FF-RaYa's Love story pt 5 pg6

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

part 1

awww i loved the starting its really nice loved the NeVi teaseing RaYa so they r in love J newly married awesome... last picnic's plan part remind me somewhere inspried Hum saath saath hai's Vivek's HM scene but it was really nice loved & enjoyed it a lot...

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

part 2

so they r in love but yet not confessed just be stay as gud friends nice start yaar loved the u presenting ur concept its comman yet i m loving it as it is coming in new & intersting way... i must say awesome update dear u r very gud writer now moving to read next...

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

part 3

awww this was so sweet part Yaar loved teasing NeVi they looked so cute RaYa all the way just blusing & blusing awww... loved the update so all r enjoying teasing RaYa so cute now RaYa on talk let's see what happen's next plz... plz... plz do next update soon...

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Navijaiswar

@Navijaiswar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

sorry for late guysss

here is part 4.

Ram:Priya kya ho raha hai waha...?

Priya: Kuch... kuch nahi wo bas packing kar rahi thi to...

Ram: hmm..waise to your saari collection is too good lekin kya hai na saari heavy hojayega picnic ke liye so dress better option hai..

Priya: thank you Mr.Kapoor..😊😊

muskurate hue

Packing hojati hai sabki or next day morning me sab hall me aate hai picnic jane ke liye Ram ne t-shirt or jeans pehna tha(as usual bahot handsome lag raha tha) or priya ne simpal sa dress pehna tha wo bhi bahot khubsurat lar rahi thi..

kk: ram sambhal ke jaanaaur khub enjoy karna or ha priya ka khyaal rakhna dekhna meri bahu ko koi takleef na ho...

Ram: Maa aap fikar mat kariye aap ke bahu ko kisi bhi chiz ki kami nahi hogi...😊

Sab bus me baith jaate nevik karthik or nuyz, rishab or saumya, jake pehle hi baith jaate hai raya miche hi reh jaate hai

Ram: priya chalo sab baith gaye andar.

dono bhi bus me baith jaate hai or nikal padte hai waha se...

Nutz: vik bhai bor ho rahe hai hum... chalo na hum antakshri khelte hai...

Vik: wowww what a idea chotti... chalo group banao..

Neha: chalo hum sab girlsek tarf or tum mard ek taraf

Ram: are ye kya baat hui aisa thodi na karte hai mujhe gaane nahi aata...

Priya ye sunkar muskuraanelagti hai or uthke neha ke paas jaane lagti hai tabhi Ram priya ka hath pakad ke isharo me kehta hai mat jao...Priya muskura ke apna hath chudake bhag jaati hai neha ke pass ye dekhkar sab hasne lagte hai..

Nutz chalo start karte hai...

vik: ha hum start karte hai..

vik start karta hai..

"ye dosti hum nahi todenge,

todenge dum magar tera

saath na chodenge.."

Vik: Now you girls..

Neha: Gori gori gori gori gori gori

kabhi kabhi kabhi kabhi

chori chori chup chupke tum mila karo

pyaari pyaari baate vaate kiya karo

are yu na milna kisise kabhi humare siva...

sabhi log enjoy karte hai or ram priya ek dusre ke tarf dekh rahe hote hai..

to be continue..

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cloud121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Short n sweet update...pls continue soon !!!

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Eram

@viny_queen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

That was a very nice update

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

yeh kya dear itna chhota update, kitne dino baad update diya aur woh bhi itna chhota, khair koi baat nahi short hain par hain bohot sweet, ab next time I want a bigger update, please continue and please don't take so much time to update

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Navijaiswar

@Navijaiswar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Part 5:

Rishab: Waha Waha Ramji, Jodi Kya Banaai

Bhaiya Aur Bhabhi Ko, Badhaai Ho Badhaai
Sab Rasmon Se Badi Hai Jag Mein
Dil Se Dil Ki Sagaai

Nutz: Ishq Hua, Kaise Hua Achha Hua Jaise Hua Na Main Jaanoon, Na Tu Jaane Kyoon Ho Gaye Hum Deewan.

Ram:naa kajare kee dhaar, naa motiyon ke haar

naa koee kiyaa singaar, fir bhee kitanee sundar ho.

Ram priya ki taraf dekhkar gaata hai or muskurata hai.

Priya: Humko humise chura lo, dil mein kahin tum chhupa lo – 2

Hum akele kho naa jaaye, door tumse ho naa jaaye
Paas aao gale se lagaa lo.

Ram: Lag Ja Gale Ki Phir Ye Hasin Raat Ho Na Ho

Shaayad Phir Is Janam Men Mulaaqaat Ho Na Ho.

priya ki aankhe sharam se jhuk jaati hai tabhi saumya uthti hai..

saumya:Tum se hai zamaana saara, maanenge kabhi hum nahin

Jo karoge usse behtar kar dikhaayenge hum vahin
Girls are best, jaan lo, baat yeh maan lo - 2
Teeri rapapa teeri rapapa teeri rapapa re - 2

tabhi ek dhaba aata hai to driver bus wahi rukata hai or sab niche utarte hai lunch karne ke liye,sab khana khate hai dhabe pe,tabhi vikram ram ke kaano me kehta hai oye majnu priya ko kab bata raha hai ki tu use pyaar karne laga hai.

Ram: kaise batau yaar...kya wo bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai...?

Vik: Are tu kaise baat kar raha hai dekha nahi tune bus me priiya kaise sharam se laal hogayi thi, ye sab saabit karta hai ki wo bhi tujhse pyaar karti hai, dekh piche wo abhi bhi teri taraf hi dejh rahi hai..

Ram piche dekhta hai to priya ki najre use hi dekh rahi hoti hai.

Vik: Ab hogaya na yakeen ki wo bhi tujhse pyaar karti hai...

to kab bata raha hai use..?

Ram:Bahot jald hi bataunga yaar ab aur intejaar nahi hota..

Tabhi neha waha aajati hai or arm ki baate sun leti hai.

Neha: Mein bahot khush hu ram tumhare liye.. i m so happy yaar..😊😊

Ram: Darling tumhe meri maddat karni hogi.

Neha: Are fatty... ye bhi koi ouchne waali baat hai.. offcorce darling jarur karungi..

Neha ram ko hug karti hai or vikaram bhi hug karta hai tabhi priya sochti hai kya baat hui inlogo me jo aaj Mr.kapoor itne khush lag rahe hai.

Sab fresh hojate hai aur bus me baith jaate hai, lunch karne ke baad sabko nind aati hai to sab so jaate hai,sirf RaYa jage hue rehte hai..Ram priya se kehta hai priya tumhe nind aarahi hai to so jao..

Priya: Nahi Mr.kapoor agar aapko aarahi hai to aap sojaiye..

Ram: Nahi priya mujhe bhi nind nahi aarahi hai waise mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha...

Priya: Ha boliya na kya baat hai...?

Ram: Priya wo mein tumse...

Priya: Ha Mr.kapoor aap mujhse kya...?

To be continue...