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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
no doubt... u should continue this FF pls i waiting 4 nxt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
hey plz cont i do love ur way of writing very detailed and feel good words
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Posted: 12 years ago
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here comes next part

recap


Ram ne kuch kaha nahi lekin mann hi mann muskurate hue bola ki arre waah kya jamegi hum dono ki, north pole toh dusra south pole, chal beta Ram shayad yehi tere kismet main hain.





By now it was already quarter to nine, so both Ram and Priya started to leave the Club.


Coming out of the Club, Ram asked Priya how will u go?


Priya ' will take the auto and go.


Ram ' if u don't mind can I drop you?


Priya ' you don't have to bother Mr. Kapoor, I will manage.


Ram ' Ms. Sharma, your house is far away from here and it will be my pleasure.


Ab Ram thehre pakka gentleman, unhe laga Priya itne dur aayi hain toh unka farz banta hain ke who usse ghar drop kare.


Priya ' its ok Mr. Kapoor, don't bother, I will manage.


Ram ' I insist.


Now Priya has no option but to take the favour, jo usse bilkul pasand nahi hain, thoda hesitantly usne agree kiya and both went away.


Raaste me koi baat nahi huin, Ram was driving and Priya was in her thoughts.

They both reach Shama house. Priya said thank you with a smile and Ram said agli baar yaad rakhunga ke aap ko non-veg nahi pasand aur aap nahi khaate, saying such he gave a smile to her and drove away.


Priya ko thoda ajeeb laga par woh bhi muskurake lift ki taraf badti hain.


Priya ghar ke bell bajati hain aur udhar Shipraji bohot excited rehti hain, kyunki unhone dekh liya tha Priya aur Ram ko balcony se, toh jab bell bajta hain woh daudte hue jake darwazaa kholti hain.

Priya looked very tired, ek toh subah se uski ek ke baad ek classes thi phir yeh meeting aur usne aaj lunch bhi nahi kiya tha aur Club me sirf ek cup coffee pee thi usne, uske pet me chuhe daudne chahiye the lekin zyada waqt khaali pet rehne ke karan ek ajeeb sa feeling ho raha tha, isi liye jab Shipraji darwaza khuli, woh fauran andar aa gayi aur boli maa main jake fresh hoke aati hoon aap
pls mere liye ek acchhi si adrakwali chai banaiye.


Shipraji was about to ask something but after seeing her she said sure beta u go and freshn' up first, I will make the tea for you.

Darwaze ki awaz sunn ke Sudhirji aur Ayesha bhi bahar aaye the, toh Priya giving a tired smile to them headed towards the bathroom. After taking shower for 15 mins at stretch she felt better and came out to the dinning space. Sipped her favourite adrakwali chai and said to her mom, ma tum janti ho main kitna bhi thaka hua kyun na hoon tumhare haath ki bani huin yeh chai mujhe humesha fresh kar deti hain.

Shipraji who was in kitchen said tere liye kuch lau khane ke liye.


Priya ' nahi ma rehne do, bhook nahin hain abhi.


Sudhirji who was watching this asked her, beta Mr. Kapoor se baat huin teri, kaisa raha tum dono ka meeting.


Priya after some pause, papa Mr. Kapoor ek ache insaan hain, unn me ek sachhai hain jo unke aankhon se bhi jhalakti hain, apne pariwaar se bohot pyaar karte hain, itne bade businessman hain lekin koi show off nahi hain.


Shipraji who was sitting next to Sudhirji was listening to this, asked her toh tera kya faisla hain Priya?


Sudhirji ' beta kya aur ek baar milna ya baat karna chahegi.


Priya ' nahi papa


Sudhirji ' toh kya faisla hain tera?



Priya ' jo aap aur ma ko theek lage, mujhe kuchh nahi kehna.


