FF: Kuch Mere Dil Ne Kaha *Part 13 on NEW THREAD!* - Page 51

Originally posted by: chillpc

Sheetal...
Aap hamesha kuch suspense chod ke hi jate ho.na...

Arey ye kaun aagaya raya ke beech in the present trck???
And wat hpnd in the office???

Finally happy that ram knws the truth...wanna see wat he does...
And why was he headng to priya's home??
Shez already tired...

Pls contn asap...

Thnks fr the pm... 😊

Hey Pravs, thanks for reading and commenting... 😃
I know i am sorry but it's an old habit i have... One day i will un-learn this habit (i hope)... 😛
The next part is coming right up!
You are most welcome for the PM!

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Too good...it is always like ...need to know all in one go...Superb story...

Thank you so much dear for reading and commenting! 😃
Glad you are enjoying it!

Originally posted by: Pinkjali

and here u go again, left as hanging.. i should knew it that when u updated so soon there surely must be some catch, but this things make u my dearest brat.. and coming to the update it was just brilliant. before writing any dialogue u explain the situation so beautiful that it's more like watching it then reading it.. feeling sad for ram but if u trust the wrong person getting shock and hurt is normal.. priya and khush bonding and the little khush naughtyness is so cute and sweet.. hmmm ..!! little scared with the next update, god save priya from ram blamestorm and emotional outburst.. and last but not the least the romance was beautiful, ,smarty and naughty ram difficult for priya to handle... awesome update, waiting for the next and no catch and hanging endings this time, pls... hate u lots and lots, muahhaa..!!!

Hey Angie, thank you for reading and commenting... 😃 Don't be scared... well actually, just a little scared...' cause i'm still the one writing the story...😆 I can't promise that it won't leave you hanging, but in the next update, the suspense will be obvious... Love you 2... the next part will be posted soon...

Originally posted by: balhfan4ever

Sheetal, loved the update and as usual felt that it should be never ending👏. You make RaYa moments come to life...I can totally see them romancing in the way you have described 😳. Ram came to know about Sheena's deceitfulness but why is he blaming Poor Priya! Priya and Kush moments are adorable too. Since you have kept Rajat in the story too( first chapter) ...I would love to read the jealousy take too once ofcourse Mr. Snooty (Ram) falls for Priya. Mesmerizing update! Thanks for incorporating RaYa romance and for keeping the sadness on the light side while unfolding so many issues👏

Thank you so much hun for reading and commenting... 😃
Sometimes even when i am writing i don't know where to stop... Want to be fair for the readers, give a good chunk of the story but have to keep some things covered... hehe... I'd like to think that Ram is feeling stupid and can't own up to his mistakes in this fit of rage and Priya, to him, seems to have it all figured out; it's envy more than again... Rajat will be introduced very soon.. you are most welcome...

Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz

Love tht khush priya bonding..it reminds me prk peehu bonding..will miss tht very badly in balh :( ...raya romance is awsome ple update soon :)

Thank you so much dear for reading and commenting... 😃
I know i miss that too... Amrita was such a phenomenal actress, she has set the bar so high...
The next part will be posted soon!

Originally posted by: 123fiza1

finally ram knows d truth...loved kush's naughty act...why priya is worried??...present track is full of romance...u hv penned it down beautifully...sudden interruption in romance...thanks for d pm update..it was short one

Thank you so much Fiza for reading and commenting 😃
Priya's intuition is trying to warn her of something... Her life is about to change, very soon... for better or worse, time will tell... You are most welcome for the PM... That was a LONG update yaar...

Originally posted by: fanraya

Lovely👏, now why did you stop?😃 Please update soon..

Thank you so much dear for reading and commenting... 😃
😆you are funny.
The next part will be posted soon!

Originally posted by: crystal30

Hey Sheetal, well u suprised me by updating earlier than I expected(I like the surprise though) I always get drenched in the emotions that your writing creates..its like those unsaid words. I was trying to understand the level one could go to be selfless..wonder what drives whether the immense love towards them or is it the sheer responsibility to not let down anybody(not sure which one is more effective) I'm being honest here no matter how much in a muddle my mind would have been..the writing simply calms me down & ponder on the qualities or the principles that the characters portray which is seldom in this world..(I wish to see this world..if not everythin the immense love, care & happiness!) Looks I rambled too much!! I foresee we are in for loads of action & emotional outburst..i'm all set. Please do update soon.. Thank you! 🤗

Hey Crystal thank you so much for reading and commenting. 😃
As for the selfless mystery, i think the latter proposition makes more sense because in my mind immense love borders to close to lust and lust sooner or later, unappealing fades to show it's true colour...
That's the beauty of stories, it brings to light subjects and personalities that are ideal... And through the message of each story we strive to reflect some quality of that in who we are... If we strip down all those influences that make up who we claim to be, i wonder what we'll see when we come face to face with 'self'?
Ramble on dear, 'cause look you've got me rambling too... 😆
So you're all set for the emotional rollercoaster.. fasten your seatbelt, the coming story will be a heck of a ride.. hope you enjoy. 🤗

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

i am speech less for how it was turning nd enjoyd alot thnks alot now i m ready for rolrcstr ride of raya emotions nd romance waiting

Thank you so much dear for reading and commenting. 😃
Yes raya romance is so close... Just hang on...