part 13 on NEW THREAD!*

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#541

wonderful update

Ram in drunken state but thank god ne did nothing to Priya and Kush

Ram is now soften towards Priya...and a positive note in their relation

sheena truth came out, she fall into her own trap.

expecting lots of raya moments.

last line is confused. I mean another suspense

continue soon and thanks for PM😊

Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago

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SharmiRayaBasu

@SharmiRayaBasu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#542

Awsome..lot of mystry there..amazingly intresting..ple update soon...hatts off u..hatts off ur writting...

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#543

Hey Sheetal
First of all Thank u so much for all the wishes.. 🤗
Awesome update..a lot has happened in this update nd in RaYa's life.. 👏
Loved RaYa's convo nd how ram is softening towards priya..though in drunken state but atleast he apologized to her 😉 😆
Fire in sharma house nd nd this good for nothing sheena unknowingly falling in her own trap..good 👍🏼
I think priya went inside the house again for kush.. 😳
The way u have described kush nd his tantrums nd reaction( nd priya's too) after hearing the snoring ofcourse was too good nd he seems to be so cute.. ❤️

Mystery about scar on priya's shoulder got solved in this update nd waiting for many more to unfold..nd for mystery to be solved in present part too( that who is the haddi) 😉
Brilliant write up.. 👏
Cont aoon nd thanx for pm..

Edited by vironikajain - 12 years ago

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Anjali

@Pinkjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#544

few..!! that was a exhausting update with lots of funny yet serious elements.. u have a incredible talent of writing a story in a story means u revealed some suspense but now the revealed suspense has again created suspense. uff..!! it's so difficult to write what i am thinking.. anyway the update was fun reading and i specially liked the snoring of a dinosaur wala line, it was really funny.. poor priya she always stand besides other but no one stand beside her.. i think in next update sheena's reality is going to come out.. u rocked, hate u lots and lots and lots.. eagerly waiting for the next..

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Mi_AmOR

@Mi_AmOR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#545

Very nice part...
Gt ths sheena xposed soon...
Good tht ram feels bad abt his behaviour...
Contn asap...

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Eram

@viny_queen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#546

so ram know that his bhabhi is wrong

drunken ram on priya home and sleep

but y priya in hosptiland what type of case ram arested

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crystal30

@crystal30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#547

Sheetal, you stunn the readers everytime..the detailed descriptions just adds more flavour to your writing & enhances its beauty! The thin layer that differs the feeling of being guilty or sorry is so finely expressed that m literally searching for words to praise. Well the trap is been laid out to trap the evil..(one need to have patience forever to win over the evil...the wait never seems to end, cant understand why we need to endure so much..probably the price paid for being good, honest..it sucks!) Hope we come across a day where we are rewarded for bearing all the crap!! Phew, i feel lighter. Please do update soon! Thank you!

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ahana1994

@ahana1994

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Posted: 12 years ago

#548

hey sheetal first of all i'm really sorry for not commenting regularly 😭 but i have read all 8 parts and I'm loving the way story is shaping 👏 i actually thought ram is gonna rape priya but thank god nothing like this happened 😕 stupid me 😆 and i'm glad that ram knows sheela true face 😊 thanx for the pm dear 🤗and plz do continue soon 😃