Ayesha come and hugged her tightly and said Di main janti thi aap ko jiju pasand aayenge, Priya looked at her, as if how come u know that, tabhi Ayesha kehti hain ab toh jiju keh sakti hoon na. Priya gave a shy smile and both Sudhir and Shipraji were elated to hear this from her. Actually both liked Ram and they wanted this relationship to come up. In the meanwhile Karthik also come back
and was equally happy to hear this. Priya who was watching this, her family's happiness, prayed to God that no matter what will come and happen never make her family cry or dishearten, this is my strength, yeh sab log khush toh main bhi khush, inke khushiyon ki aage mujhe aur kuch nahin chahiye, she smiled to them with tears in her eyes.


On the other hand, Ram was driving the car and was thinking about whatever happened in the Club, he was remembering Priya's smile only, kuch toh baat hain uski smile me, itni sukoon hain, it feels good when I see her smiling. Ek ajeeb si positivity hain usme, I never felt such. Reh reh k ek hi khayal aa raha tha Ram ke dimaag me kya main khush rakh paunga Priya ko, kya woh sab kuch de
paunga jo woh deserve karti hain? lekin yeh baton ke bawajood usse sirf aur sirf Priya ka smile yaad aa raha tha, pata nahi kya hain lekin woh bhool hi nahi paa raha hain.


Aur yehi sochte sochte he comes to Kapoor Mansion. When he entered the hall he saw ma and dadi was sitting and discussing something regarding Natasha's marriage, they both look very happy, it seemed they were planning something and then
suddenly he hear they were discussing about Priya.


Hearing the footsteps both look up and saw Ram is entering.


Dadi ' oye Golu aa gaya tu, bata Priya se mila aaj?, milne janewala tha na?


Ram ' ha dadi, mila main usse.


Krishna ' toh kya faisla kiya tune?


In the meantime Rishabh and Natasha also came there and were eagerly waiting for his answer.


Ram was watching his family and their happiness and Dadi's smile, couldn't say anything at that moment.


Dadi ' tu chhup kyun hain, Priya pasand aayi na tujhe?


Ram took a deep breadth and said by looking at Dadi and Krishnaji, haan dadi, mujhe Priya pasand hain.


Everyone was so happy to hear that specially Krishnaji, she came near to him and hug him and said main bohot khush hoon Ram, main tere liye bohot khush hoon, dekhna Priya teri zindagi me dhyer sari khushiyan leke ayegi.


Natasha hugged him and said bhai am soo happy for you.


Rishabh also hugged him and teased him by saying bhai ab toh aapke azaadi gayi, ab toh bhabi ki hi raaj chalegi.


All were very happy and seeing this Ram was also happy, apni pariwaar ke khushi ke liye woh itna bada faisla liya hain, hope aage sab theek ho.


Krishna ' beeji mujhe abhi Sudhirji ko yeh batani hain, aur main chahti hoon ke jald se jald inn dono ka roka bhi ho jaye, aap ka kya khayal hain.


Dadi ' tune toh meri muuh ki baat chin li, teen mahine baad shaadi hain toh taiyyari abhi se nahi karenge toh kaise hoga, aakhir ghar me do do shaadiyan ho rahi hain, jaldi se tu laga phone.


The scene shifts to Sharma House when everyone was preparing for dinner, bas last minute preparations chal rahe the, toh tabhi phone bajta hain aur Priya uthati hain


Priya ' hello


Krishna ' main Krishna Kapoor baat kar rahi hoon, kya main Sudhirji se baat kar sakti hoon?


Priya ' namaaste Auntyji, main Priya, aap kaise hain? dadi kaisi hain, aur baki sab?


Krsihna ' namaaste beta, hum sab theek hain, tum kaisi ho?


Priya ' main achhi hoon, aap ek min rukiye papa ko bulati hoon


Next Sudhirji was on line


Sudhir ' namaaste samdhan ji, kaisi hain?


Krishna ' hum sab ache hain, jee aap ko k baat batane ke liye phone kiya tha.


Sudhir ' jee kahiye


Krishna ' main roke ki baat pakki karne ke liye phone kiya tha, humein Priya pasand hain.


Sudhir ' humari taraf se bhi baat pakki hain, aap roke ki tareekh nikaliye.


Krishna ' beti ki rishta bohot bohot mubarak ho aapko Samdhiji.


