OS: Please Hold Me Tightly *last part* 4/5/13

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aiyathasan

@aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Dsudipa
Very emotional update 😭
i had tears in my eyes
u written very well
thx 4 PM

awww sad mat ho...
tnx yaar..😊

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aiyathasan

@aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: DJdash
continue karo na...pls...😒...
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enjoy ur life...love it...

aww dear aise sad face mat banao
end kar diya han cont kaise karu?

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sushfiza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

It is an emotional update...
Feeling bad for raya...
The best part is the unconditional love of ram n priya...
No doubt u r a briliant writer...it reflects in ur writings...
we want to read further parts of this story...
Plz cont...

Life is unpredictable...
Love makes it beautiful...

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Wow..! What can i say ? It was a beautiful ride of emotions.. Ram and priya both are made for each other and damn sure that ram will not let anything happen to priya... The ending was sadly very beautiful... Looking forward to read some more work of u like this in future alro... Loved it. Gr8 work dear...

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Beautiful end, yes its true love gives u the courage and strength to fight back and if ur loved one is with u then u can cross any hurdle in ur life, this part is absolutely touchy and emotional and with them we are also with our RaYa to fight with any problem, thanks a ton for such lovely OS

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Sorry for late reply, thanks for PM

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aiyathasan

@aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: 123fiza1
It is an emotional update...
Feeling bad for raya...
The best part is the unconditional love of ram n priya...
No doubt u r a briliant writer...it reflects in ur writings...
we want to read further parts of this story...
Plz cont...

Life is unpredictable...
Love makes it beautiful...

""No doubt u r a briliant writer...it reflects in ur writings"" rofl baby...
thx jaan always encouraging me for my work...its mean a lot to me...muaahhh

Life is unpredictable...
Love makes it beautiful... love this line..i m totally agree with you..

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sushfiza

@sushfiza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: aiyathasan
""No doubt u r a briliant writer...it reflects in ur writings"" rofl baby...
thx jaan always encouraging me for my work...its mean a lot to me...muaahhh

Life is unpredictable...
Love makes it beautiful... love this line..i m totally agree with you..

awww tum has rhi ho...
ye to writer janu k lie tha😃