Sudhir ' aap ko bhi


Krishna ' toh main Panditji se baat kar ke roke ki tareekh nikal leti hoon aur phir aap se baat karti hoon.


Sudhir ' jee theek hain


Both hang the phone.

Sudhirji bohot khush the, phone rakh kar bole unhe yeh rishta manzoor hain. Krishnaji roke ki baat kar rahi thi.


On hearing this Shipraji had tears in her eyes and she hug Priya tightly, after all ma hain na, beti ki khushi me bhi aansoo chalak hi jati hain aur yeh toh shaadi hain, sab ma baap ka sabse bada armaan hota hain apni nanhi si gudiya ki doli uthte hue dekhna, usse dulhan ke roop me dekhna, aaj sabse bada armaan pura hone jaa raha hain unka, sabse badi baat Kapoor khandaan ke saath rishta judne jaa raha hain, Ram Kapoor jaisa damad milne wala hain unhe, woh bappa ka jitna bhi shukriya ada kare kam hi hoga.


Everyone was very happy to hear that. Priya ko abhi bhi vishwaas nahi ho raha hain ke uska rishta THE RAM KAPOOR ke saath judne jaa raha hain, bas use sirf unka bacchon jaisi smile yaad aa rahi hain jo Mr. Kapoor ke face pe tha jab woh pastries khane waqt diya tha.


Sudhirji came up and hug Priya and said mubarak ho beta.


Priya had tears in her eyes hearing this.


After the dinner in both the houses and after all retiring to their respective rooms, Ram and Priya were also in their rooms. The scene splits Ram was sitting on his favourite chair and Priya was in the balcony gazing to the stars, both were in their deep thoughts.


Ram was thinking, kya maine sahi kiya, kyun main bhool nahi paa raha hoon, kya Priya mujhe deserve karti hain? woh ek achhi ladki hain, samajhdaar hain sabse badi baat woh gharwaalon ki pasand hain, lekin kya main iss umar me adjust kar paunga, woh saari khushiyan de paunga?


On the other Priya gazing to the stars was thinking zindagi kitni ajeeb hoti hain, jab khushiyan deti hain toh aankhon me ansoo bhi le aati hain, chalak jati hain khushi ke mare, main nahi janti kal mere liye kya leke aane wala hain, bas sirf itna janti hoon jaisa bhi hain main usse accept karne ke liye taiyyar hoon, mujhe nahi pata iss shaadi ka kya anjam hoga lekin main isse puri imaandari se
nibhaungi, main kabhi bhi Mr. Kapoor ka saath nahi chhodungi.


Both were in their own world, kahin kashmakash toh kahin aane wali zindagi ke liye aapne
aap se wada
, yehi sochte sochte they both drifted into sleep.


After reading all ur comments I am updating but I still think that am not upto all of your expectations coz am not getting enough feed, guys please achha lage yah bura comment karo, mujhe tabhi samajh me ayega ke main age likhu ya nahi, and if u guyz like it then please hit the "LIKE" button, i will wait anxiously for all of ur comments coz that is valuable for me, hope u all enjoy reading this, and remember next part will be updated if u all comment on this


Edited by jineejiggs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
awesome update dear u r so gud writer
plz cont waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
shaadi muhabaaraak😆 band baja baaraat ki taiyraii karooo😳

loved it raya romance thought stare love blush omg i am blushing here.. 😆
continue sooon .. ab jaldi shaadi karwadooo


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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
  • awesome update dear
  • plz cont waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
aisa mat kaho...pls update...i love it loads❤️
just superb
very nice description of raya and their feelings...love it😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Totally loved it
Chalo shaddi fix ho gyi now they re doing this for family soon it will be turned into a beautifull relationship
Continue soon lits very good yar so dont think like that
Thanx for pm
Edited by vironikajain - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
I loved it. Very nice update. Waiting for next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
wow dono raji ho gaye shadi k liye 👏fantastic update looking frwd d nxt pls update soon thx 4 PM
Edited by Dsudipa - 12 years ago

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